| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.316 | | leniency | 0.632 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 74.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1390 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1390 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "echoes" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "streaming" | | 13 | "silk" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1374 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "curious" | | 1 | "pressure" | | 2 | "inside" | | 3 | "safe" | | 4 | "tilted" | | 5 | "real" | | 6 | "moved" | | 7 | "her" | | 8 | "feel" | | 9 | "were" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment her fingers brushed it, the petals shivered, and for a heartbeat, she swore she heard music—a single, crystal…" |
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| 23.42% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 81 | | wordCount | 1185 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 5 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Nyx | 11 | | Isolde | 12 | | Rory | 30 | | London | 4 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Hollowborn | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Hollowborn" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.234 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "knots that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly" |
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| 54.44% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.456 | | wordCount | 1374 | | matches | | 0 | "neither dumplings nor" | | 1 | "not with sound, but with *pressure*, like the moment before a storm breaks" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 24.11 | | std | 18.79 | | cv | 0.78 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 48 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 55 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 95.86% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory adjusted the strap of her delivery bag—though tonight, it carried neither dumplings nor fortune cookies, but the cold weight of the Fae blade tucked against her hip." | | 1 | "She’d delivered takeout to half of London, but nothing had prepared her for this—stepping through a veil that wasn’t there, into a place that shouldn’t exist." | | 2 | "Fireflies—no, not fireflies, something with wings like stained glass—drifted between the trees, their glow pulsing in slow, hypnotic rhythms." | | 3 | "Isolde plucked a wildflower from the grass—a bloom like a tiny blue star, its petals cool as frost against her fingertips." | | 4 | "The moment her fingers brushed it, the petals shivered, and for a heartbeat, she swore she heard music—a single, crystalline note, like a chime struck in a dream." | | 5 | "Rory envied that—her own footsteps sounded too loud, too clumsy, like a child stomping through a cathedral." | | 6 | "The Grove snapped back into focus—the trees, the strange sky, the weight of the blade at her hip." | | 7 | "Then—a rustle, too loud to be the wind." | | 8 | "Not like Nyx—fluid, deliberate—but in jerks and starts, like a film strip skipping." | | 9 | "When it opened its mouth, no sound came out—only a rush of cold air, like the breath of a tomb." | | 10 | "She could *feel* them, pressing in at the edges of her mind—her mother’s voice, Evan’s hands, the cold weight of the law textbooks she’d left behind in Cardiff." | | 11 | "The Grove blurred—the trees, the stones, the strange sky—all of it bleeding together as Rory’s boots pounded the soft earth." | | 12 | "Ahead, the standing stones loomed—the boundary." | | 13 | "The space between them was just that—empty air." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1209 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "vast, star-strewn expanse," | | 1 | "tight over jagged bones." |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03887510339123242 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009098428453267164 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 10.03 | | std | 6.28 | | cv | 0.626 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 54.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.36496350364963503 | | totalSentences | 137 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it was gone." | | 1 | "Then she saw the first" | | 2 | "Suddenly, she was standing in" | | 3 | "Then—a rustle, too loud to" | | 4 | "Then the first of them" |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, voice like wind" | | 1 | "she said, turning just enough" | | 2 | "She’d delivered takeout to half" | | 3 | "She held it out to" | | 4 | "She kept one hand near" | | 5 | "It rose from the earth" | | 6 | "It was human-shaped, but wrong." | | 7 | "Its limbs were too long," | | 8 | "Its skin was the color" | | 9 | "She nodded at Rory" | | 10 | "She could *feel* them, pressing" | | 11 | "She turned and sprinted, Isolde" | | 12 | "She burst through the threshold," | | 13 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant," |
| | ratio | 0.132 | |
| 44.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly" | | 3 | "they murmured, voice like wind" | | 4 | "Isolde moved ahead, her silver" | | 5 | "she said, turning just enough" | | 6 | "Rory exhaled, watching her breath" | | 7 | "She’d delivered takeout to half" | | 8 | "The moment they crossed the" | | 9 | "The distant hum of Richmond" | | 10 | "The scent of petrol and" | | 11 | "Constellations wheeled in unfamiliar patterns," | | 12 | "Fireflies—no, not fireflies, something with" | | 13 | "Nyx stretched a shadowy hand" | | 14 | "Isolde plucked a wildflower from" | | 15 | "She held it out to" | | 16 | "Rory accepted the flower, its" | | 17 | "The moment her fingers brushed" | | 18 | "Rory muttered, tucking the bloom" | | 19 | "Nyx tilted their head." |
| | ratio | 0.83 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Stalls lined the cobblestone streets, their wares glowing under lanterns that burned with blue fire." | | 1 | "The firefly-lights dimmed, retreating into the trees as if called away." | | 2 | "Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made Rory’s stomach clench." | | 3 | "Nyx emerged last, their form flickering like a guttering candle before solidifying." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.05% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "they hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.211 | | leniency | 0.421 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |