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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMN2Y5SKYPRGXK064F2RGPN
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Model:
Mistral Large 2
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.010082
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he owned the place, one platinum eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his. The scent of bergamot and something darker, something like smoke and old parchment, curled into the flat before he did. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, darted between his polished Oxfords and vanished into the labyrinth of bookshelves. Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the door. “You’ve got to be kidding me.” Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—
flickered
over her, slow and deliberate, from the messy bun holding her black hair in place to the flour dusting her jeans. “Bonjour, *chérie*. You look… domestic.” She didn’t move. “What are you doing here?” “Can’t a man visit an old friend?” He straightened, tapping his ivory-handled cane against the threshold. The blade inside whispered against the wood, a sound only she would recognize. “Cut the act. We’re not friends.” A muscle in his jaw twitched. “No? Then what are we, *ma belle*?” The question hung between them, heavy with everything they’d left unsaid. Rory stepped back, letting the door swing wider. “Get in before the whole street hears you.” Lucien smirked, but there was no humor in it. He stepped inside, his tailored charcoal suit brushing against the stacks of books and
scrolls that cluttered
every available surface. The flat smelled of chai and old paper, of Eva’s incense and the faint metallic tang of Rory’s own frustration. She shut the door, engaging all three deadbolts with sharp, precise clicks. “Eva’s not here.” “I know.” He turned, his cane resting against the back of the sofa. “I came to see you.” Rory crossed her arms. “Why?” “Because you’ve been avoiding me.” “I’ve been busy.” “Busy delivering dumplings?” His gaze
flicked
to the Golden Empress logo on her shirt. “It’s honest work.” “And you’re an honest woman. How… quaint.” He picked up a scroll from the coffee table, unrolling it with a flick of his wrist. His fingers stilled when he saw the sigils inked across the parchment. “Eva’s been researching again.” “She’s thorough.” “She’s reckless.” He set the scroll down with more force than necessary. “And so are you, if you’re helping her.” Rory snatched the scroll away, rolling it up with sharp, jerky motions. “I don’t need a lecture from you.” “No? Then what do you need, Rory?” His voice dropped, low and rough. “Because I’ve spent the last three months wondering why you walked away without a word.” Her breath hitched. “You know why.” “Do I?” He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faint scar along his jawline, the one he’d gotten the night they met. “Or do I just think I do?” Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. She could lie. She could tell him she’d moved on, that she didn’t care, that she’d never cared. But the words died on her tongue. Lucien’s amber eye burned into her. “You left because of what I am.” “No.” The denial was automatic, but it sounded weak even to her own ears. “Then why?” His hand lifted, fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—the one from the night Evan had grabbed her too hard, the night Lucien had found her bleeding in that alley behind Silas’ bar. His touch was gentle, but his voice was steel. “Was it the blood? The fire? The fact that I’m not human?” Rory jerked her hand away. “It was the secrets, Lucien. The lies. The way you looked at me like I was something fragile, something you had to protect.” “Because you *were* fragile!” The words exploded out of him, raw and unguarded. “You still are, whether you want to admit it or not.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “That’s rich, coming from you. The great Lucien Moreau, who never lets anyone see the cracks.” His expression shuttered. “You saw them.” “And then you pushed me away.” Silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating. Lucien’s jaw worked, like he was chewing on words he couldn’t bring himself to say. Finally, he exhaled, long and slow. “I didn’t push you away. I let you go.” “Same thing.” “No.” His voice was quiet now, almost lost beneath the hum of the fridge and the distant wail of a siren outside. “It’s not.” Rory’s chest ached. She wanted to scream. She wanted to hit him. She wanted to press her mouth to his and pretend none of it mattered. Instead, she turned away, busying herself with straightening the already-straight stacks of books on the table. “Why are you here, Lucien? Really?” He didn’t answer right away. When she finally glanced back, he
was watching
her with an intensity that made her skin prickle. “Because I need your help.” She stilled. “With what?” “There’s a job. A big one.” He reached into his jacket, pulling out a folded piece of paper. “And I can’t do it without you.” Rory didn’t take the paper. “You have a whole network of people at your disposal. Why me?” “Because you’re the only one who’s ever told me no.” His lips quirked, but there was no humor in it. “And because you’re the only one I trust.” She wanted to refuse. She wanted to throw him out and slam the door and pretend she’d never seen him again. But the way he
was looking
at her—like she was the only thing in the room that mattered—made her heart stutter. “What’s the job?” she asked, hating herself a little for the way her voice
wavered
. Lucien’s smile was slow, triumphant. “I’ll tell you over dinner.” Rory opened her mouth to protest, but he was already moving toward the door, his cane tapping against the floorboards. “I’ll pick you up at eight. Wear something nice.” “Lucien—” He glanced back, his heterochromatic eyes
gleaming
. “Don’t keep me waiting, *chérie*.” And then he
was gone
, leaving Rory standing in the middle of Eva’s cluttered flat, her pulse roaring in her ears and the taste of bergamot lingering on her tongue.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
90.1768%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1018
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
60.7073%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1018
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"gleaming"
count
1
3
word
"wavered"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"flicked"
2
"gleaming"
3
"wavered"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
60
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
60
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
99
matches
0
"scrolls that cluttered"
1
"on, that she care, that she’d"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
49
mean
20.61
std
14.69
cv
0.712
sampleLengths
0
70
1
15
2
32
3
8
4
29
5
6
6
13
7
27
8
49
9
15
10
18
11
5
12
5
13
3
14
14
15
3
16
40
17
2
18
20
19
19
20
28
21
6
22
32
23
31
24
13
25
14
26
57
27
28
28
24
29
21
30
6
31
6
32
37
33
2
34
24
35
26
36
22
37
27
38
4
39
25
40
17
41
28
42
42
43
15
44
10
45
29
46
1
47
12
48
30
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
60
matches
0
"was gone"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
128
matches
0
"was watching"
1
"was looking"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
707
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
23
adverbRatio
0.03253182461103253
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.005657708628005658
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
99
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
99
mean
10.2
std
7.46
cv
0.731
sampleLengths
0
35
1
20
2
15
3
9
4
6
5
27
6
5
7
3
8
5
9
16
10
13
11
6
12
6
13
7
14
11
15
8
16
8
17
9
18
20
19
20
20
12
21
3
22
13
23
5
24
4
25
1
26
5
27
3
28
14
29
3
30
24
31
12
32
4
33
2
34
12
35
8
36
12
37
7
38
13
39
15
40
3
41
3
42
25
43
7
44
6
45
3
46
15
47
7
48
6
49
7
55.2189%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
7
diversityRatio
0.37373737373737376
totalSentences
99
uniqueOpeners
37
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
94.4766%