Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMN1772J1RHGRHHKFT4S0WC

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Duration:
11.1s
Cost:
$0.000224

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp stone and something older—something that clung to the air like the scent of old parchment left too long in a damp cellar. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the strap of her leather satchel, her sharp jaw set in a line of quiet concentration as she stepped over the jagged remnants of a collapsed support beam. The flickering glow of her flashlight cut through the dark, illuminating the scene before her: a pool of blackened liquid spread across the cracked concrete, its edges sizzling where it touched the metal grates. The air hummed with an unnatural static, like the moment before a storm breaks. Eva Kowalski stood near the edge of the pool, her round glasses reflecting the sickly yellow light of the emergency lanterns. She tucked a strand of curly red hair behind her left ear, her freckled complexion pale beneath the grime. "You’re sure this is the right place?" she asked, her voice tight. "The description said *abandoned*, not *collapsed*." Harlow didn’t look away from the scene. "The description was accurate. Just not recent." She crouched, running her gloved fingers along the edge of the pool. The liquid wasn’t water. It didn’t even look like blood—too thick, too dark, with a sheen that caught the light like oil. "And it’s still moving." Eva exhaled sharply. "Supernatural residue?" "Or something worse." Harlow’s gaze flicked to the scattered debris around them—shattered glass, a half-burned ledger, a single brass compass casing with verdigris creeping up its edges like rust. The Veil Compass. She recognized it instantly, though she’d never seen one in person. "This wasn’t an accident." Eva hesitated. "Then what was it?" Harlow didn’t answer right away. She stood, brushing the dust from her knees, and turned to her colleague, a younger detective named Reece, who stood near the entrance of the station, arms crossed. "You called this in?" Reece shifted uncomfortably. "The body was found in the next district. Thought it might be related." Harlow’s eyes narrowed. "And?" "And the coroner’s already here," Reece said, gesturing toward the distant glow of a vehicle’s headlights. "They’re waiting for us to clear the scene." Harlow ignored him, her focus returning to the compass. She picked it up, turning it over in her palm. The sigils etched into its face were familiar—protective, but not in the way she’d seen before. These weren’t wards meant to keep something *out*. They were meant to keep something *in*. "This wasn’t stolen," she murmured. "It was *taken*." Eva frowned. "By who?" "Someone who knew what it was." Harlow’s mind raced. The Veil Market was a black market, yes, but it wasn’t just about goods. It was about *knowledge*. About things people didn’t want the rest of the world to know. And if someone had taken this compass, they weren’t just looking for a tool. They were looking for a *way in*. Reece cleared his throat. "Detective, we should—" "Watch this." Harlow didn’t wait for permission. She stepped closer to the pool of blackened liquid, her flashlight cutting through the darkness. The liquid rippled, and for a second, she thought she saw something move beneath the surface—something dark, something *wrong*. Then it was gone, swallowed by the shifting darkness. Eva’s breath hitched. "That’s not possible." "Isn’t it?" Harlow’s voice was low, dangerous. She turned to Reece. "You said the body was found in the next district. Show me." Reece led the way, his boots crunching on the broken glass and debris. The body lay on a stretcher, covered in a sheet, but the stench of it was unmistakable—metallic, sickly sweet, like something had been *cooked* in the flesh. Harlow pulled back the sheet. The man’s face was unrecognizable. His skin had been peeled back in places, revealing the pale, glistening tissue beneath. But it wasn’t just that. His eyes were gone. Completely. As if something had *taken* them. Eva gagged, turning away. Harlow’s stomach twisted. She crouched beside the stretcher, her fingers brushing the man’s wrist. No pulse. No breath. But the skin was still warm. Too warm. "He didn’t die here," she said quietly. "He was brought here." Reece swallowed. "Then who—" "Doesn’t matter." Harlow stood, her gaze sweeping over the scene. "What matters is *why*." She turned back to the pool of blackened liquid. The liquid had spread farther now, creeping along the cracks in the concrete like ink in water. And beneath it, just for a second, she saw something else—a shape, dark and shifting, like a shadow given form. Eva’s voice was barely above a whisper. "Detective, what is that?" Harlow didn’t answer. She was already moving, her boots splashing through the liquid as she approached the edge of the pool. The air grew thicker, heavier, like breathing through water. And then she saw it—the entrance to something. A rift, just like the needle of the compass had promised. A gateway to another place, another time. And it was *open*. She reached out, her fingers brushing the air just above the surface. The liquid hissed where it touched her skin, but she didn’t pull away. She could feel it now—the pull of the other side, the whisper of something ancient and hungry. "Detective?" Eva’s voice was urgent, but Harlow barely heard her. She was too busy watching as the rift pulsed, as the darkness within it seemed to *breathe*. Then the lights flickered. The emergency lanterns died, plunging them into darkness. The only light came from the rift itself, a sickly green glow that cast long, shifting shadows across the walls of the abandoned station. Harlow turned to Eva, her eyes wide. "We’re not alone." And then she heard it—the sound of footsteps, slow and deliberate, approaching from the darkness.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
68.8474% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount963
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"sharply"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.0789% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount963
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"glistening"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicked"
2"glistening"
3"footsteps"
4"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean28.85
std24.1
cv0.835
sampleLengths
0109
158
252
35
447
56
637
716
84
924
1058
114
1260
137
1450
156
1623
1745
1835
194
2037
214
2214
2346
2411
2556
264
2742
2827
294
3032
3110
3215
92.6829% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences82
matches
0"were meant"
1"was gone"
2"been *cooked"
3"been peeled"
4"were gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs136
matches
0"were looking"
89.1796% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount835
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"unmistakable—metallic, sickly sweet, like"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.045508982035928146
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01437125748502994
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean9.43
std7.46
cv0.791
sampleLengths
029
132
234
314
421
519
612
76
87
919
104
1118
124
133
142
1529
163
1711
184
192
204
215
2228
234
243
2513
263
271
2816
298
309
3110
3216
338
347
355
363
372
382
399
4014
414
4212
4314
447
454
463
477
4815
4919
45.8746% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.31683168316831684
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners32
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Reece said, gesturing toward the distant glow of a vehicle’s headlights (say, gesture)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she said quietly (say quietly)"
82.0390%