| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 720 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 720 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 715 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil weakens where the standing stones stand." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.10% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 626 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Veil | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Aurora | 8 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.861 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to pull the world apart" | | 1 | "as if inviting her to stay" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 715 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 42.06 | | std | 22.91 | | cv | 0.545 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 44 |
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| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 109 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 49 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "The others—Nyx, who had slipped between shadows like a breath, and Isolde herself, silver hair catching the light like scattered stars—had followed without hesitation." | | 1 | "The flowers—petals the color of crushed velvet—drifted lazily, their perfume sharp and intoxicating." | | 2 | "The stones were no longer solid; they were like glass, shimmering faintly underfoot." | | 3 | "Aurora stepped onto one, and the weight of it felt different—lighter, as if she were walking on air." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 632 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03481012658227848 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014240506329113924 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 49 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 49 | | mean | 14.59 | | std | 8.52 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 15 |
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| 41.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.2653061224489796 | | totalSentences | 49 | | uniqueOpeners | 13 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled, the scent of" | | 1 | "She had come here at" | | 2 | "Their form flickered between solid" | | 3 | "she said, her voice a" | | 4 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 5 | "She reached for one, her" | | 6 | "they said, their voice barely" | | 7 | "She hadn’t meant to linger." | | 8 | "She took another step forward," | | 9 | "She glanced at Nyx, whose" | | 10 | "She turned, her boots crunching" | | 11 | "She had seen enough." |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap" | | 2 | "The silver blade had been" | | 3 | "She exhaled, the scent of" | | 4 | "She had come here at" | | 5 | "The others—Nyx, who had slipped" | | 6 | "Aurora hesitated only a moment" | | 7 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 8 | "Their form flickered between solid" | | 9 | "Isolde’s fingers traced the bark" | | 10 | "she said, her voice a" | | 11 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 12 | "The air grew warmer, thick" | | 13 | "The flowers—petals the color of" | | 14 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 15 | "Nyx let out a sound" | | 16 | "The stones were no longer" | | 17 | "Aurora stepped onto one, and" | | 18 | "Isolde’s laughter was faint, like" | | 19 | "Aurora’s pulse quickened." |
| | ratio | 0.95 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here at Isolde’s urging, drawn by the seer’s cryptic warning: *The Veil weakens where the standing stones stand.* Now, standing at the edge of Rich…" | | 1 | "The others—Nyx, who had slipped between shadows like a breath, and Isolde herself, silver hair catching the light like scattered stars—had followed without hesi…" | | 2 | "Aurora hesitated only a moment before stepping forward, the soles of her boots sinking into the soft moss." | | 3 | "She reached for one, her fingers trembling, and the petal responded, unfurling slightly as if inviting her to stay." | | 4 | "She took another step forward, the standing stones now glowing faintly under her feet, as if warmed by some unseen fire." | | 5 | "She glanced at Nyx, whose form flickered once more, and then at Isolde, who stood motionless, her silver hair catching the light like a crown of stars." | | 6 | "She turned, her boots crunching on the moss as she retreated, the path behind her now clearer, the standing stones receding into the distance." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the breeze" | | 1 | "she said, her voice a thread of static" | | 2 | "they said, their voice barely audible" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |