| 100.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | |
| 75.5501% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 818 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.1002% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 818 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "unspoken" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "etched" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 25.41 | | std | 22.11 | | cv | 0.87 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 11 |
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| 89.6175% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "been supposed" | | 2 | "were curled" | | 3 | "were blackened, been *burned" |
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| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t pointing" | | 1 | "wasn’t pointing" | | 2 | "was pointing" | | 3 | "was coming" | | 4 | "was pointing" | | 5 | "was waiting" |
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| 100.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 643 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.03110419906687403 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00933125972006221 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 9.91 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.718 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 41.0569% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3048780487804878 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice cut through the gloom (a voice cut through the gloom)" | | 1 | "Morris said, voice low (say, voice)" | | 2 | "he said, voice breaking (say, voice breaking)" | | 3 | "she said, her voice steady despite the way her fingers twitched (say, twitch)" |
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