| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.611 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 51.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 830 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "warmly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 830 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "intricate" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 822 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 700 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 4 | | Aurora | 14 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.5 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like crushed petals and honeyed sm" | | 1 | "something between curiosity and doubt" | | 2 | "something like old blood and burnt sugar" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 822 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 35.74 | | std | 19.42 | | cv | 0.543 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 6 |
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| 98.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was breathing" | | 2 | "was watching" | | 3 | "was doing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 59 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t speak, but her hands—long-fingered and pale as moonlight—twisted in the air, tracing patterns in the air that made the wildflowers around them tremble." | | 1 | "The wood was warm, almost pulsing, and when she pressed harder, a faint, metallic scent filled her nose—something like old blood and burnt sugar." | | 2 | "She looked up just in time to see a shadow—no, not a shadow, a *thing*—slithering between the trees." | | 3 | "The place where souls were fed until they were whole—or until they were broken beyond repair." | | 4 | "She thought of her life—her flat above Silas’ bar, the delivery route that kept her moving, the weight of her past pressing down on her like a second skin." | | 5 | "The standing stones hummed, their carvings glowing faintly, and for a moment, Aurora thought she saw something move in the darkness beyond the grove—a flicker of shadow, a whisper of a name." |
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| 96.08% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 607 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.044481054365733116 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018121911037891267 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 59 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 59 | | mean | 13.93 | | std | 7.96 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 53.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3728813559322034 | | totalSentences | 59 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 68.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Isolde’s voice cut through" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t speak, but her" | | 1 | "they said, their voice like" | | 2 | "She looked up just in" | | 3 | "It was too tall, too" | | 4 | "they said, their voice barely" | | 5 | "She had no idea what" | | 6 | "they asked, their voice a" | | 7 | "She thought of her life—her" | | 8 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 9 | "She looked at the blade" | | 10 | "She wasn’t sure if she" | | 11 | "She would find a way" |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 0.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots" | | 2 | "The Fae blade at her" | | 3 | "Nyx shifted slightly behind her," | | 4 | "Aurora didn’t turn, but she" | | 5 | "Aurora asked, her voice tight" | | 6 | "Isolde stood at the edge" | | 7 | "She didn’t speak, but her" | | 8 | "The air hummed with energy," | | 9 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 10 | "Aurora exhaled, her breath fogging" | | 11 | "The standing stones around them" | | 12 | "Shadows stretched between them, twisting" | | 13 | "Nyx stepped forward, their form" | | 14 | "they said, their voice like" | | 15 | "Aurora crouched down, pressing her" | | 16 | "The wood was warm, almost" | | 17 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 18 | "Isolde said, her voice suddenly" | | 19 | "A gust of wind howled" |
| | ratio | 0.918 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss beneath her, the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant glinting faintly against her chest…" | | 1 | "She didn’t speak, but her hands—long-fingered and pale as moonlight—twisted in the air, tracing patterns in the air that made the wildflowers around them trembl…" | | 2 | "Shadows stretched between them, twisting like living things, and the ground beneath her feet pulsed faintly, as if the earth itself was breathing." | | 3 | "Nyx stepped forward, their form dissolving into the darkness between the stones for a moment before solidifying again." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, her voice tight with something between curiosity and doubt" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice suddenly sharp" | | 3 | "Aurora breathed, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "they said, their voice barely audible" | | 5 | "Aurora said, her voice steady despite the unease coiling in her gut," | | 6 | "they asked, their voice a whisper" | | 7 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |