| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.81 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 78.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1137 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "sharply" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1137 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "glint" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "standard" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "quickened" | | 10 | "wavered" | | 11 | "raced" | | 12 | "loomed" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1128 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Hidden." | | 1 | "Veil." | | 2 | "could" | | 3 | "there." | | 4 | "rift." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.49% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 878 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.05 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 18 | | Camden | 1 | | Patel | 17 | | Morris | 3 | | Veil | 3 | | Market | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Patel" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Market" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.475 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like rusted iron left too long in" | | 1 | "looked like the usual drug paraphernalia" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 24 | | std | 18.04 | | cv | 0.752 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 48 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 6 |
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| 83.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "were curled" | | 1 | "been pulled" | | 2 | "was torn" | | 3 | "were bought" | | 4 | "were cracked" | | 5 | "was carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | 0 | "was crumbling" | | 1 | "was already moving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t just any underpass—this was a place the city had forgotten, a place where the air hummed with the wrong kind of energy." | | 1 | "The empty vials, the coins—none of it looked like the usual drug paraphernalia." | | 2 | "“Not the kind you’re thinking of.” Quinn’s torchlight flickered over a symbol carved into the stall’s wooden leg—a circle with three intersecting lines." | | 3 | "The victim’s shirt was torn at the collar, revealing a faint mark on his skin—a bruise in the shape of a handprint." | | 4 | "Quinn’s torchlight caught something else—a scrap of paper tucked beneath the stall." | | 5 | "The compass, the symbols, the body—it all fit." | | 6 | "She’d been so close, three years ago, before Morris had—" | | 7 | "She turned back to the body, her torchlight catching the glint of something else—a small bone token, half-buried beneath the victim’s sleeve." | | 8 | "She could feel it—the pull of something beyond, something that didn’t belong in the world she knew." |
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| 97.56% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 888 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.04279279279279279 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010135135135135136 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 9.48 | | std | 6.35 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 45.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.2689075630252101 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t just any underpass—this" | | 1 | "He stood near a makeshift" | | 2 | "His torchlight flickered over a" | | 3 | "He gestured to the body" | | 4 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 5 | "She picked it up, turning" | | 6 | "She’d seen enough oddities in" | | 7 | "She stood, her gaze sweeping" | | 8 | "She’d seen it before, in" | | 9 | "She’d seen marks like that" | | 10 | "She pulled it free, unfolding" | | 11 | "she said quietly" | | 12 | "She knew what it was." | | 13 | "She’d been chasing it for" | | 14 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 15 | "She’d been so close, three" | | 16 | "She cut the thought off." | | 17 | "She turned back to the" | | 18 | "She pulled it free, holding" | | 19 | "It was carved with the" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 7.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 2 | "The beam of her torch" | | 3 | "It wasn’t just any underpass—this" | | 4 | "He stood near a makeshift" | | 5 | "His torchlight flickered over a" | | 6 | "Quinn adjusted the worn leather" | | 7 | "Patel exhaled through his nose." | | 8 | "He gestured to the body" | | 9 | "Quinn crouched, her knees protesting" | | 10 | "The victim’s fingers were curled" | | 11 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 12 | "Quinn’s torchlight caught the glint" | | 13 | "A small brass compass, its" | | 14 | "She picked it up, turning" | | 15 | "The needle spun wildly, then" | | 16 | "She’d seen enough oddities in" | | 17 | "The compass had a patina" | | 18 | "She stood, her gaze sweeping" | | 19 | "The empty vials, the coins—none" |
| | ratio | 0.905 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Patel followed her gaze to the far wall, where the tiles were cracked and discolored, as if something had pressed against them from the other side." | | 1 | "She was already moving, her torchlight cutting through the darkness as she followed the compass’s unerring point." |
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| 36.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "said DS Patel, his voice echoing in the cavernous space" | | 1 | "Patel said, but his voice lacked conviction" | | 2 | "Patel said, his voice tight" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.238 | | leniency | 0.476 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |