| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 629 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 629 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "glinting" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "measured" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "pounding" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "time stood still" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "time seemed to slow" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 624 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "Boundaries. Veil. Fading." | | 1 | "rift" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 574 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.74 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Aurora | 10 | | Nyx | 5 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.629 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.74% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.603 | | wordCount | 624 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just a tear, but a *rift*, a jagged split in the barrier" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 15 | | mean | 41.6 | | std | 29.43 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 103 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 83 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 49 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks like a whisper." | | 1 | "The moment they stepped into the grove, the world around them shifted subtly—time seemed to slow, the air humming with an energy that wasn’t quite natural." | | 2 | "Nyx let out a sound—half laugh, half sigh—like wind through leaves." | | 3 | "The air grew colder, sharper, and then—there it was." | | 4 | "The seer’s hands hovered near her waist, and for a moment, Aurora thought she saw something—visions flickering at the edges of her vision, like glimpses of a future that wasn’t hers to see." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 580 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.03103448275862069 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006896551724137931 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 49 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 49 | | mean | 12.73 | | std | 8.43 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 8 |
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| 72.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.46938775510204084 | | totalSentences | 49 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "She had heard about this" | | 1 | "They didn’t speak, but Aurora" | | 2 | "Their leaves, once green, now" | | 3 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 4 | "It pulsed, like a heartbeat," | | 5 | "She didn’t speak, but her" | | 6 | "She turned, her form dissolving" | | 7 | "she said, and the word" |
| | ratio | 0.205 | |
| 11.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed around" | | 3 | "She had heard about this" | | 4 | "Nyx moved beside her, their" | | 5 | "They didn’t speak, but Aurora" | | 6 | "The moment they stepped into" | | 7 | "The trees here were different." | | 8 | "Their leaves, once green, now" | | 9 | "Aurora breathed, her fingers brushing" | | 10 | "The carvings on its surface" | | 11 | "Nyx let out a sound—half" | | 12 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 13 | "Aurora turned to them, her" | | 14 | "The air grew colder, sharper," | | 15 | "A tear in the Veil." | | 16 | "It pulsed, like a heartbeat," | | 17 | "The trees around them seemed" | | 18 | "Isolde stepped into view, her" | | 19 | "She didn’t speak, but her" |
| | ratio | 0.897 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Nyx could answer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks like a whisper." | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss, the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant glinting faintly against her collarbone." | | 2 | "Nyx moved beside her, their form shifting between solid and shadow, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dim light." | | 3 | "Their leaves, once green, now shimmered with hues of silver and gold, as if woven from moonlight and memory." | | 4 | "The carvings on its surface glowed brighter, the symbols forming words that slithered into her mind like smoke." | | 5 | "Isolde stepped into view, her silver hair catching the light, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the rift with an intensity that made Aurora’s breath catch." | | 6 | "The seer’s hands hovered near her waist, and for a moment, Aurora thought she saw something—visions flickering at the edges of her vision, like glimpses of a fu…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper that carried on the breeze" | | 1 | "she said, and the word hung between them, heavy with the promise of danger and possibility" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |