| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1085 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1085 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "depths" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "almost alive" | | 13 | "raced" | | 14 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.29% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 32 | | totalWords | 1078 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest" | | 1 | "Where did he go?" | | 2 | "A guard. Or a dealer." | | 3 | "a dealer, a fixer" | | 4 | "We have to go. Now. Before they realize." | | 5 | "Harlow. What the hell are you doing here?" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1078 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.65 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | London | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | English | 1 | | Harlow | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Harlow" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a gamble" | | 1 | "cloaks that seemed to shift in the dim light" | | 2 | "looked like dried eyes, their irises swir" | | 3 | "quite human" | | 4 | "looked like a door" | | 5 | "quite English" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1078 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 38.5 | | std | 29.84 | | cv | 0.775 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 111 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 72 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 96 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 2 |
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| 95.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were lined" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 18.84% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "was speaking" | | 2 | "was happening" | | 3 | "weren’t just dealing" | | 4 | "were dealing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "The neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered in the distance, its green hue bleeding into the gray haze—another dead end." | | 1 | "The rain drummed against her hat, a cheap purchase from a market stall, but it did the job—keeping the worst of the downpour off her face." | | 2 | "The alley opened into a narrow passage, the walls slick with rain and something darker—something that didn’t belong in London’s underbelly." | | 3 | "The air grew thicker, the scent of damp stone giving way to something sharper—ozone, maybe, or the faint tang of alchemy." | | 4 | "The stalls were a riot of colors and scents—glowing herbs, bottles of liquid that shimmered like liquid silver, and figures wrapped in cloaks that seemed to shift in the dim light." | | 5 | "The other man—*a dealer, a fixer*—listened, his fingers tapping against a bone token that hung from a chain around his neck." | | 6 | "A sound reached her then—a whisper, a murmur of voices that weren’t quite human." | | 7 | "But she knew one thing for certain—they weren’t just criminals." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1087 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03219871205151794 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0036798528058877645 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 9.54 | | std | 6.44 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 27.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.24778761061946902 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw it." | | 1 | "Maybe they were warnings." | | 2 | "Then she saw it." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 92.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 1 | "Her sharp jaw clenched as" | | 2 | "She didn’t hesitate." | | 3 | "She moved, her boots silent" | | 4 | "Her training screamed at her" | | 5 | "She could feel it, like" | | 6 | "She took the first step," | | 7 | "She reached the bottom and" | | 8 | "She’d heard the rumors, of" | | 9 | "He turned as she stepped" | | 10 | "She could feel him, like" | | 11 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 12 | "He was speaking to a" | | 13 | "She wasn’t here to shoot." | | 14 | "She followed, her pulse hammering" | | 15 | "She had to move fast." | | 16 | "She reached a narrow passage," | | 17 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 18 | "She could turn back." | | 19 | "She could walk away and" |
| | ratio | 0.32 | |
| 70.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down like" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn’s breath fogged in" | | 2 | "The neon sign of *The" | | 3 | "The suspect had been there," | | 4 | "The way he’d ducked into" | | 5 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 6 | "The rain drummed against her" | | 7 | "Her sharp jaw clenched as" | | 8 | "A flash of dark fabric" | | 9 | "Harlow’s pulse spiked." | | 10 | "She didn’t hesitate." | | 11 | "She moved, her boots silent" | | 12 | "The alley opened into a" | | 13 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 14 | "A set of stairs, descending" | | 15 | "The kind of stairs that" | | 16 | "The kind that led somewhere" | | 17 | "Her training screamed at her" | | 18 | "She could feel it, like" | | 19 | "She took the first step," |
| | ratio | 0.78 | |
| 50.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 38.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn’s breath fogged in the frigid air as she moved through the slick streets of Camden, her boots splashing through puddles that glistened with the sic…" | | 1 | "The alley opened into a narrow passage, the walls slick with rain and something darker—something that didn’t belong in London’s underbelly." | | 2 | "She moved deeper into the market, her boots splashing through shallow pools of water that had no right to exist underground." | | 3 | "The stalls were a riot of colors and scents—glowing herbs, bottles of liquid that shimmered like liquid silver, and figures wrapped in cloaks that seemed to shi…" | | 4 | "The other man—*a dealer, a fixer*—listened, his fingers tapping against a bone token that hung from a chain around his neck." | | 5 | "The market shifted around her, the stalls rearranging themselves as if alive." | | 6 | "Figures moved in the dark, their forms shifting, their voices overlapping in a language that wasn’t quite English." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |