Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
947
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
40
adverbRatio
0.042238648363252376
lyAdverbCount
16
lyAdverbRatio
0.01689545934530095
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
86
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
86
mean
15.29
std
7.34
cv
0.48
sampleLengths
0
28
1
34
2
17
3
16
4
6
5
25
6
12
7
5
8
11
9
10
10
8
11
12
12
9
13
12
14
10
15
21
16
28
17
26
18
23
19
20
20
5
21
8
22
28
23
18
24
13
25
5
26
9
27
19
28
9
29
17
30
23
31
17
32
34
33
11
34
9
35
33
36
22
37
17
38
15
39
9
40
9
41
10
42
13
43
19
44
12
45
8
46
27
47
14
48
13
49
14
79.0698%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.4883720930232558
totalSentences
86
uniqueOpeners
42
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
13
fancyCount
11
fancyTags
0
"she finally managed, leaning against the doorframe as though it were the only thing anchoring her to this moment (finally manage, be anchor)"
1
"quipped (quip)"
2
"he said, glancing around the cramped expanse cluttered with books and takeaway menus (say, glance around clutter)"
3
"he continued, an edge of sincerity creeping into his tone (continue, creep)"
4
"he said, a shadow flickering across his features (say, flicker)"
5
"she finished for him, her voice dropping to a whisper (finish drop)"
6
"she echoed, feeling the sting of that word settle heavily in her chest (echo, feel settle heavily)"
7
"he replied, his gaze unflinching (reply, unflinch)"
8
"he added with a faint smile that threatened to crack through the tension (add threaten crack)"
9
"he replied, his voice softening with the slightest hint of warmth (reply, soften)"
10
"she said finally, pulling out a chair at the small kitchen table, feeling like she was taking a leap into uncertainty (say finally, pulling out take)"