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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADVVRRC04MDS7A0QVYRB
Run Details
Model:
Mistral NeMO
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
10.2s
Cost:
$0.000388
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
77.79%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
97.92%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
56.38%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
91.64%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
0.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
88.54%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
98.91%
Sentence length variance
(details)
33.96%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
18.06%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
37.67%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
97.09%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
25.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
74.6539%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The rain lashed at Detective
Harlow Quinn's face, each drop stinging like a tiny, icy needle.
Her breath misted in the
chill
night air as she pounded after the fleeing figure, her worn leather
watch
glinting
under the sickly glow of the streetlamps.
The suspect, Tomás Herrera, darted
around a corner, his olive skin and dark hair blending with the shadows.
Quinn's heart hammered in her
chest, her sharp jaw set in determination.
She wasn't about to lose
him now.
The chase had begun in
the dimly lit confines of The Raven's Nest, Silas' bar in Soho.
Quinn had been nursing a
drink, her brown eyes
scanning
the crowd, when she'd spotted Herrera.
He'd been skittish, his warm
brown eyes darting
nervously
, and she'd known he was up to something.
She'd followed him out into
the rain, and now they
were dancing
this dangerous
dance
through the city streets. Quinn skidded around the corner, her shoes splashing in puddles.
Herrera was nowhere to be
seen. She paused, her chest heaving, listening.
A faint scuffling sound echoed
from a nearby alley.
She drew her gun, her
military precision kicking in, and moved towards the noise.
The alley was narrow, the
buildings on either side
looming
like monoliths, their windows dark and empty. Rainwater gurgled in the gutters, and the stench of rotting food and something more
sinister
hung heavy in the air
. Quinn's instincts prickled. This was wrong.
This wasn't just a chase
anymore. She saw the grate then, half-hidden under a pile of refuse.
It was ajar, just enough
for a man to squeeze through. Herrera's scarred forearm was visible, his fingers curled around the edge of the grate. He
was pulling
himself up, his Saint Christopher medallion catching the faint light. "Herrera!" Quinn barked, her gun trained on him. "Stop right there!"
He froze, his head turning
slightly
to look at her.
Then, with a sudden burst
of strength, he hauled himself up and disappeared into the darkness. Quinn cursed under her breath.
She couldn't let him get
away, not after everything she'd seen tonight.
She holstered her gun, grabbed
the edge of the grate, and pulled herself up. The metal was slick with rain, and she had to use all her strength to heave herself through the narrow opening.
She found herself in a
tunnel, the air damp and heavy with the scent of earth and something else, something ancient and wrong. The tunnel was barely tall enough for her to stand upright, the walls slick with moisture.
She could hear water dripping
somewhere in the distance, and the faint
echo
of Herrera's
footsteps
. Quinn followed the sound, her heart
pounding
in her ears. The tunnel
seemed to
go on forever, twisting and turning like a snake.
She could feel the weight
of the earth above her, the press of it against her skin.
It was oppressive, claustrophobic, and
she had to fight the urge to turn back.
Finally, the tunnel opened up
into a vast cavern. Quinn stepped inside, her eyes widening in shock.
She was in some kind
of underground market, a sprawling labyrinth of stalls and tents.
The air was thick with
the scent of exotic spices, the clamor of voices, and the hum of strange,
otherworldly
music.
She'd heard rumors of this
place, the Veil Market, a black market for supernatural goods and services.
It was said to move
locations every full moon, and tonight was the night.
She'd never expected to find
herself here, though, chasing after a former paramedic with a mysterious past. Quinn
scanned
the crowd, her eyes searching for Herrera. He was nowhere to be seen, but she spotted a man in a nearby stall, his eyes glowing with an
otherworldly
light. He
was selling
what looked like potions, their contents bubbling and smoking in glass vials. Beside him, a woman
was haggling
over a small, writhing creature that
looked like a cross between a snake and a
spider. Quinn shuddered, her grip tightening on her gun. This was dangerous territory, and she was woefully unprepared. But she couldn't turn back now. Not when she was so close to catching Herrera. She moved deeper into the market, her eyes
scanning
the crowd. She passed stalls selling enchanted artifacts, banned alchemical substances, and information whispered in hushed tones. She saw creatures she couldn't even
begin to
identify, their eyes following her as she passed, their expressions wary. Suddenly, she saw Herrera. He was at the far end of the market, his back to her as he spoke to a hooded figure. Quinn's heart leapt in her throat. She raised her gun, her finger hovering over the trigger. But something held her back. This was too public, too risky. She couldn't just shoot him here, not with all these people around. She lowered her gun, her mind
racing
. She needed to get closer, needed to hear what they
were saying
. She needed to understand what
was going
on here, what Herrera
was involved
in. She moved towards them, her steps silent, her breath held tight in her chest. She was close now, close enough to hear their voices, to see the
tension
in Herrera's shoulders. She was close enough to see the
glint
of something metallic in the hooded figure's hand.
Suddenly, Herrera turned, his eyes
widening as he saw her. He said something to the figure, something urgent and low, and then he
was running
, pushing past the crowd, disappearing into the maze of stalls. Quinn cursed, her heart
pounding
. She took off after him, her gun still in her hand.
She couldn't let him get
away, not now, not after everything she'd seen. She chased him through the market, her eyes fixed on his back. She could hear the shouts of the market-goers, the clatter of falling goods, the hum of fear and excitement. She
could feel
the press of the crowd around her, their bodies hot and sweaty, their breath mingling with hers. Herrera was fast, his body lean and muscular from years of working as a paramedic. But Quinn
was driven
, her years of service fueling her pursuit. She could see him up ahead, his dark hair a
beacon
in the crowd. She could hear his ragged breath, the
pounding
of his heart.
Suddenly, he skidded to a
halt, turning to face her. His eyes were wild, his face flushed with exertion. He held something in his hand, something small and metallic. A bone token, she realized, her heart sinking. He
was going
to use it to escape, to disappear into the shadows. "Herrera," she panted, her gun trained on him. "It's over. You can't run anymore." He looked at her, his warm brown eyes filled with a mix of fear and defiance. Then, with a sudden movement, he threw the bone token to the ground. It
shattered
, the pieces scattering like bones on the cold earth. Quinn stared at him, confusion and shock warring within her. "What are you doing?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. Herrera took a deep breath, his shoulders slumping in defeat. "I can't run anymore, Detective," he said, his voice hoarse. "I can't keep living like this, looking over my shoulder, always afraid." Quinn lowered her gun, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She didn't understand what
was happening
here, didn't understand what Herrera
was involved
in. But she knew one thing for sure - this was only the beginning. This was just the first step into a world she didn't understand, a world filled with danger and darkness. But she was a detective, and she'd made a promise to herself, to her fallen partner, to never stop searching for the truth.
No matter where it led
her, no matter how dangerous the path. And so, with a deep breath, she stepped forward, her hand reaching out to cuff Herrera. She was ready to face whatever came next, ready to dive headfirst into the darkness.
Because that was who she
was, who she'd always been. Detective Harlow Quinn, the woman who chased the shadows, who hunted the truth, no matter the cost.
total_cost
0.0003876
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
7
tagDensity
0.714
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
77.79%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1351
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"nervously"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"suddenly"
count
3
3
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"nervously"
1
"slightly"
2
"suddenly"
3
"barely above a whisper"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1351
totalAiIsms
28
found
0
word
"chill"
count
1
1
word
"glinting"
count
1
2
word
"scanning"
count
2
3
word
"dancing"
count
1
4
word
"dance"
count
1
5
word
"echoed"
count
1
6
word
"looming"
count
1
7
word
"sinister"
count
1
8
word
"echo"
count
1
9
word
"footsteps"
count
1
10
word
"pounding"
count
4
11
word
"could feel"
count
2
12
word
"weight"
count
1
13
word
"oppressive"
count
1
14
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
15
word
"scanned"
count
1
16
word
"racing"
count
1
17
word
"tension"
count
1
18
word
"glint"
count
1
19
word
"beacon"
count
1
20
word
"shattered"
count
1
21
word
"whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"chill"
1
"glinting"
2
"scanning"
3
"dancing"
4
"dance"
5
"echoed"
6
"looming"
7
"sinister"
8
"echo"
9
"footsteps"
10
"pounding"
11
"could feel"
12
"weight"
13
"oppressive"
14
"otherworldly"
15
"scanned"
16
"racing"
17
"tension"
18
"glint"
19
"beacon"
20
"shattered"
21
"whisper"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
2
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart hammered in her chest"
1
"The air was thick with"
2
"hung heavy in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
103
matches
0
"t in determination"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
103
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"begin to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
106
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
27
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1352
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
3
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
46
wordCount
1316
uniqueNames
12
maxNameDensity
1.29
worstName
"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Detective
2
Harlow
2
Quinn
17
Tomás
1
Herrera
15
Raven
1
Nest
1
Saint
1
Christopher
1
Veil
1
Market
1
Suddenly
3
persons
0
"Harlow"
1
"Quinn"
2
"Tomás"
3
"Herrera"
4
"Raven"
5
"Saint"
6
"Christopher"
places
0
"Detective"
1
"Market"
globalScore
0.854
windowScore
0.833
97.92%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
96
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"looked like potions, their contents bubbl"
1
"looked like a cross between a snake and a"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1352
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
106
matches
(empty)
56.38%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
30
mean
45.07
std
15.65
cv
0.347
sampleLengths
0
80
1
69
2
45
3
49
4
49
5
11
6
26
7
52
8
55
9
54
10
53
11
48
12
68
13
32
14
45
15
63
16
33
17
47
18
35
19
29
20
51
21
51
22
50
23
14
24
40
25
22
26
32
27
56
28
35
29
58
91.64%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
103
matches
0
"was said"
1
"was involved"
2
"was driven"
3
"was involved"
0.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
8
totalVerbs
226
matches
0
"were dancing"
1
"was pulling"
2
"was selling"
3
"was haggling"
4
"were saying"
5
"was going"
6
"was running"
7
"was happening"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
1
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
106
ratio
0.009
matches
0
"But she knew one thing for sure - this was only the beginning."
88.54%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
113
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
6
adverbRatio
0.05309734513274336
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.017699115044247787
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
106
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
98.91%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
106
mean
12.75
std
5.07
cv
0.397
sampleLengths
0
16
1
27
2
18
3
12
4
7
5
17
6
16
7
17
8
19
9
10
10
6
11
6
12
9
13
14
14
17
15
20
16
3
17
3
18
6
19
11
20
11
21
14
22
13
23
8
24
3
25
10
26
16
27
5
28
12
29
14
30
21
31
23
32
16
33
16
34
10
35
13
36
17
37
14
38
9
39
8
40
15
41
21
42
17
43
14
44
17
45
9
46
22
47
15
48
22
49
8
33.96%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
17
diversityRatio
0.22641509433962265
totalSentences
106
uniqueOpeners
24
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
6
totalSentences
103
matches
0
"Then, with a sudden burst"
1
"Finally, the tunnel opened up"
2
"Suddenly, she saw Herrera."
3
"Suddenly, Herrera turned, his eyes"
4
"Suddenly, he skidded to a"
5
"Then, with a sudden movement,"
ratio
0.058
18.06%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
52
totalSentences
103
matches
0
"Her breath misted in the"
1
"She wasn't about to lose"
2
"He'd been skittish, his warm"
3
"She'd followed him out into"
4
"She paused, her chest heaving,"
5
"She drew her gun, her"
6
"She saw the grate then,"
7
"It was ajar, just enough"
8
"He was pulling himself up,"
9
"He froze, his head turning"
10
"She couldn't let him get"
11
"She holstered her gun, grabbed"
12
"She found herself in a"
13
"She could hear water dripping"
14
"She could feel the weight"
15
"It was oppressive, claustrophobic, and"
16
"She was in some kind"
17
"She'd heard rumors of this"
18
"It was said to move"
19
"She'd never expected to find"
ratio
0.505
37.67%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
87
totalSentences
103
matches
0
"The rain lashed at Detective"
1
"Her breath misted in the"
2
"The suspect, Tomás Herrera, darted"
3
"Quinn's heart hammered in her"
4
"She wasn't about to lose"
5
"The chase had begun in"
6
"Quinn had been nursing a"
7
"He'd been skittish, his warm"
8
"She'd followed him out into"
9
"Quinn skidded around the corner,"
10
"Herrera was nowhere to be"
11
"She paused, her chest heaving,"
12
"A faint scuffling sound echoed"
13
"She drew her gun, her"
14
"The alley was narrow, the"
15
"Rainwater gurgled in the gutters,"
16
"Quinn's instincts prickled."
17
"This was wrong."
18
"This wasn't just a chase"
19
"She saw the grate then,"
ratio
0.845
97.09%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
2
totalSentences
103
matches
0
"No matter where it led"
1
"Because that was who she"
ratio
0.019
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
75
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"He was selling what looked like potions, their contents bubbling and smoking in glass vials."
1
"Beside him, a woman was haggling over a small, writhing creature that looked like a cross between a snake and a spider."
25.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
5
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Quinn barked (bark)"
1
"she panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences
7
tagDensity
0.571
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.5
effectiveRatio
0.5
74.6539%