| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She pulled back [back]" | | 1 | "Rory said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "she said again [again]" | | 3 | "Rory murmured again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 96.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1607 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1607 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "practiced ease" | | 4 | "fleeting" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "pounding" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 146 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1604 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "The Art of War" | | 1 | "The Necronomicon" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 28 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 91 | | wordCount | 1319 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 3.03 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 40 | | Rory | 38 | | Brick | 3 | | Lane | 3 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Art | 1 | | Earl | 1 | | Grey | 1 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Earl" | | 4 | "Grey" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the world had narrowed down t" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1604 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.17% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that look" | | 1 | "knew that look" | | 2 | "believe that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 25.87 | | std | 19.42 | | cv | 0.751 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 62 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 55 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 46 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 53 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 46 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 225 | | matches | | 0 | "was gauging" | | 1 | "was already moving" | | 2 | "was already whistling" | | 3 | "was fleeting" | | 4 | "was pounding" | | 5 | "was speaking" | | 6 | "was going" |
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| 45.01% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 146 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside was thick with the scent of old paper and something sharper—incense, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of Ptolemy’s fur after a nap in the sunbeam." | | 1 | "The flat was exactly as she remembered it—books stacked precariously on every surface, scrolls tied with frayed ribbon, the faint glow of a candle casting long shadows across the walls." | | 2 | "Rory glanced around, her gaze landing on the stack of books on the coffee table—*The Art of War*, a tattered copy of *The Necronomicon*, and a few others she didn’t recognize." | | 3 | "She’d always been beautiful in a way that didn’t demand attention—like a quiet storm, building slowly before unleashing itself." | | 4 | "Rory could feel it pressing down on her, the kind of silence that wasn’t empty but full—full of everything they hadn’t said, everything they’d left hanging between them." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1323 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.027966742252456538 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0045351473922902496 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 146 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 146 | | mean | 10.99 | | std | 7.85 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 43.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.22602739726027396 | | totalSentences | 146 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.08% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, fingers hovering over" | | 1 | "She stepped inside, the weight" | | 2 | "she murmured against Rory’s hair," | | 3 | "She pulled back just enough" | | 4 | "She gestured toward the kitchen," | | 5 | "She sank onto the armchair," | | 6 | "She’d always been beautiful in" | | 7 | "She took a sip, the" | | 8 | "She’d seen it in the" | | 9 | "She set her mug down," | | 10 | "She just shook her head," | | 11 | "She walked to the window," | | 12 | "she asked, her voice steady" | | 13 | "She knew that look." | | 14 | "She’d seen it in the" | | 15 | "It wasn’t a question." | | 16 | "She’d known, deep down, that" | | 17 | "She’d known and still she’d" | | 18 | "she said again, her voice" | | 19 | "She could feel the tears" |
| | ratio | 0.34 | |
| 3.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The door to Eva’s flat" | | 1 | "She paused, fingers hovering over" | | 2 | "The air inside was thick" | | 3 | "Eva’s voice cut through the" | | 4 | "Rory exhaled, her breath fogging" | | 5 | "She stepped inside, the weight" | | 6 | "The flat was exactly as" | | 7 | "Ptolemy lifted his head from" | | 8 | "Eva was already moving, pulling" | | 9 | "she murmured against Rory’s hair," | | 10 | "Rory stiffened for half a" | | 11 | "She pulled back just enough" | | 12 | "Eva’s lips twitched, but she" | | 13 | "The door clicked shut behind" | | 14 | "Rory glanced around, her gaze" | | 15 | "Eva waved a hand dismissively." | | 16 | "She gestured toward the kitchen," | | 17 | "Rory kicked off her shoes," | | 18 | "She sank onto the armchair," | | 19 | "Eva poured water into a" |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 48.54% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d always been beautiful in a way that didn’t demand attention—like a quiet storm, building slowly before unleashing itself." | | 1 | "Rory could feel it pressing down on her, the kind of silence that wasn’t empty but full—full of everything they hadn’t said, everything they’d left hanging betw…" | | 2 | "When she did, her voice was quiet, like she was speaking to someone who wasn’t there." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped, the weight of her backpack shifting against her shoulders" | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice muffled" | | 2 | "Rory kicked off, the soles of her feet tingling from the cold pavement" | | 3 | "Eva poured, the clink of the china sharp in the silence" | | 4 | "Rory said finally, her voice low" | | 5 | "she said again, her voice breaking just a little" | | 6 | "she asked, her voice raw" | | 7 | "Rory murmured again, her voice breaking" | | 8 | "Rory whispered, her voice raw" | | 9 | "Rory whispered, her voice breaking" |
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| 33.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Rory murmured again (murmur)" | | 5 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.583 | | effectiveRatio | 0.233 | |