Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMN6PP3Q12JNY8QPSQ1B0Z1

Run Details

Duration:
2.9s
Cost:
$0.000098

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks like a whisper. Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss, the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant glinting faintly against her collarbone. The standing stones loomed around her, their weathered surfaces etched with symbols that pulsed with a faint, unnatural luminescence. She had heard about this place before, in the cryptic warnings of old books and the murmurs of those who dared to seek Isolde. But now, standing here, it was all too real. Nyx moved beside her, their form shifting between solid and shadow, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dim light. They didn’t speak, but Aurora felt the weight of their presence like a breath too heavy to exhale. The moment they stepped into the grove, the world around them shifted subtly—time seemed to slow, the air humming with an energy that wasn’t quite natural. The trees here were different. Their leaves, once green, now shimmered with hues of silver and gold, as if woven from moonlight and memory. “It’s… beautiful,” Aurora breathed, her fingers brushing against the bark of one of the standing stones. The carvings on its surface glowed brighter, the symbols forming words that slithered into her mind like smoke. *Boundaries. Veil. Fading.* Nyx let out a sound—half laugh, half sigh—like wind through leaves. “You’ve seen it before,” they murmured, their voice a whisper that carried on the breeze. Aurora turned to them, her bright blue eyes scanning the grove. “How?” Before Nyx could answer, the ground beneath her feet trembled. The air grew colder, sharper, and then—there it was. A ripple. A tear in the Veil. Not just a tear, but a *rift*, a jagged split in the barrier that separated this world from the unseen. It pulsed, like a heartbeat, and the scent of something rotten and sweet filled the air. The trees around them seemed to lean in, their branches twisting toward the rift as if drawn by an invisible magnet. Isolde stepped into view, her silver hair catching the light, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the rift with an intensity that made Aurora’s breath catch. She didn’t speak, but her silence spoke volumes. The seer’s hands hovered near her waist, and for a moment, Aurora thought she saw something—visions flickering at the edges of her vision, like glimpses of a future that wasn’t hers to see. “You shouldn’t be here,” Isolde said, her voice low and measured, though her eyes burned with something darker than usual. “The Veil is not meant to be breached.” Aurora swallowed hard. “We came for answers.” Isolde’s gaze flicked to Nyx, then back to her. “And you’ll get them. But not here. Not now.” She turned, her form dissolving into the shadows for a moment before reappearing behind them, her voice a whisper that carried across the grove. “The rift is weakest at dusk. Use it wisely.” Aurora exhaled, her fingers tightening around the Fae-forged blade at her side. The cold metal was familiar now, a comfort in the strange, unnatural air. “What do we find beyond?” Isolde’s eyes gleamed with something ancient and hungry. “Hel,” she said, and the word hung between them, heavy with the promise of danger and possibility. Nyx let out a sound, a low chuckle that sent a shiver down Aurora’s spine. “Or something worse.” The wind howled through the grove, and the standing stones trembled once more. Aurora took a step forward, her heart pounding. This was it. The first step into the unknown. The first step into something far older than any of them. And she wasn’t sure if she was ready.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
84.1270% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount630
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount630
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count2
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"shimmered"
2"glinting"
3"trembled"
4"loomed"
5"weight"
6"etched"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"time stood still"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"time seemed to slow"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences43
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean41.6
std29.43
cv0.707
sampleLengths
0103
188
237
326
412
583
667
728
87
951
1030
1125
1218
1341
148
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs89
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount580
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03103448275862069
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006896551724137931
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean12.73
std8.43
cv0.662
sampleLengths
028
123
219
324
49
520
618
726
85
919
1016
1118
121
131
141
1511
1615
1711
181
1910
209
212
225
2320
2416
2521
2626
278
2833
2920
308
313
324
339
3433
359
3612
3713
385
398
4017
4115
423
4313
448
453
466
4711
488
72.1088% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.46938775510204084
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners23
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Aurora breathed, her fingers brushing against the bark of one of the standing stones (breathe, brush)"
1"they murmured, their voice a whisper that carried on the breeze (murmur)"
2"Isolde said, her voice low and measured, though her eyes burned with something darker than usual (say, burn)"
3"she said, and the word hung between them, heavy with the promise of danger and possibility (say, hang)"
83.7001%