Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMN7YPS8TEYQRMWXSTZMJ6K

Run Details

Duration:
3.2s
Cost:
$0.000100

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove hummed with something older than the trees, something that coiled beneath the earth like a living breath. Aurora Carter tightened the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant around her neck, its crimson pulse warm against her skin. She had come here before, once, with Eva, but this was different—this was the first time she had walked *through* the Veil, the first time she had stepped into a place where the rules of the world she knew were unraveling. The moment the standing stones of Richmond Park gave way, the world tilted. The sky above them was a vast, unbroken expanse of violet-blue, the kind of sky that made her forget where she was. The trees here were not merely trees. Their bark shimmered with veins of silver and gold, and the leaves whispered when the wind passed through them—not with sound, but with something like a sigh, a chorus of voices too faint to hear but too real to ignore. Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the Fae-Forged Blade at her waist, its moonsilver edge cold and sharp, a silent promise. Nyx stepped forward, their form shifting between solid and shadow as they moved. Their violet eyes gleamed faintly in the dim light, and for a heartbeat, Aurora thought they might be watching her. Then the wind caught the edge of Nyx’s cloak, and the whispering leaves answered in a single, resonant note. “You shouldn’t be here,” a voice said, smooth as honeyed wine. Aurora turned. Isolde Varga stood between two ancient oaks, her silver hair catching the light like scattered starlight. The seer’s hands were folded in front of her, but Aurora didn’t need to see the riddles in her eyes to know she was listening. The air here was thick with secrets, and the Fae didn’t give them lightly. “You’re not supposed to be here either,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the way her pulse quickened. “The Veil’s thinning, but it’s not weak enough for just anyone.” Isolde tilted her head, her pale lavender eyes narrowing. “And yet, you came.” Aurora exhaled, the weight of the moment pressing down on her shoulders. “I was sent.” Nyx stepped closer, their form flickering like a candle flame in the breeze. “Sent by who?” “By the one who gave me the pendant,” Aurora said, the word *given* hanging between them like a question. “By the one who knows what’s coming.” Isolde’s lips curled into something almost like a smile. “Then you are not alone in your quest.” She reached into the folds of her cloak and pulled out a small, intricately carved dagger, its edge etched with glowing runes. “I gave this to you for a reason.” Aurora’s breath caught. The Fae-Forged Blade was in her hand before she could stop herself, its weight familiar, its coldness a comfort. “You gave it to me.” Isolde’s gaze darkened. “You have been marked. The Veil is weakening, and with it, the balance between realms. The Helbound are coming, and they are not like the others.” Nyx’s voice was a rasp in the wind. “And you are here to stop them?” Aurora didn’t answer. Instead, she looked around—the way the light filtered through the leaves, the way the air seemed to press against her skin like a second breath. The Grove was alive, and it was watching. Then the ground trembled. Not a quake, not the earth shifting beneath her feet, but something deeper, something that made the trees groan and the leaves rustle in unison. Aurora’s blood ran cold. The standing stones had warned her. The Veil was thinning. And now, it was *breathing*. Isolde’s fingers tightened around the hilt of her dagger. “They are coming.” A shape moved in the distance—a flicker of black, a shadow that did not belong. Nyx’s form dissolved into the darkness, vanishing like smoke. Aurora didn’t follow. Instead, she turned back to Isolde, her mind racing. “What do we do?” she asked. The seer’s voice was a whisper. “You walk.” And then the Grove swallowed them whole.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
85.3372% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount682
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount682
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"shimmered"
2"trembled"
3"weight"
4"etched"
5"unraveling"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"the weight of the moment"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean30.68
std24.89
cv0.811
sampleLengths
084
1101
252
311
457
529
613
715
816
926
1047
1127
1229
1315
1436
154
1644
1712
1836
196
208
217
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"were folded"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs96
matches
0"were unraveling"
1"was listening"
2"was watching"
3"was thinning"
4"was *breathing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount572
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03146853146853147
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006993006993006993
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean12.27
std9.23
cv0.752
sampleLengths
023
120
241
313
422
57
640
719
813
920
1019
1111
122
1316
1425
1514
1618
1711
189
194
2012
213
2213
233
2419
257
269
2730
288
293
3019
315
323
3326
348
357
363
3725
388
394
4025
414
426
434
445
459
463
4715
489
493
42.4242% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3090909090909091
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners17
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"a voice said, smooth as honeyed wine (say, honey)"
1"Aurora said, her voice steady despite the way her pulse quickened (say, quicken)"
2"Aurora said, the word *given* hanging between them like a question (say, *given* hanging like)"
82.0252%