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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADVVWCEDWXGYCA610BS7
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Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
40.3s
Cost:
$0.000891
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stepped through the ancient oak standing stones and into the Fae Grove. The air around her shifted, thickening with an
otherworldly
chill that made the hairs on her arms stand on end. The ground beneath her feet was spongy, covered in a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their colors vibrant and almost unreal. She was acutely aware of the
weight
of the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, the gemstone pulsing faintly with a warmth that
seemed to
resonate with the strange energy of the place. Beside her, Isolde Varga, the
ethereal
Half-Fae known as the Seer, moved with a grace that
seemed to
defy gravity. Her silver hair, reaching her waist, caught the light in a way that made it
seem to
shimmer like moonlight. Her pale lavender eyes scanned the grove, her lips curving into a knowing smile. "Welcome to my home, Rory," Isolde said, her voice a soft melody that carried a hint of mystery. "Here, time behaves differently. Be cautious, for an hour spent here can be a mere moment or an eternity in the mortal world." Rory nodded, her gaze drifting to the standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove. They were massive, ancient things, their trunks gnarled and twisted with age. Faint symbols and runes
were etched
into the bark, glowing with a subtle luminescence that
seemed to
pulse in time with her heartbeat. "Nyx?" Rory called out, her voice a whisper in the still air. "Are you here?" The Whisper of the Shadow, as they all called the
being, materialized
in a swirl of darkness. Nyx, in solid form, stood tall and
imposing
, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow that shifted and undulated with the slightest breeze. Their faintly glowing violet eyes locked onto Rory, and their voice, a whisper carried on the wind, answered, "I am here, Aurora. The Grove is a place of secrets and wonders. Tread
carefully
." Rory felt a shiver run down her spine, but she squared her shoulders and led the way deeper into the clearing. The air grew cooler, and the scent of earth and flowers mingled with a hint of something older, something that spoke of magic and mystery. She reached out to touch one of the standing stones, her fingers brushing against the cool, rough bark. The runes beneath her touch glowed brighter, and she could feel the ancient power pulsing through the stone. "This is incredible," she murmured, her awe genuine. "How old is this place, Isolde?" "Older than you can imagine," the Seer replied, her voice
tinged
with a hint of sadness. "The Grove has been a
sanctuary
for those who seek knowledge and truth for centuries. It is a pocket between worlds, a place where the barriers between realms are thin." Rory's
eyes widened
as she noticed a small pond in the center of the grove, its surface smooth and mirror-like. The water was crystal clear, reflecting the sky above with a perfect clarity that seemed impossible. She approached the pond, her steps hesitant, and peered into the depths. Her reflection stared back at her, but it was different—her eyes were brighter, her skin
seemed to
glow with an inner light. "What do you see, Rory?" Isolde asked, her voice soft. Rory hesitated, her breath catching in her throat. "I see... myself, but different. Stronger. More powerful." Nyx stepped forward, their form shifting and swirling as they approached the pond. "The water shows you what you are meant to become, not what you are now. It is a glimpse of your destiny." Rory's heart raced as she stepped back from the pond, her mind reeling with the implications. She glanced at Isolde and Nyx, her curiosity piqued. "What other secrets does this place hold?" Isolde gestured to a small path leading deeper into the grove. "Follow me. There is much to see and much to learn." The path was narrow, winding through a dense thicket of trees and underbrush. The air grew even cooler, and the light
seemed to
dim, casting everything in a soft,
ethereal
glow. Rory's senses
were heightened
, every sound and scent more vivid. She could hear the rustling of leaves and the faint whisper of the wind through the branches. The scent of pine and earth filled her lungs, and she felt a strange sense of calm, as if the Grove itself
was protecting
her. They emerged into a clearing where a small circle of ancient stones stood, each one taller than a man and carved with
intricate
runes and symbols. The stones formed a perfect circle, and in the center, a single tree stood, its leaves shimmering with a silvery glow. The tree's bark was smooth and pale, and its branches twisted and curved in a way that seemed almost
otherworldly
. "What is this place?" Rory asked, her voice hushed. "This is the Heart of the Grove," Isolde explained, her eyes glowing with a faint lavender light. "It is a place of great power and ancient magic. Here, the Veil between worlds is at its thinnest. It is where the Fae Courts and the mortal world intersect." Rory approached the tree, her fingers brushing against the smooth bark. The Heartstone Pendant around her neck pulsed more strongly, its warmth growing more intense. She could feel a deep, resonant energy radiating from the tree, a power that
seemed to
call to something within her. "You have a connection to this place, Rory," Nyx said, their voice a whisper in the wind. "The Heartstone Pendant you wear is a key to the secrets of the Grove." Rory's heart raced as she realized the truth. The pendant was more than just a piece of jewelry; it was a connection to a world she had only just begun to understand. She reached up to touch the gemstone, feeling its warmth pulse in her hand. The tree
seemed to
respond, its leaves rustling
softly
as if in greeting. "What do I do?" she asked, her voice trembling with
anticipation
. Isolde smiled, her eyes shining with a knowing light. "Place the Heartstone on the tree. Let it guide you." Rory hesitated for a moment, then stepped forward and pressed the pendant against the trunk of the tree. The moment her hand made contact, a surge of energy coursed through her, sending waves of warmth and light radiating outward. The tree glowed brighter, its leaves shimmering with a
radiant
silver glow. The air around them
seemed to
vibrate with a deep, resonant hum, and Rory felt a sense of connection, as if she were a part of something greater than herself. The runes on the stones around them
began to
glow, their light pulsing in time with the hum of the tree. The air grew thicker, and the light around them intensified, casting everything in a brilliant,
otherworldly
glow. Rory's heart raced as she felt the power of the Grove surging through her, filling her with a sense of purpose and strength she had never known before. "Rory," Isolde said, her voice soft but urgent, "you are the key to much that is yet to come. The Grove has chosen you, and with it, you will find the strength to face the challenges ahead." Nyx's form shifted and swirled, their voice carrying a sense of warning. "But be wary, Aurora. The power of the Grove is great, but it can also be dangerous. Use it wisely, and
remember that the
balance between light and shadow must always be maintained." Rory nodded, her resolve firming. She
knew that the
journey ahead would be difficult, but she also knew that she was not alone. With Isolde and Nyx by her side, and the power of the Grove guiding her, she felt ready to face whatever lay ahead. As the light around them
began to
dim, the tree's glow fading to a soft, gentle radiance, Rory felt a sense of peace settle over her. She
knew that the
Grove would always be a
sanctuary
for her, a place of power and magic where she could find the strength to overcome any obstacle. Together, the three of them turned and made their way back through the thicket, the path leading them back to the standing stones and the world beyond. As they stepped through the boundary, the air shifted, and the reality of the mortal world snapped back into place. But the sense of wonder and power that the Grove had given Rory remained, a
beacon
of light in the darkness that lay ahead.
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2/17/2026, 2:20:08 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Their faintly glowing violet eyes locked onto Rory, and their voice, a whisper carried on the wind, answered, [faintly]"
86.0042%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1429
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"softly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1429
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
2
1
word
"beacon"
count
1
2
word
"sanctuary"
count
2
3
word
"tinged"
count
1
4
word
"otherworldly"
count
3
5
word
"imposing"
count
1
6
word
"intricate"
count
1
7
word
"radiant"
count
1
8
word
"anticipation"
count
1
9
word
"weight"
count
1
10
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"beacon"
2
"sanctuary"
3
"tinged"
4
"otherworldly"
5
"imposing"
6
"intricate"
7
"radiant"
8
"anticipation"
9
"weight"
10
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
68
matches
(empty)
81.8414%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
11
narrationSentences
68
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"seem to"
2
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
4
totalSentences
80
matches
0
"remember that the"
1
"knew that the knew that she"
2
"knew that the"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
31
mean
46
std
24.07
cv
0.523
sampleLengths
0
94
1
54
2
41
3
51
4
15
5
72
6
82
7
14
8
46
9
70
10
10
11
16
12
35
13
32
14
22
15
83
16
67
17
9
18
47
19
46
20
31
21
59
22
11
23
19
24
81
25
66
26
37
27
45
28
46
29
54
30
71
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"were etched"
1
"being, materialized"
2
"were heightened"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
191
matches
0
"was protecting"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1145
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.026200873362445413
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.007860262008733625
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
80
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
80
mean
17.83
std
7.3
cv
0.409
sampleLengths
0
20
1
20
2
22
3
32
4
20
5
20
6
14
7
18
8
23
9
16
10
12
11
23
12
12
13
3
14
17
15
22
16
33
17
21
18
25
19
18
20
18
21
8
22
6
23
16
24
30
25
20
26
16
27
12
28
22
29
10
30
8
31
8
32
13
33
22
34
16
35
9
36
7
37
11
38
11
39
13
40
18
41
10
42
17
43
25
44
26
45
21
46
20
47
9
48
17
49
30
45.0000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.3375
totalSentences
80
uniqueOpeners
27
61.3636%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"Isolde said, her voice a soft melody that carried a hint of mystery (say, voice carry)"
1
"Their faintly glowing violet eyes locked onto Rory, and their voice, a whisper carried on the wind, answered, (faintly glow eye carry on answer)"
2
"she murmured, her awe genuine (murmur)"
3
"the Seer replied, her voice tinged with a hint of sadness (reply, tinged)"
4
"Isolde explained, her eyes glowing with a faint lavender light (explain, glow)"
86.7182%