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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMNDKP9561RBWK5DMGPJ4J9
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Model:
Ministral 3B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
4.1s
Cost:
$0.000077
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The brass knocker scraped against the door like a fingernail on glass. Aurora Carter exhaled through her nose, the scent of roasted peppers and garlic from the Golden Empress lingering on her breath. The flat smelled of old paper and the faint, earthy tang of the cat curled around her ankles—Ptolemy, who had been asleep since the sun had gone down. She didn’t move until the lock clicked open. The door swung inward with a groan, and the sudden light from the hallway blinded her for half a second. Then Lucien Moreau stood there, his tailored charcoal suit crisp against the damp evening air, his cane resting against the doorframe like an extension of himself. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and something in his gaze made her pulse jump. “Aurora,” he said, voice low, smooth as aged whiskey. “I didn’t expect to see you here.” She stepped back, her fingers twitching toward the scar on her wrist, the one from the childhood accident that had left her with a habit of biting her lip when she
was nervous
. “You didn’t say you’d be coming.” “No,” he admitted, his lips quirking. “I didn’t.” The flat was smaller than she remembered, the shelves of books and scrolls stretching up like a library of secrets. The air smelled of ink and something older, something warm and human—like the scent of her own home. She turned, her gaze flicking over the clutter, and her breath hitched. The way the light caught the edges of the papers, the way the cat’s tail
flicked
against the floor, made her
feel
like she
was stepping
back into something she’d once known, but had
tried to
forget. “You’re not supposed to be here,” she said, but the words sounded hollow even to her. Lucien didn’t answer right away. He just stood there, watching her, the way he used to when they were younger, when the world had been simpler. When she’d thought he might still be worth fighting for. “I’m not,” he finally said. “But I am.” The door to the bedroom creaked open behind her, and the scent of lavender and something faintly metallic hit her nose. Aurora whirled around, her heart hammering. Eva stood there, arms crossed, her dark eyes narrowing. “You’re not supposed to be here, either.” Lucien’s smile was slow, knowing. “Eva. How nice to see you.” Eva’s gaze
flicked
between them, sharp as a blade. “You’re not supposed to be here, Lucien.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. “Eva, this isn’t—” “It’s exactly what it looks like,” Eva cut in, her voice sharp as the edge of a knife. “He’s here because he’s been looking for you. And now he’s here, and you’re here, and I’m not sure what the hell that means.” Lucien’s fingers tightened around the cane’s ivory handle. “I came because I wanted to see you.” Aurora’s breath caught. “You came because you *wanted* to see me?” Eva’s eyes burned with something
unreadable
. “You two have history. I know you’re not exactly friends, but you’re not enemies either. So if you’re going to be here, you should probably figure out what the hell you’re doing.” Lucien’s gaze never left Aurora’s. “I’m here because I’m not letting you walk away from this again.” The air between them crackled, thick with
unspoken
words and years of
unspoken
things. Aurora’s fingers curled into the fabric of her shirt, her pulse roaring in her ears. She’d thought she’d left this place behind—left the hurt, the fear, the way he’d looked at her like she was something precious, something fragile, something he’d been willing to break for. But here he
was, standing
in her flat, and the past wasn’t just a memory anymore. It was a
weight
pressing down on her shoulders, a ghost at the door, and she wasn’t sure she could handle it. Eva exhaled
sharply
, her shoulders slumping. “Well. I guess we’re stuck with this.” Lucien stepped closer, his voice a low rumble. “We’re not stuck.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “We’re not?” He reached out, his fingers brushing hers, warm and sure. “No. We’re not.” The cat, Ptolemy, stretched
lazily
and padded over, his tail swishing against the floor. He purred, as if sensing the tension, and curled around Aurora’s ankles, pressing his head against her leg. She didn’t pull away. Lucien’s thumb brushed the scar on her wrist, the one that had been a reminder of the accident that had changed everything. “You’re safe here,” he murmured. Aurora’s lips parted, but no words came. Because she knew, even if she didn’t want to admit it, that he was right. She was safe here. With him. Eva sighed, rubbing her temples. “Fine. But if you two start doing anything stupid, I’m calling Silas.” Lucien’s smile was slow, dangerous. “We’ll keep that in mind.” Aurora watched them, the way they moved together, the way they looked at each other like they’d been waiting for this moment their whole lives. And for the first time in years, she didn’t
feel
like running. She felt like staying.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
77.7778%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"he finally said [finally]"
76.3314%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
845
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"lazily"
count
1
1
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
highlights
0
"lazily"
1
"sharply"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
28.9941%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
845
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"flicked"
count
2
1
word
"unspoken"
count
2
2
word
"unreadable"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicked"
1
"unspoken"
2
"unreadable"
3
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
53
matches
0
"was nervous"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
53
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
72
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
30.04
std
24.03
cv
0.8
sampleLengths
0
69
1
63
2
16
3
39
4
8
5
87
6
16
7
44
8
43
9
11
10
16
11
6
12
42
13
16
14
11
15
38
16
17
17
98
18
13
19
11
20
5
21
13
22
36
23
27
24
28
25
17
26
10
27
41
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
53
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
116
matches
0
"was stepping"
1
"was, standing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
669
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
20
adverbRatio
0.029895366218236172
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.005979073243647235
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
72
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
72
mean
11.68
std
8.54
cv
0.731
sampleLengths
0
12
1
21
2
28
3
8
4
20
5
26
6
17
7
9
8
7
9
33
10
6
11
6
12
2
13
20
14
18
15
12
16
37
17
16
18
5
19
21
20
10
21
5
22
3
23
21
24
6
25
9
26
7
27
5
28
6
29
9
30
7
31
3
32
3
33
18
34
24
35
8
36
8
37
3
38
8
39
6
40
32
41
5
42
12
43
14
44
15
45
31
46
16
47
22
48
6
49
7
47.2222%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.2777777777777778
totalSentences
72
uniqueOpeners
20
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"he said, voice low, smooth as aged whiskey (say, voice age)"
1
"he admitted, his lips quirking (admit, quirk)"
2
"she said, but the words sounded hollow even to her (say, sound)"
3
"he finally said (finally say)"
4
"Eva cut in, her voice sharp as the edge of a knife (eva cut in her voice sharp as the edge of a knife)"
5
"he murmured (murmur)"
84.1368%