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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMN4KX3BZ7GK513SRGJ34W0
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Model:
Mistral Large 2
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
32.0s
Cost:
$0.012146
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The door swung open before Rory could knock a second time. Eva stood there, her dark curls piled into a messy bun, a smudge of ink on her cheekbone. The scent of cardamom tea and old paper spilled into the hallway. Behind her, Ptolemy slinked between her ankles, tail flicking like a metronome set to suspicion. "Rory?" Eva blinked, then stepped back as if the threshold had
suddenly
become electrified. "What are you—? I mean, come in. Obviously. But what are you doing here?" Rory hesitated, her fingers tightening around the strap of her messenger bag. The last time she’d been here, she’d left in a hurry, Eva’s voice sharp with accusation cutting through the hum of the curry house below. That had been three months ago. Three months of silence, of unanswered texts, of pretending she didn’t miss the way Eva’s laughter sounded like wind chimes in a storm. "I need to talk to you," Rory said, stepping inside. The door clicked shut behind her, the three deadbolts sliding home with a series of metallic snicks. The flat was exactly as she remembered—books stacked like Jenga towers, scrolls unfurled across the coffee table, the air thick with the scent of aged parchment and something faintly electric, like ozone after a lightning strike. Eva’s research. Always her research. Eva crossed her arms, the sleeves of her oversized jumper slipping down to reveal the silver bangles on her wrists. "You could’ve called." "I did. Twice." "Right." Eva’s gaze
flicked
away, landing on Ptolemy, who was now perched on the arm of the sofa, yellow eyes fixed on Rory. "I’ve been busy." Rory exhaled through her nose. "Busy. Sure." She dropped her bag onto the floor, the thud muffled by the layers of rugs. "Look, I wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t important. I need your help." Eva’s laugh was sharp, bitter. "Of course. Because that’s what this is about, isn’t it? What you need." Rory’s jaw tightened. "That’s not fair." "Isn’t it?" Eva stepped closer, her voice dropping to a hiss. "You show up after three months of radio silence, and
suddenly
I’m supposed to drop everything? Forgive and forget?" "I never asked you to forget." "Then what do you want, Rory?" Eva threw her hands up. "An apology? Fine. I’m sorry I called you a coward. I’m sorry I said you ran away. Happy?" Rory’s chest ached. "I didn’t come here for that." "Then why did you come?" Eva’s voice cracked, just a little. "Because I can’t do this again. I can’t be the one you run to when things get hard, only to be left behind when it’s convenient." Rory’s fingers curled into fists at her sides. "You think this is convenient? You think I *wanted* to come here?" Eva’s eyes flashed. "I don’t know what you want. That’s the problem." The air between them was thick, charged. Rory could feel the
weight
of every
unspoken
word, every argument they’d had, every night she’d lain awake wondering if she’d ruined the best thing she’d ever had. She swallowed hard. "I want you to listen to me. That’s all. Just listen." Eva stared at her for a long moment, then exhaled
sharply
. "Fine. Talk." Rory opened her mouth, but the words stuck in her throat. How could she explain? How could she tell Eva that she’d spent the last three months drowning in her own head, that she’d taken the job at Golden Empress because it was the only thing that made sense, that she’d avoided this flat, this street, this *person* because being near her hurt too much? Instead, she reached into her bag and pulled out the envelope. Eva’s
eyes narrowed
. "What’s that?" "Something I found." Rory handed it over. "It was in my bag when I got home yesterday. No note, no explanation. Just this." Eva took the envelope, her fingers brushing Rory’s. A spark, like static. She turned it over, her breath catching when she saw the wax seal—a serpent coiled around a dagger. "This is Lucien’s mark." Rory nodded. "I know." Eva’s gaze snapped up. "You went to *him*?" "I didn’t have a choice." Eva’s laugh was hollow. "There’s always a choice, Rory. You just don’t like the ones that require you to stay." Rory’s patience snapped. "That’s not fair, Eva. You know why I left. You know what Evan was like." "I know you used me as an excuse to run." Rory flinched. "That’s not—" "Isn’t it?" Eva’s voice was raw. "You were scared. I get it. But you didn’t even *fight* for us. You just… left." Rory’s throat burned. "I was trying to protect you." "By breaking my heart?" Eva’s eyes glistened. "Do you have any idea what it was like, watching you walk
out that door
? Knowing you were choosing *him* over me?" Rory’s breath hitched. "I wasn’t choosing him. I was choosing *survival*." Eva shook her head, her curls tumbling loose from the bun. "That’s the thing, Rory. You don’t get to decide what’s best for me. You don’t get to decide when I’m in danger, or when I’m not strong enough to handle it. That’s *my* choice." Rory’s hands
trembled
. "I know. And I’m sorry. I’m so sorry, Eva. But I need you now. Not as a crutch. Not as an escape. I need you because you’re the only one who can help me figure out what the hell this is." She gestured to the envelope. "Because if Lucien’s involved, it’s bad. And I can’t do this alone." Eva was quiet for a long moment, her fingers tracing the wax seal. Then,
softly
: "You’re not alone." Rory’s heart stuttered. "Eva—" Eva held up a hand. "I’m not saying I forgive you. Not yet. But I’ll help you. Because that’s what we do. Even when it hurts." Rory exhaled, her shoulders sagging with relief. "Thank you." Eva’s gaze
flicked
up, her dark eyes searching Rory’s face. "But you have to promise me something." "Anything." "No more running." Rory’s breath caught. "I can’t promise that." Eva’s expression darkened. "Then we’re done here." Rory reached for her, her fingers brushing Eva’s wrist. "I can’t promise I won’t run. But I can promise I’ll always come back. To you." Eva’s breath hitched. For a moment, neither of them moved. Then,
slowly
, Eva’s hand turned, her fingers lacing with Rory’s. "You’d better." Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. She stepped closer, her free hand lifting to brush a stray curl from Eva’s face. "I missed you." Eva’s lips parted, her breath warm against Rory’s skin. "I missed you too." And then, before Rory could second-guess herself, she leaned in and kissed her. Eva stiffened for half a second—then melted into it, her hands fisting in Rory’s jacket as she pulled her closer. The envelope fell to the floor, forgotten. Ptolemy yowled and bolted under the sofa. When they finally broke apart, Eva’s cheeks
were flushed
, her lips swollen. She rested her forehead against Rory’s, her breath coming fast. "We’re going to regret this in the morning." Rory smiled, her thumb brushing Eva’s cheekbone. "Probably." Eva huffed a laugh, then pulled back just enough to meet Rory’s eyes. "But not tonight." "Not tonight," Rory agreed. And for the first time in months, the future didn’t feel like something to run from. It felt like something to fight for.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
59.2170%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1226
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
1
3
adverb
"suddenly"
count
2
highlights
0
"sharply"
1
"slowly"
2
"softly"
3
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
59.2170%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1226
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"flicked"
count
2
1
word
"trembled"
count
1
2
word
"unspoken"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicked"
1
"trembled"
2
"unspoken"
3
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
77
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
77
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
124
matches
0
"out that door"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
56
mean
21.82
std
17.69
cv
0.81
sampleLengths
0
56
1
28
2
66
3
68
4
23
5
3
6
26
7
35
8
18
9
6
10
30
11
6
12
29
13
9
14
37
15
20
16
12
17
49
18
13
19
76
20
5
21
23
22
34
23
4
24
8
25
5
26
20
27
18
28
10
29
4
30
22
31
9
32
29
33
11
34
45
35
61
36
18
37
4
38
26
39
9
40
17
41
1
42
3
43
7
44
7
45
25
46
22
47
24
48
13
49
13
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
77
matches
0
"were flushed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
143
matches
(empty)
95.6071%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
733
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.045020463847203276
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.010914051841746248
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
124
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
124
mean
9.85
std
8.53
cv
0.866
sampleLengths
0
11
1
18
2
12
3
15
4
14
5
14
6
12
7
25
8
6
9
23
10
10
11
17
12
36
13
2
14
3
15
20
16
3
17
3
18
23
19
3
20
5
21
17
22
13
23
5
24
13
25
3
26
3
27
11
28
19
29
6
30
11
31
18
32
3
33
6
34
11
35
26
36
8
37
12
38
3
39
9
40
7
41
28
42
3
43
11
44
11
45
2
46
11
47
4
48
50
49
11
51.3441%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.3225806451612903
totalSentences
124
uniqueOpeners
40
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Rory said, stepping inside (say, step)"
1
"Rory agreed (agree)"
86.1991%