| 100.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 0 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | |
| 82.2695% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 1692 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 76.3593% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 1692 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fragmented" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "delve" | | 3 | "echoing" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 19 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 19 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 19 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 140.5 | | std | 103.36 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 344 | | 5 | 187 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 359 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 131 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 174 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 19 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 264 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.6946% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1669 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "inexorable; strip-mined shoppers" | | 1 | "sparse approximate covered Gardner" | | 2 | "sensory faithful obvious Disability" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.02396644697423607 | | lyAdverbCount | 40 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02396644697423607 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 19 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 19 | | mean | 88.74 | | std | 99.83 | | cv | 1.125 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 132 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 98 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 80 | | 11 | 117 | | 12 | 187 | | 13 | 418 | | 14 | 65 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 84 | | 18 | 246 |
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| 100.0000% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 1 | | totalSentences | 19 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 100.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 0 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | |