Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMNBN7DY2Y6W4BRV48332AQ

Run Details

Duration:
11.5s
Cost:
$0.000294

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door to Eva’s flat creaked open before Rory could even turn the key, the sound swallowed by the thick hum of Brick Lane below. She paused, fingers hovering over the lock, her pulse already thrumming in her throat. The air inside was thick with the scent of old paper and something sharper—incense, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of Ptolemy’s fur after a nap in the sunbeam. “Rory?” Eva’s voice cut through the silence, warm but cautious, like she was gauging the weight of the world outside the door. “You’re early.” Rory exhaled, her breath fogging the glass of the small window beside the door. “I changed my mind.” She stepped inside, the weight of her backpack shifting against her shoulders. The flat was exactly as she remembered it—books stacked precariously on every surface, scrolls tied with frayed ribbon, the faint glow of a candle casting long shadows across the walls. Ptolemy lifted his head from his perch on the arm of Eva’s chair, tail flicking, before settling back down with a contented sigh. Eva was already moving, pulling Rory into a quick, tight hug. “You didn’t have to come,” she murmured against Rory’s hair, her voice muffled. “I could’ve sent someone else.” Rory stiffened for half a second before relaxing into the embrace. “I know. But I needed to see this for myself.” She pulled back just enough to meet Eva’s eyes, the blue of her irises sharp against the amber glow of the candlelight. “Besides, I’ve got a feeling this isn’t going to be as simple as I thought.” Eva’s lips twitched, but she didn’t smile. “No. It’s not.” The door clicked shut behind them, sealing them in the quiet of the flat. Rory glanced around, her gaze landing on the stack of books on the coffee table—*The Art of War*, a tattered copy of *The Necronomicon*, and a few others she didn’t recognize. “You’ve been busy.” Eva waved a hand dismissively. “Just research. Nothing important.” She gestured toward the kitchen, where a kettle was already whistling. “Tea?” “Please.” Rory kicked off her shoes, the soles of her feet tingling from the cold pavement. She sank onto the armchair, running her fingers over the worn leather. “How’s the cat?” “Ptolemy’s fine.” Eva poured water into a mug, the clink of the china sharp in the silence. “He’s been keeping me company.” Rory watched her, the way Eva’s fingers moved with practiced ease, the way her dark hair fell in loose waves around her shoulders. She’d always been beautiful in a way that didn’t demand attention—like a quiet storm, building slowly before unleashing itself. And Rory had been the one to walk into it, again and again. “You look different,” Eva said, sliding a mug toward her. The steam curled up between them, warm and intimate. “Taller. Stronger.” Rory took the tea, the heat seeping through the ceramic. “Just from working at the Golden Empress. Deliveries, you know how it is.” She took a sip, the bitter-sweet flavor of Earl Grey coating her tongue. “You?” Eva’s smile was fleeting, sad. “I’ve been… busy.” Rory knew that look. She’d seen it in the mirror too many times after Evan. The weight of things unsaid, the way the world kept turning even when you wanted to stop it. “You’re not the same either.” Eva exhaled, her breath shaky. “No. I’m not.” A silence settled between them, thick and heavy. Rory could feel it pressing down on her, the kind of silence that wasn’t empty but full—full of everything they hadn’t said, everything they’d left hanging between them. She set her mug down, her fingers brushing against Eva’s. “You should’ve told me,” Rory said finally, her voice low. “About the… other things.” Eva’s gaze flickered to her hand, then back up to her eyes. “I wasn’t sure you’d want to know.” “Would you have told me if you thought I would’ve run?” Eva’s lips parted, but no words came out. She just shook her head, her dark hair shifting like a curtain around her face. Rory stood, her chair scraping against the floor. She walked to the window, pulling the curtain aside to let in the dim light of Brick Lane. The street below was alive with the glow of neon signs and the murmur of voices, but here, in this quiet flat, it felt like the world had narrowed down to just the two of them. “What happened?” she asked, her voice steady despite the way her heart was pounding. “After I left.” Eva didn’t answer right away. When she did, her voice was quiet, like she was speaking to someone who wasn’t there. “You were gone. And then… things got complicated.” Rory turned, her back to the window. “Complicated how?” Eva’s fingers twined together in her lap. “I made a mistake.” “A big one.” Eva met her eyes, her own dark and unreadable. “Yes.” Rory’s chest tightened. She knew that look. She’d seen it in the mirror after Evan, the way the world had shifted beneath her feet and she hadn’t known how to stop it. “You loved him.” It wasn’t a question. Eva didn’t answer. “And he loved you back.” Still no answer. Rory’s breath hitched. She’d known, deep down, that this was where it was going. She’d known and still she’d come. Still she’d hoped. “You should’ve told me,” she said again, her voice breaking just a little. “Before you got involved with him.” Eva’s hands clenched into fists. “I didn’t know how to tell you. Not like this.” “Like what?” Eva’s voice was barely a whisper. “Like I was in love with someone else.” Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. She could feel the tears burning behind her eyes, the way her vision blurred at the edges. She swallowed hard, forcing the words out. “You should’ve told me. Before you let him hurt you.” Eva’s eyes filled with tears. “I didn’t know he would.” Rory turned away, her hands shaking. She could feel the weight of Eva’s gaze on her back, the way the air between them crackled with unsaid words. She wanted to scream, to run, to do anything but stand here in this quiet flat with the woman she loved and the pain of what they’d lost. “Why now?” she asked, her voice raw. “Why come back to me now?” Eva stood, her chair scraping against the floor. She walked to Rory, her hands cupping Rory’s face. “Because I can’t live without you.” Rory’s breath caught in her throat. She could feel Eva’s tears on her skin, the way her hands trembled as they held her face. She wanted to believe her, to let herself believe her, but the world had taught her to be careful. To be afraid. “You don’t know what you’re saying,” Rory whispered. Eva’s lips brushed against hers, soft and hesitant. “I know exactly what I’m saying.” Rory’s hands found Eva’s waist, pulling her closer. She could feel the heat of her body, the way her breath came quick and shallow against her lips. She wanted to believe her, to let herself believe her, but the world was a cruel place and it had a way of taking things away. “You should’ve told me,” Rory murmured against her lips. “Before it was too late.” Eva’s hands slid down to Rory’s hips, pulling her closer. “I’m telling you now.” Rory closed her eyes, letting herself feel the weight of Eva’s body against hers, the way her hands trembled as they explored the curve of her waist. She could feel the tears on her cheeks, the way her breath came quick and shallow against Eva’s lips. “You don’t know what you’re asking,” Rory whispered. Eva’s lips brushed against hers again, softer this time. “I know exactly what I’m asking.” Rory’s hands found Eva’s face, her fingers tangling in her dark hair. She could feel the weight of Eva’s tears on her skin, the way her breath came quick and shallow against her lips. She wanted to believe her, to let herself believe her, but the world had a way of taking things away. “You should’ve told me,” Rory murmured again, her voice breaking. “Before it was too late.” Eva’s hands slid down to Rory’s hips, pulling her closer. “I’m telling you now.” The world outside the window blurred, the glow of Brick Lane fading into the dark. Rory could feel Eva’s body against hers, the way her breath came quick and shallow against her lips. She could feel the weight of her tears on her skin, the way her hands trembled as they explored the curve of her waist. “You don’t know what you’re asking,” Rory whispered, her voice raw. Eva’s lips brushed against hers, soft and hesitant. “I know exactly what I’m asking.” Rory’s hands found Eva’s face, her fingers tangling in her dark hair. She could feel the weight of Eva’s tears on her skin, the way her breath came quick and shallow against her lips. She wanted to believe her, to let herself believe her, but the world had a way of taking things away. And yet, here she was. In this quiet flat with the woman she loved, the woman who had hurt her and left her and made her believe that she didn’t matter. But Eva was here now, her hands on Rory’s face, her breath on her lips, and Rory couldn’t bring herself to push her away. “You should’ve told me,” Rory whispered, her voice breaking. “Before it was too late.” Eva’s lips brushed against hers again, softer this time. “I’m telling you now.” And Rory let herself believe her.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory said finally, her voice low [finally]"
1"she said again, her voice breaking just a little [again, just]"
2"Rory murmured again, her voice breaking [again]"
93.7811% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1608
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.1542% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1608
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count3
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"weight"
count8
highlights
0"flickered"
1"trembled"
2"unreadable"
3"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences146
matches
0"knew that look"
1"knew that look"
2"believe that she"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean25.87
std19.42
cv0.751
sampleLengths
068
124
283
329
458
510
648
721
831
922
1055
1121
1237
138
1438
158
1646
1714
1819
1911
2023
2162
2217
2329
249
2511
263
2710
2835
297
305
313
3223
3319
3415
352
3614
3740
3810
3955
4013
4123
4246
438
4414
4553
4614
4714
4846
498
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was gauging"
1"was fleeting"
2"was pounding"
3"was speaking"
4"was going"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1323
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.027966742252456538
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0045351473922902496
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean10.99
std7.85
cv0.715
sampleLengths
025
114
229
322
42
514
616
730
823
911
1013
115
1211
1332
1415
157
163
1714
1831
193
205
2115
221
2316
2412
253
2617
275
2823
2919
3013
3110
329
332
3410
3526
361
375
383
394
4011
4118
425
435
443
458
4628
4710
4810
494
43.8356% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.22602739726027396
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners33
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she murmured against Rory’s hair, her voice muffled (murmur muffle)"
1"Eva said, sliding a mug toward her (say, slide)"
2"Rory said finally, her voice low (say finally)"
3"she said again, her voice breaking just a little (say again, break just)"
4"Rory whispered (whisper)"
5"Rory murmured against her lips (murmur)"
6"Rory whispered (whisper)"
7"Rory murmured again, her voice breaking (murmur again, break)"
8"Rory whispered, her voice raw (whisper)"
9"Rory whispered, her voice breaking (whisper, break)"
82.7512%