| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.56 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 82.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 837 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 837 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "intensity" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "unspoken" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "determined" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "resolve" | | 12 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | | |
| 86.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 841 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 748 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.8 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 4 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 841 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 28.03 | | std | 16.35 | | cv | 0.583 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 56 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 132 | | matches | | |
| 50.69% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau leaned casually against the doorframe, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — studying her with an intensity that made her heart skip a beat." | | 1 | "He took a step closer, the scent of his cologne — something dark and spicy — enveloping her." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 746 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.030831099195710455 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006702412868632708 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 13.56 | | std | 7.66 | | cv | 0.565 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 62.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3870967741935484 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she stepped back, putting" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't expected to see" | | 1 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 2 | "She swallowed, trying to ignore" | | 3 | "she replied, her voice steadier" | | 4 | "He straightened, the ivory-handled cane" | | 5 | "she explained, gesturing to the" | | 6 | "he said, his tone softer" | | 7 | "She shrugged, brushing a strand" | | 8 | "she replied, glancing up at" | | 9 | "He smiled, a genuine warmth" | | 10 | "She could feel Lucien's eyes" | | 11 | "It had been months since" | | 12 | "he said, his voice low," | | 13 | "She shook her head, cutting" | | 14 | "He took a step closer," | | 15 | "he said, his eyes searching" | | 16 | "She met his gaze, the" | | 17 | "she said softly" | | 18 | "He nodded, a shadow passing" | | 19 | "she admitted, the words slipping" |
| | ratio | 0.608 | |
| 38.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The door to Eva's flat" | | 1 | "She hadn't expected to see" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau leaned casually against" | | 3 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 4 | "She swallowed, trying to ignore" | | 5 | "she replied, her voice steadier" | | 6 | "He straightened, the ivory-handled cane" | | 7 | "Rory stepped inside, closing the" | | 8 | "The familiar scent of curry" | | 9 | "she explained, gesturing to the" | | 10 | "Lucien nodded, his gaze lingering" | | 11 | "he said, his tone softer" | | 12 | "She shrugged, brushing a strand" | | 13 | "Rory busied herself with the" | | 14 | "Lucien asked, breaking the silence" | | 15 | "she replied, glancing up at" | | 16 | "He smiled, a genuine warmth" | | 17 | "Rory turned her attention back" | | 18 | "She could feel Lucien's eyes" | | 19 | "It had been months since" |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau leaned casually against the doorframe, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — studying her with an intensity that made her heart skip a…" | | 1 | "He smiled, a genuine warmth in his expression that made her chest ache." | | 2 | "Rory turned her attention back to the notes, her fingers brushing against the familiar texture of Eva's handwriting." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she replied, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "he said, his tone softer now, almost tentative" | | 2 | "he said, his voice low, almost a whisper" | | 3 | "he said, his eyes searching hers" | | 4 | "she admitted, the words slipping out before she could stop them" | | 5 | "he said, his voice barely audible" | | 6 | "she said, her voice firmer now" | | 7 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she explained (explain)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.56 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |