| 100.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | |
| 84.1270% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 630 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.0000% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 630 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "glinting" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "etched" |
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| 66.6667% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "time stood still" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "time seemed to slow" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 15 | | mean | 41.6 | | std | 29.43 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 103 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 83 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 8 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 580 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.03103448275862069 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006896551724137931 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 49 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 49 | | mean | 12.73 | | std | 8.43 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 8 |
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| 72.1088% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.46938775510204084 | | totalSentences | 49 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora breathed, her fingers brushing against the bark of one of the standing stones (breathe, brush)" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper that carried on the breeze (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice low and measured, though her eyes burned with something darker than usual (say, burn)" | | 3 | "she said, and the word hung between them, heavy with the promise of danger and possibility (say, hang)" |
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