Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMN2Y5SKYPRGXK064F2RGPN

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Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he owned the place, one platinum eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his. The scent of bergamot and something darker, something like smoke and old parchment, curled into the flat before he did. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, darted between his polished Oxfords and vanished into the labyrinth of bookshelves. Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the door. “You’ve got to be kidding me.” Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—flickered over her, slow and deliberate, from the messy bun holding her black hair in place to the flour dusting her jeans. “Bonjour, *chérie*. You look… domestic.” She didn’t move. “What are you doing here?” “Can’t a man visit an old friend?” He straightened, tapping his ivory-handled cane against the threshold. The blade inside whispered against the wood, a sound only she would recognize. “Cut the act. We’re not friends.” A muscle in his jaw twitched. “No? Then what are we, *ma belle*?” The question hung between them, heavy with everything they’d left unsaid. Rory stepped back, letting the door swing wider. “Get in before the whole street hears you.” Lucien smirked, but there was no humor in it. He stepped inside, his tailored charcoal suit brushing against the stacks of books and scrolls that cluttered every available surface. The flat smelled of chai and old paper, of Eva’s incense and the faint metallic tang of Rory’s own frustration. She shut the door, engaging all three deadbolts with sharp, precise clicks. “Eva’s not here.” “I know.” He turned, his cane resting against the back of the sofa. “I came to see you.” Rory crossed her arms. “Why?” “Because you’ve been avoiding me.” “I’ve been busy.” “Busy delivering dumplings?” His gaze flicked to the Golden Empress logo on her shirt. “It’s honest work.” “And you’re an honest woman. How… quaint.” He picked up a scroll from the coffee table, unrolling it with a flick of his wrist. His fingers stilled when he saw the sigils inked across the parchment. “Eva’s been researching again.” “She’s thorough.” “She’s reckless.” He set the scroll down with more force than necessary. “And so are you, if you’re helping her.” Rory snatched the scroll away, rolling it up with sharp, jerky motions. “I don’t need a lecture from you.” “No? Then what do you need, Rory?” His voice dropped, low and rough. “Because I’ve spent the last three months wondering why you walked away without a word.” Her breath hitched. “You know why.” “Do I?” He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faint scar along his jawline, the one he’d gotten the night they met. “Or do I just think I do?” Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. She could lie. She could tell him she’d moved on, that she didn’t care, that she’d never cared. But the words died on her tongue. Lucien’s amber eye burned into her. “You left because of what I am.” “No.” The denial was automatic, but it sounded weak even to her own ears. “Then why?” His hand lifted, fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—the one from the night Evan had grabbed her too hard, the night Lucien had found her bleeding in that alley behind Silas’ bar. His touch was gentle, but his voice was steel. “Was it the blood? The fire? The fact that I’m not human?” Rory jerked her hand away. “It was the secrets, Lucien. The lies. The way you looked at me like I was something fragile, something you had to protect.” “Because you *were* fragile!” The words exploded out of him, raw and unguarded. “You still are, whether you want to admit it or not.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “That’s rich, coming from you. The great Lucien Moreau, who never lets anyone see the cracks.” His expression shuttered. “You saw them.” “And then you pushed me away.” Silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating. Lucien’s jaw worked, like he was chewing on words he couldn’t bring himself to say. Finally, he exhaled, long and slow. “I didn’t push you away. I let you go.” “Same thing.” “No.” His voice was quiet now, almost lost beneath the hum of the fridge and the distant wail of a siren outside. “It’s not.” Rory’s chest ached. She wanted to scream. She wanted to hit him. She wanted to press her mouth to his and pretend none of it mattered. Instead, she turned away, busying herself with straightening the already-straight stacks of books on the table. “Why are you here, Lucien? Really?” He didn’t answer right away. When she finally glanced back, he was watching her with an intensity that made her skin prickle. “Because I need your help.” She stilled. “With what?” “There’s a job. A big one.” He reached into his jacket, pulling out a folded piece of paper. “And I can’t do it without you.” Rory didn’t take the paper. “You have a whole network of people at your disposal. Why me?” “Because you’re the only one who’s ever told me no.” His lips quirked, but there was no humor in it. “And because you’re the only one I trust.” She wanted to refuse. She wanted to throw him out and slam the door and pretend she’d never seen him again. But the way he was looking at her—like she was the only thing in the room that mattered—made her heart stutter. “What’s the job?” she asked, hating herself a little for the way her voice wavered. Lucien’s smile was slow, triumphant. “I’ll tell you over dinner.” Rory opened her mouth to protest, but he was already moving toward the door, his cane tapping against the floorboards. “I’ll pick you up at eight. Wear something nice.” “Lucien—” He glanced back, his heterochromatic eyes gleaming. “Don’t keep me waiting, *chérie*.” And then he was gone, leaving Rory standing in the middle of Eva’s cluttered flat, her pulse roaring in her ears and the taste of bergamot lingering on her tongue.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.491
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1015
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1015
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"wavered"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"roaring"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"flickered"
2"flicked"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"intensity"
6"wavered"
7"gleaming"
8"roaring"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords5
totalWords1010
ratio0.005
matches
0"chérie"
1"ma belle"
2"were"
3"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount697
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Lucien7
Moreau1
Eva3
Oxfords1
Golden1
Empress1
Evan1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.639
windowScore0.833
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like smoke and old parchment, curl"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1010
matches(empty)
65.66% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"scrolls that cluttered"
1"on, that she care, that she’d"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean20.61
std14.69
cv0.712
sampleLengths
070
115
232
38
429
56
613
727
849
915
1018
115
125
133
1414
153
1640
172
1820
1919
2028
216
2232
2331
2413
2514
2657
2728
2824
2921
306
316
3237
332
3424
3526
3622
3727
384
3925
4017
4128
4242
4315
4410
4529
461
4712
4830
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"was gone"
43.75% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was watching"
1"was looking"
2"was already moving"
27.42% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences99
ratio0.04
matches
0"The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he owned the place, one platinum eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his."
1"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—flickered over her, slow and deliberate, from the messy bun holding her black hair in place to the flour dusting her jeans."
2"“Then why?” His hand lifted, fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—the one from the night Evan had grabbed her too hard, the night Lucien had found her bleeding in that alley behind Silas’ bar."
3"But the way he was looking at her—like she was the only thing in the room that mattered—made her heart stutter."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount536
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.024253731343283583
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005597014925373134
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean10.2
std7.46
cv0.731
sampleLengths
035
120
215
39
46
527
65
73
85
916
1013
116
126
137
1411
158
168
179
1820
1920
2012
213
2213
235
244
251
265
273
2814
293
3024
3112
324
332
3412
358
3612
377
3813
3915
403
413
4225
437
446
453
4615
477
486
497
55.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.37373737373737376
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Finally, he exhaled, long and"
1"Instead, she turned away, busying"
ratio0.034
23.39% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences59
matches
0"She didn’t move."
1"He straightened, tapping his ivory-handled"
2"He stepped inside, his tailored"
3"She shut the door, engaging"
4"He turned, his cane resting"
5"His gaze flicked to the"
6"He picked up a scroll"
7"His fingers stilled when he"
8"He set the scroll down"
9"His voice dropped, low and"
10"Her breath hitched."
11"He stepped closer, close enough"
12"She could lie."
13"She could tell him she’d"
14"His hand lifted, fingers brushing"
15"His touch was gentle, but"
16"She laughed, sharp and bitter."
17"His expression shuttered."
18"His voice was quiet now,"
19"She wanted to scream."
ratio0.492
10.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences59
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"The scent of bergamot and"
2"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, darted between"
3"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
4"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"She didn’t move."
6"He straightened, tapping his ivory-handled"
7"The blade inside whispered against"
8"A muscle in his jaw"
9"The question hung between them,"
10"Rory stepped back, letting the"
11"Lucien smirked, but there was"
12"He stepped inside, his tailored"
13"The flat smelled of chai"
14"She shut the door, engaging"
15"He turned, his cane resting"
16"Rory crossed her arms."
17"His gaze flicked to the"
18"He picked up a scroll"
19"His fingers stilled when he"
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory opened her mouth to protest, but he was already moving toward the door, his cane tapping against the floorboards."
1"And then he was gone, leaving Rory standing in the middle of Eva’s cluttered flat, her pulse roaring in her ears and the taste of bergamot lingering on her tong…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He turned, his cane resting against the back of the sofa"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.038
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.5945%