Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMNEVZH25MKSCYW12MCJSQ3

Run Details

Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.008806

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and rust, the kind of scent that clung to the back of your throat like a bad memory. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the last rung of the maintenance ladder, her boots hitting the platform with a sharp *clack* that echoed down the empty tunnel. The beam of her torch cut through the gloom, illuminating peeling posters from the 1970s and the skeletal remains of turnstiles long since stripped for scrap. "Quinn, over here." She turned. Detective Sergeant Cole stood near the far wall, his hands shoved deep in the pockets of his overcoat, his breath fogging in the cold air. The station’s emergency lights cast his face in sickly yellow, deepening the shadows under his eyes. Quinn adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, its strap creaking. "What’ve we got?" Cole jerked his chin toward the tracks. "Body. Male, late twenties. No ID. Looks like a junkie OD at first glance—track marks, foam around the mouth—but the ME’s already raising eyebrows." Quinn stepped closer, her torch sweeping over the scene. The victim lay sprawled on his back, one arm flung out as if reaching for something. His skin had an unnatural pallor, almost waxy under the harsh light. But it was the eyes that made her pause. Wide, staring, the irises ringed with a faint, shimmering blue—like oil on water. "Toxicology’s going to take a while," Cole said, "but I’m telling you, this isn’t just smack. Something’s off." Quinn crouched, her knees popping. She didn’t touch the body, just studied it. The victim’s fingers were curled into claws, the nails split and caked with dirt. Not the kind of grime you picked up on the streets. This was older. Deeper. She stood, brushing her hands on her trousers. "Where’s the rest of the team?" "On their way. I was first response." Cole hesitated. "You think this is connected to the other two?" Quinn’s jaw tightened. Three bodies in as many weeks, all young men, all found in abandoned or liminal spaces—an old warehouse, a derelict church, and now this. All with the same eerie blue ring in their eyes. All with no signs of struggle, no defensive wounds. Just… empty. She didn’t answer him. Instead, she turned her torch toward the wall behind the body. The beam caught something metallic, half-buried in the gravel beside the tracks. A small, brass compass, its casing dulled with verdigris. The needle wasn’t pointing north. Quinn picked it up, turning it over in her palm. The face was etched with strange symbols, spirals and jagged lines that made her eyes ache if she looked at them too long. The needle spun lazily, then settled, pointing toward the far end of the platform. Cole frowned. "What the hell is that?" "Don’t know." Quinn’s voice was tight. She slipped the compass into her coat pocket. "But I don’t like it." She moved down the platform, her torchlight flickering over the tiled walls. The station was a relic, its name—*Camden Road*—still visible beneath layers of grime and graffiti. But something was wrong with the graffiti. The tags were sharp, precise, almost… deliberate. Like they’d been painted with a purpose. Then she saw it. A symbol, spray-painted in what looked like blood, half-hidden behind a crumbling pillar. A circle, bisected by a jagged line, with smaller marks radiating outward like rays. It wasn’t a gang tag. It wasn’t anything she recognized. But she’d seen it before. Three years ago, in the case notes of her dead partner. Quinn’s breath hitched. DS Morris had been investigating a string of disappearances before he vanished. The files had been thin, redacted in places, but she remembered the symbols. The same damn symbols. Cole appeared at her shoulder. "Quinn? You okay?" She didn’t answer. Instead, she pulled out her phone, snapping a photo of the graffiti. The flash illuminated the platform for a split second, and in that moment, she saw something else. A shadow. Not a trick of the light. Not a smear of dirt. A *shadow*, clinging to the wall like spilled ink, too dark, too *wrong*. It rippled, just for a second, as if disturbed by the flash. Then it was gone. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat. She turned slowly, scanning the platform. Nothing. Just the body, the tracks, the empty air. Cole was watching her, his expression unreadable. "Quinn. Talk to me." She exhaled sharply. "We need to secure this scene. No one in or out until forensics is done. And I want a full sweep of the tunnels. Every inch." Cole’s eyebrows lifted. "You think there’s someone else down here?" Quinn’s fingers twitched toward the compass in her pocket. The needle was still spinning. "I think," she said carefully, "that this isn’t just a body. It’s a message." She turned away from him, her torchlight cutting through the dark. The compass was warm against her skin, almost pulsing. Like it was alive. And for the first time in three years, Harlow Quinn let herself consider the possibility that her partner hadn’t just died. He’d been taken.
total_cost0.008806

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.133
76.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount854
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slowly"
2"sharply"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount854
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"gloom"
2"etched"
3"pulse"
4"scanning"
5"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords5
totalWords851
ratio0.006
matches
0"clack"
1"Camden Road"
2"shadow"
3"wrong"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount720
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow2
Quinn11
Sergeant1
Cole8
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Cole"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.736
windowScore1
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reaching for something"
1"looked like blood, half-hidden behind a c"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount851
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean25.03
std18.22
cv0.728
sampleLengths
079
13
243
316
431
559
618
742
814
918
1048
1141
1247
137
1419
1548
164
1737
185
1911
2032
218
2232
232
2436
254
2621
2711
2829
2910
3028
3124
3221
333
83.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences81
matches
0"were curled"
1"was etched"
2"been painted"
3"was gone"
4"been taken"
23.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs113
matches
0"wasn’t pointing"
1"was watching"
2"was still spinning"
49.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences92
ratio0.033
matches
0"Wide, staring, the irises ringed with a faint, shimmering blue—like oil on water."
1"Three bodies in as many weeks, all young men, all found in abandoned or liminal spaces—an old warehouse, a derelict church, and now this."
2"The station was a relic, its name—*Camden Road*—still visible beneath layers of grime and graffiti."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount724
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same eerie blue ring"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03591160220994475
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006906077348066298
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean9.25
std6.58
cv0.711
sampleLengths
026
127
226
33
42
525
616
713
83
97
1024
119
1216
1312
149
1513
1618
175
188
1914
2011
213
221
238
246
259
269
273
2824
2910
309
311
321
334
3411
3512
369
375
3810
3923
4014
412
425
436
448
455
4612
4715
487
496
55.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3695652173913043
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences71
matches
0"Instead, she turned her torch"
1"Then she saw it."
2"Instead, she pulled out her"
3"Then it was gone."
4"Just the body, the tracks,"
ratio0.07
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences71
matches
0"His skin had an unnatural"
1"She didn’t touch the body,"
2"She stood, brushing her hands"
3"She didn’t answer him."
4"She slipped the compass into"
5"She moved down the platform,"
6"It wasn’t a gang tag."
7"It wasn’t anything she recognized."
8"She didn’t answer."
9"It rippled, just for a"
10"She turned slowly, scanning the"
11"She exhaled sharply."
12"she said carefully"
13"She turned away from him,"
14"He’d been taken."
ratio0.211
93.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences71
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
2"The beam of her torch"
3"Detective Sergeant Cole stood near"
4"The station’s emergency lights cast"
5"Quinn adjusted the worn leather"
6"Cole jerked his chin toward"
7"Quinn stepped closer, her torch"
8"The victim lay sprawled on"
9"His skin had an unnatural"
10"Quinn crouched, her knees popping."
11"She didn’t touch the body,"
12"The victim’s fingers were curled"
13"This was older."
14"She stood, brushing her hands"
15"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
16"She didn’t answer him."
17"The beam caught something metallic,"
18"A small, brass compass, its"
19"The needle wasn’t pointing north."
ratio0.732
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and rust, the kind of scent that clung to the back of your throat like a bad memory."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the last rung of the maintenance ladder, her boots hitting the platform with a sharp *clack* that echoed down the empty tunne…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1880%