Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMN7F2E9G8X4GMKBEP951BN

Run Details

Duration:
12.2s
Cost:
$0.000307

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, a relentless drumming that turned the cobblestones slick beneath Quinn’s boots. She kept her pace steady, her breath even, the leather of her watch strap creaking faintly against her wrist as she adjusted her grip on the handle of her revolver. The gun was a relic from her days in the Special Response Unit, its weight familiar, its purpose unyielding. She hadn’t fired it in years—not since the night she’d lost Morris. But tonight, the streets of Soho felt like a different world, one where the rules of the law didn’t apply, where shadows moved on their own and the air hummed with something just beyond perception. The suspect—*he*—had been easy to tail at first. A man in a long, dark coat, his face obscured by the brim of a fedora pulled low. He moved with the confidence of someone who knew these streets better than the cops who patrolled them. Quinn had seen him before, lurking near the Raven’s Nest, that seedy bar with its neon sign flickering like a dying star. She’d been there once, posing as a journalist, watching, listening. That was when she’d first noticed the way he watched the door, the way his fingers twitched near his coat like he was itching to pull something from his pocket. Something that wasn’t just a cigarette pack. Now, he was cutting through the alley behind the old bookshop, his footsteps swallowed by the rain. Quinn followed, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the sickly glow of the streetlamps. The air smelled of wet stone and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of old blood. She didn’t like it. Didn’t like any of it. A sharp crack split the air. Quinn barely had time to react before the glass of the alley’s exit shattered inward, rain and shards raining down in a glittering storm. She ducked, pressing herself against the brick wall as the suspect’s head appeared in the doorway, his fedora askew, his face twisted in something between a sneer and a grimace. "You’re not supposed to be here, Detective," he said, his voice low, amused. "This isn’t your turf." Quinn didn’t answer. She didn’t need to. She stepped forward, her revolver leveled at his chest. "Drop whatever you’re carrying. Now." The man laughed, a sound that was equal parts mirth and menace. "Or what? You’re gonna shoot me in the middle of the street? Get real." He reached into his coat, and Quinn’s finger tightened on the trigger— A hand clamped over her wrist, yanking her back with a strength that surprised her. She whirled, her gun still raised, and found herself staring into the warm brown eyes of a man she didn’t recognize. He was younger, maybe mid-thirties, with dark curly hair slicked back from his face. A scar ran along his left forearm, a pale line against his olive skin. He wore a stained white shirt beneath a worn leather jacket, and the scent of antiseptic and something earthier—like damp earth and crushed herbs—lingered around him. "Easy," he said, his voice calm, but his grip was iron. "He’s not worth it." Quinn glared at him, then back at the suspect, who was now pressing a hand to his side, his coat gaping open to reveal a dark stain spreading across his shirt. "He’s bleeding. He’s got something on him." The younger man—*Tomás*, she realized with a flicker of irritation—didn’t look at the suspect. His gaze was fixed on her, intense. "You don’t know what you’re dealing with here. That’s not just blood." Quinn’s jaw tightened. "Then what is it?" Before he could answer, the suspect let out a groan, his body sagging against the alley wall. "Fucking paramedic," he muttered. "Always sticking his nose where it doesn’t belong." Tomás’s fingers flexed around Quinn’s wrist, just enough to remind her he was still there. "He’s not just a paramedic. He’s got a way with things that don’t heal normally." Quinn exhaled sharply through her nose. "Supernatural." Tomás didn’t confirm or deny it. Instead, he nodded toward the suspect, who was now sliding to the ground, his movements sluggish, unnatural. "He’s not the one you should be worried about. There’s someone else coming. Someone who doesn’t like loose ends." Quinn’s pulse spiked. She knew that tone. Knew the way his voice dropped, the way his body language shifted when he was talking about things that went beyond the law. She’d heard it before, in the whispers of the old-timers on the force, in the files that got buried. "You’re talking about the Veil Market." Tomás’s expression didn’t change, but his grip on her wrist tightened just slightly. "You’re not supposed to know about it." Quinn yanked her arm free. "I know about it because I’ve been looking for answers. And right now, that suspect—" she jerked her chin toward the man on the ground, who was now muttering to himself in a language she didn’t recognize "—he’s got something that belongs to the clique. Something that’s got my partner’s name on it." Tomás’s eyes darkened. "You lost a partner?" Quinn’s fingers twitched toward her revolver again. "Three years ago. Under suspicious circumstances. And now, I’m starting to think it wasn’t just a hit. It was something else." The younger man’s gaze flickered to the suspect, then back to her. "You’re walking into something dangerous. The Veil Market isn’t a place for cops." Quinn stepped around him, her boots splashing through the puddles. "I’m not here as a cop. I’m here as a detective. And I’m not leaving until I get what I came for." Tomás followed her, his voice low. "Then you’d better be ready. Because what you’re about to walk into doesn’t play by your rules." The suspect groaned again, his body convulsing. Quinn crouched beside him, her revolver still drawn. "Where is it? Where’s the package?" The man’s eyes rolled back, his skin taking on a sickly sheen. "You’re not gonna find it here," he rasped. "It’s underground. The Veil Market. Full moon tonight. You’ll know it when you see it." Quinn stood, her mind racing. The Veil Market. She’d heard rumors, of course—whispers in the back alleys of the force, files that got marked "classified" and then disappeared. But this was the first time she’d had something concrete to go on. And now, thanks to this suspect and the paramedic who seemed to know more than he was letting on, she had a lead. She turned to Tomás. "How do I get in?" His expression was unreadable. "You don’t." She raised an eyebrow. "Then what the hell am I doing here?" Tomás exhaled, running a hand through his damp hair. "You need a bone token. Something from something that’s already dead." Quinn’s stomach twisted. "You’re joking." Tomás shook his head. "I wish I were." She looked back at the suspect, who was now lying still, his chest rising and falling in shallow, unnatural breaths. "His bone token?" Tomás hesitated. "It’s not just a token. It’s a key. And once you’re inside, you’re not just a customer. You’re prey." Quinn holstered her revolver, her fingers brushing against the familiar weight of the gun. "Then I’ll just have to be careful." Tomás’s gaze was steady. "You won’t be careful enough." A sound cut through the night—a distant, rhythmic *thump*, like something heavy being dropped into water. Quinn’s skin prickled. "What the hell was that?" Tomás’s voice was barely above a whisper. "That’s the market moving. It’s not stationary. It changes with the moon." Quinn’s mind raced. The full moon was tonight. That meant the Veil Market was already here, lurking beneath the city, waiting. And if she wanted answers—if she wanted to find out what had really happened to Morris—she had to go down there. She looked at the suspect, then at Tomás. "Help me." Tomás’s expression was grim. "I can’t just walk you in there." Quinn’s voice was firm. "Then tell me how." Tomás closed his eyes for a moment, as if gathering his thoughts. When he opened them again, his gaze was intense. "There’s a way in. An old Tube station beneath Camden. But you’ll need to get there before the market shifts again. And once you’re inside, you don’t look back." Quinn nodded. "I won’t." Tomás reached into his jacket and pulled out a small, tarnished bone token. It was shaped like a key, its surface etched with strange symbols. "This is yours. But remember—once you’re in, you’re not just a guest. You’re a target." Quinn took the token, her fingers brushing against the cold, smooth bone. "I understand." Tomás’s voice dropped to a whisper. "You don’t. But you will." The suspect groaned again, his body twitching. Quinn knelt beside him, her hand hovering over his coat. "Where’s the entrance?" The man’s eyes fluttered open, his gaze unfocused. "Under the station. Near the old tracks. But you have to go at midnight. That’s when the door opens." Quinn stood, her mind made up. "I’ll be there." Tomás’s expression was grim. "Be careful." Quinn didn’t answer. She turned and started walking, her boots splashing through the rain-soaked streets. She could feel Tomás’s gaze on her back, but she didn’t look back. She had a suspect to find, a market to infiltrate, and a partner’s name to avenge. The rain continued to fall, a relentless drumming that filled the silence between her thoughts. She adjusted her grip on the bone token, feeling its weight against her palm. It was cold, heavy, and it felt like a promise. And she was ready to keep it.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
75.1861% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1612
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.1687% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1612
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"fluttered"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicker"
2"fluttered"
3"unreadable"
4"weight"
5"footsteps"
6"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"knew that tone"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean29.61
std25.06
cv0.846
sampleLengths
0113
1113
259
377
421
538
690
715
838
933
107
1129
1230
137
1442
1555
1620
1758
187
1928
2025
2132
2223
2321
2435
2564
269
276
2812
2920
305
318
3223
3321
3421
359
3624
3719
3842
3910
4011
418
4250
434
4440
4514
4611
4720
4827
499
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences103
matches
0"was fixed"
1"got buried"
2"being dropped"
3"was shaped"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs214
matches
0"was itching"
1"was talking"
2"was letting"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1182
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.032148900169204735
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008460236886632826
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean10.95
std8.2
cv0.749
sampleLengths
017
130
219
312
435
58
618
718
822
910
1030
117
1217
1315
1418
154
165
176
1824
1930
2013
214
223
234
249
255
2612
2726
2815
2921
3014
3114
3226
3311
344
3531
367
3714
387
3912
403
414
4217
434
448
4515
4615
476
481
496
47.9452% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.2465753424657534
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners36
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he said, his voice low, amused (say, amuse)"
1"he said, his voice calm, but his grip was iron (say, be)"
2"he muttered (mutter)"
3"he rasped (rasp)"
86.3118%