Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADVTT9HPPNCQNPA88G54

Run Details

Duration:
30.2s
Cost:
$0.001315

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open with a reluctant creak, revealing Aurora Carter, who stood poised in the small entryway of Eva's flat. She squinted against the soft glow of early evening light filtering through the dusty windows, fully expecting to find a pile of unread books waiting for her and Ptolemy's impatient meows filling the air. But instead, her gaze locked onto Lucien Moreau, a figure carved from sharp angles, elegantly framed against the cluttered chaos of her refuge. Her heart skipped a beat, an involuntary reaction she wished she could suppress. “What are you doing here?” The words tumbled out, edged with a mixture of disbelief and something deeper, somewhere just beneath the surface. Lucien's eyes, one amber and the other an inky black, glimmered with a confidence that cut through her hesitation. He wore a fitted charcoal suit, tailored to perfection, the kind of attire that made reality bend toward whatever he wanted. His slicked-back platinum hair glinted in the light, accentuating the sharp lines of his cheekbones. “I need to talk,” he said, his voice smooth as silk, yet with an undercurrent of urgency that made her pulse quicken. Rory's stomach twisted, torn between the familiarity of the man standing before her and the barrage of memories that came rushing back. After months of silence, his sudden presence felt like the sharp pang of an old wound reopening. “Talk? You show up unannounced at my place after—after what happened, and you think we can just talk?” She tried to sound indignant, but the tremor in her voice betrayed her resolve. Looking past her into the cramped flat, Lucien's lips curled into a wry smile. “It seems your home remains as… eclectic as ever.” She shot him an incredulous look, and behind her, the tabby cat, Ptolemy, wove between her legs, chirping an inquisitive greeting. “Not that it’s any of your business, but I get things done around here.” Rory crossed her arms, a weak façade of defiance. “Let me come in.” His gaze softened, that glimmer of mischief in his eyes muted by an earnestness she hadn’t known was possible from him. Unbidden, memories emerged—secret smiles in shadowed corners, the brush of a hand that still tingled in her mind. With an exasperated sigh, she stepped aside, opening the door wide, reluctant but unable to withstand the pull of their shared past. Lucien swept in as if he were entering a ballroom rather than a cramped flat on Brick Lane, and somehow, the space felt both smaller and warmer. “Nice place," he said, surveying the dim room cluttered with stacks of books, scrolls, and scattered research notes. “Best I can do on a delivery girl’s salary,” she replied, fighting to keep her tone neutral, but the bitterness curled at the edges, hinting at deeper pains. Rory closed the door with a faint click and leaned against it, arms still crossed defensively. “Would it be too audacious to say it looks like the refuge of a brilliant mind?” He leaned casually against a bookshelf, his confidence at ease, and Rory hated how it made her stomach twist. “What do you want, Lucien?” she asked, cutting through his charm. It felt easier to confront him head-on, to seize the reins of this moment before it spiraled beyond her control. He hesitated, the flicker of something unreadable flashing across his face. “It’s about the ledger.” That one word sent a chill rippling through her. The ledger—the connection between their worlds, the reason they had drifted apart. “I told you I wasn’t getting involved again.” “It's not a choice at this point. You need to listen.” His voice deepened, polished with his usual poise but tinged with urgency. “How do you know that I care?” she shot back, half-biting back the hurt. “You didn’t seem to care much before.” “Forgive me if I believed you were safer without the complications.” His gaze bore into hers, a challenge wrapped in regret. “I was wrong. I came to find you.” “Find me?” she echoed incredulously, feeling the weight of his past judgments lay heavy between them like a wall. “What’s your plan now, exactly? Show up, act like nothing happened?” He straightened, the careless demeanor giving way to a more serious tone, the typical teasing aura dissolved like mist. “I know things have been complicated, Aurora, but London is unraveling. You’re part of this—part of something larger than both of us.” The pulse of the moment thickened with tension, and she took a breath, trying to quell the anxiety curling in her stomach. “And you think that just because you’re here, I’ll be ready to jump back in?” “I think you might realize that you don’t have a choice,” he replied, a softness surfacing in his voice that beckoned with memories she had buried. “I can offer you protection, a place in this.” “And what would that mean for us, Lucien?” Her heart raced as she bravely pressed on, scanning his expression for the slightest inkling of sincerity beyond his polished mask. The silence stretched between them, the air thick with unspoken emotions—a coiled tension she didn’t fully understand. Lucien pushed off the bookshelf, closing the distance between them, deliberately invading the space that had once felt safe. “It means I still want you in my life, Rory. It means I’m offering you a chance to fight this together.” Her resolve wavered, torn between longing and the scars of her past. “Together? That’s rich, coming from the one who left without a word.” “I had my reasons,” he said, exasperation igniting his voice. “You don’t understand what I was trying to protect you from.” “Protect me? Or push me away? You think I’m some fragile flower who can’t handle herself?” Anger flared within her, a fierce fire lighting her blue eyes. “I am capable of taking care of myself!” “I know that. I never doubted it for a second.” Lucien’s voice softened again, almost soothing, his earnest vulnerability a stark contrast to his earlier bravado. “But this world isn’t what it seems. I thought I could keep you out of it. I was wrong.” Her breath hitched in her throat, the raw honesty striking deeper than she expected. Each word seemed to peel away the layers of hurt, the resentment she had so carefully cultivated since leaving him behind. Rory’s heart fluttered at the way he said her name, as if she were something precious. “And now, what? You think you can just waltz back in after all this time?” “I’m risking a lot by being here,” he said quietly, stepping closer until he could almost reach out and touch her. “But you mean something to me, Rory. More than I let on before.” She could feel the heat radiating between them, a magnetic force that beckoned her to lower her guard, to acknowledge the unspoken bond that still lingered in the air. But doubt clawed at her resolve. “You left, Lucien. You can’t just come back and expect everything to be fine.” “There’s no guarantee that it will be,” he admitted, vulnerability breaking through his usual charm. “But I have to try.” Their eyes locked, an electric connection igniting in the dimly lit room, pulling away the shadows that had long-since formed. Around them, old memories haunted the walls, memories layered with laughter and introspection. Rory’s heart thudded painfully against her ribcage, desperate, as a surge of emotions washed over her. “What if I don’t want to fight? What if I just want to forget everything?” The words slipped from her lips, raw and revealing. “Then you can’t just walk away,” he said, desperation creeping in, vulnerable and intense. He reached a hand toward her, hesitating, offering a connection stuck in a nexus between longing and fear. She glanced at his hand, so close yet so far, every nerve in her body alive with the heat of possibility. “You don’t get to decide what I want. Not anymore.” “I know you’re stronger than that,” he said softly. “I want to be part of your fight, whatever that means. Will you at least hear me out?” The room pulsed with unspoken desires, ancient longings igniting like embers in her chest. The walls felt as though they were closing in, a mixture of old dreams colliding with sharp reality. Amy’s deep voice echoed in her mind—she had told her to be brave. “Talk,” she sighed, her resolve flickering like a candle flame, reluctant but glowing. “But if this goes sideways, don’t think for one second I’ll hold back.” “Fair enough,” Lucien replied, relief cracking through that perfectly polished facade. Stepping closer, he lowered his cane, resting it against the table as he leaned in, eyes steady and focused. “That’s the Rory I know.” With that, she realized how tangled their lives had become, how their paths had intertwined yet spiraled apart. Unraveled, yet still bound by choices they had made, and the choice looming now hung heavy above them. And as they began to talk, to weave their stories anew, Rory felt the thrum of hope murmur deep within her—an echo of what could be, promising a connection that had not yet fully withered.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said quietly, stepping closer until he could almost reach out and touch her [quietly, almost]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"she sighed, her resolve flickering like a candle flame, reluctant but glowing [like]"
3"Lucien replied, relief cracking through that perfectly polished facade [perfectly]"
74.0260% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1540
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"deliberately"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1540
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"facade"
count1
1
word"pang"
count1
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"wavered"
count1
5
word"fluttered"
count1
6
word"looming"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count3
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"magnetic"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count2
15
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"facade"
1"pang"
2"tinged"
3"flicker"
4"wavered"
5"fluttered"
6"looming"
7"silk"
8"unspoken"
9"unreadable"
10"magnetic"
11"stark"
12"weight"
13"echo"
14"echoed"
15"unraveling"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"softened, that glimmer"
1"know that I"
2"realize that you"
73.4733% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean38.23
std15.56
cv0.407
sampleLengths
078
136
277
371
423
544
643
767
844
935
1031
1115
1229
1323
1421
1529
1630
1741
1837
1935
2029
2157
2224
2321
2435
2545
2666
2734
2849
2920
3049
3124
3232
3331
3427
3545
3626
3735
3836
3935
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs203
matches
0"were entering"
1"were closing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1080
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03796296296296296
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.014814814814814815
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
98.6392% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean17.38
std6.89
cv0.397
sampleLengths
021
134
223
313
423
519
621
715
822
922
1017
1132
1214
139
1421
1523
1625
1718
1822
1927
2018
2128
2216
2335
2411
2520
2611
274
289
2912
308
3123
3214
337
3421
358
3619
3711
3819
3922
4022
4115
4226
439
4429
4517
4619
4721
4812
4912
67.4242% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4318181818181818
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners38
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"he said, his voice smooth as silk, yet with an undercurrent of urgency that made her pulse quicken (say, make quicken)"
1"he said, surveying the dim room cluttered with stacks of books, scrolls, and scattered research notes (say, survey clutter scroll)"
2"she replied, fighting to keep her tone neutral, but the bitterness curled at the edges, hinting at deeper pains (reply, fight keep curl hint)"
3"he replied, a softness surfacing in his voice that beckoned with memories she had buried (reply, surface beckon bury)"
4"he said, exasperation igniting his voice (say, ignite)"
5"he said quietly, stepping closer until he could almost reach out and touch her (say quietly, step almost reach out touch)"
6"he admitted, vulnerability breaking through his usual charm (admit, break)"
7"he said, desperation creeping in, vulnerable and intense (say, creep in)"
8"he said softly (say softly)"
9"she sighed, her resolve flickering like a candle flame, reluctant but glowing (sigh, flicker like glow)"
10"Lucien replied, relief cracking through that perfectly polished facade (reply, crack perfectly polish)"
78.5756%