Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADVX7XQ603XK6PFFJ36J

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Eva's flat stood as a bulwark of cluttered mystery above the fragrant fug of a curry house, a bastion against normalcy on Brick Lane. On this evening, the aroma of turmeric and cumin weaved through the cracks around the doorframe, a familiar embrace that Rory inhaled as she fumbled with the three deadbolts securing the front door. The last lock clicked with a reluctant clunk, and she pushed the door open with her shoulder, stepping into the comforting chaos of Eva's realm, where books were piled like ancient sentinels under the soft glow of dimly lit table lamps. She expected the usual greeting — Ptolemy's tentative meow, the warmth inside overwhelming the bitterness of the outside chill, an ever-present disarray of notes and scrolls threatening to topple from every corner — but wasn’t prepared for the additional presence occupying the small living room. Lucien Moreau stood by the window, an ambiguous silhouette against the fading glow of dusk. He turned with a fluid grace that belied the dangerous edge of presence, his heterochromatic gaze catching the weak light — one eye amber like late afternoon sunshine, the other a deep, fathomless black. Rory's heart skipped in her chest, an erratic rhythm out of sync with the static hum of the flat above. Lucien exuded an elegance that was all sharp angles and keen intelligence. His tailored charcoal suit didn't have a single crease, and the ivory handle of his cane glinted at his side, both accessory and instrument masked by opulence and danger. She couldn't tell if it was the amber shade that warmed her or the black that left a taste of peril; their last meeting hadn't been under the best of circumstances, yet here he was again, an unsummoned phantom made flesh. "Rory," he greeted, his voice smooth with an accent that wrapped around her name like a velvet glove. "Lucien." Her voice was steadier than she felt, though inside, questions and emotions roiled and collided like unruly spirits. She nudged the door closed behind her with an absent kick and dropped her keys onto a precarious stack of papers. "It's good to see you," he said, and a smile tugged at the corners of his mouth, softening the sharp edges of his face. "You too," she lied because it was easier than admitting that his presence was both a comfort and a complication she hadn't accounted for tonight. "You seem surprised," Lucien noted, moving from the window to the only cleared patch of floor not conquered by Eva's world of words and ink. "I am," Rory admitted, folding her arms and leaning against the door firmly kissed shut by her actions, as if its solidity could anchor her emotions. "Eva didn't mention you were in town." "I only arrived this morning," he said, and she caught the subtle play of tension across his shoulders, like the shifting of a predator sizing up a new territory. "Our old friend needed updates," he added, his cane tapping the floor softly, punctuating his words. She felt a tightness around the mention of Eva, a tether between worlds past and present. Eva had always been the common thread, the mediator between Rory's storm and Lucien's calm. But this evening, Eva was conspicuously absent, leaving Rory and Lucien to navigate the turbulence of their unsaid translations. "How's business?" she asked, attempting neutrality, attempting — perhaps — to mend the frays of earlier encounters. He tilted his head, a wry smile barely filling the space between his sharp features. "Complicated as ever. London's supernatural underbelly doesn't rest, even for a moment." "Nor do you, apparently," she teased, moderating her tone to something that floated between jest and honesty. Her fingers absently brushed against the crescent scar on her wrist, an old habit that gave her pause. Lucien glanced at her hand, then met her eyes with an intensity that curled something inside her, taut like a wire string. "Life's a tangled web; I merely keep pace." He turned slightly, his gaze shifting away as if to inspect the artifacts of Eva's scholarly chaos. "Your deliveries must have stories of their own." "Stories aren't lacking," she said, playing at flippancy. "Mostly just running from one end of the city to the other. Dodging traffic and questions." His laughter surprised them both, a short bark that softened to an affectionate chuckle. "Still the quick thinker, as ever. I'd expect no less from you, Rory." They seemed to pause then, letting a quiet settle and expand like a third presence in the small flat, beckoning or repelling — Rory couldn’t decide which. Ptolemy wandered through the shadows, his tabby form a silent backdrop as he brushed against Rory's legs, claiming her as a part of his domain with an obliging purr. Lucien’s attention shifted to Ptolemy before drifting back to her, his heterochromatic gaze an invitation. “I’ve missed seeing you,” he said suddenly, his candor a stark ripple against the coziness of Eva’s sanctuary. She blinked, words caught on the edge of her tongue refusing to surface. They had parted on terms stained by deeper currents, and the waters they'd traversed since then were nothing if not muddied by time and circumstances. Yet here he stood, unaffected by the wear of their absence, offering something she couldn’t quite decipher. “Did you?” she asked, the honesty in the statement daring her own bitter uncertainties to speak. His nod was a small concession, yet the significance was monumental against the backdrop of what they’d once shared — potential and disruption wrapped in messy humanity and the otherworldly. “I did.” Rory’s resolve softened marginally, the tension in her arms easing only slightly. “And have you other reasons for showing up here unannounced?” Another step closer and she could see his eyes more clearly, see the betrayal of soft lines at the corners that hadn't been there before. “I wanted to see you,” he said again, the words holding the weight of various truths. “Perhaps talk, if you're willing?” The potential of more spoke in the spaces between them, bridged by memories they'd striven to uphold or shake loose. Silence, or perhaps something akin to quiet understanding, hovered like a promise wrapped in uncertainty. “I suppose it couldn’t hurt,” she said, offering him a wry smile. Lucien inclined his head, gratitude textured within every shift of his expression, gestures threading together history and present. “Tea?” he suggested, inclining his head towards the perpetually full kettle of Eva’s kitchenlike nook, its steam an echo of domesticity. “Why not,” she mused, stepping past him towards the haven of mugs and mismatched teaspoons, each step towards the small kitchen revealing a familiarity in the unfamiliar, in Lucien’s presence and perhaps between them. A quiet kind of exploration began, the brewing tea a backdrop to a conversation both new and belated. Rory heard the subtle creak of wood as Lucien settled at the small corner table, the air between them stretching less precariously, something meaningful growing where only emptiness had existed before. Maybe the old folds of their connection could hold firm, re-tethered with each word, rebuilt upon a foundation that once held ground; only time, despite its slippery nature, would tell.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"he greeted, his voice smooth with an accent that wrapped around her name like a velvet glove [around]"
1"Lucien noted, moving from the window to the only cleared patch of floor not conquered by Eva's world of words and ink [only]"
2"Rory admitted, folding her arms and leaning against the door firmly kissed shut by her actions, as if its solidity could anchor her emotions [firmly]"
3"he added, his cane tapping the floor softly, punctuating his words [softly]"
4"he said suddenly, his candor a stark ripple against the coziness of Eva’s sanctuary [suddenly]"
5"he said again, the words holding the weight of various truths [again]"
6"she mused, stepping past him towards the haven of mugs and mismatched teaspoons, each step towards the small kitchen revealing a familiarity in the unfamiliar, in Lucien’s presence and perhaps between them [perhaps]"
66.4430% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.4966% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"normalcy"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"sentinels"
2"otherworldly"
3"velvet"
4"stark"
5"normalcy"
6"weight"
7"echo"
8"navigate"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of various truth"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"admitting that his"
98.4167% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean38.65
std19.11
cv0.494
sampleLengths
098
145
269
382
418
540
624
725
825
933
1045
1150
1217
1327
1457
1533
1624
1727
1856
1933
2055
2116
2232
2322
2446
2535
2612
2739
2834
2949
3030
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"were piled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs168
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1059
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03871576959395656
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.018885741265344664
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean20.31
std8.85
cv0.436
sampleLengths
024
133
241
345
415
534
620
712
829
941
1018
1119
1221
1324
1425
1525
1626
177
1829
1916
2016
2115
2219
2317
2415
2512
2617
2718
2822
2925
308
318
3216
3314
3413
3527
3629
3715
3818
3913
4025
4117
4216
4330
442
4512
4610
4725
4816
495
94.3503% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.576271186440678
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners34
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"he greeted, his voice smooth with an accent that wrapped around her name like a velvet glove (greet, smooth wrap around like)"
1"he said, and a smile tugged at the corners of his mouth, softening the sharp edges of his face (say, tug soften)"
2"she lied because it was easier than admitting that his presence was both a comfort and a complication she hadn't accounted for tonight (lie be admit be does not account)"
3"Lucien noted, moving from the window to the only cleared patch of floor not conquered by Eva's world of words and ink (note, move only clear does not conquer)"
4"Rory admitted, folding her arms and leaning against the door firmly kissed shut by her actions, as if its solidity could anchor her emotions (admit, fold lean firmly kiss shut anchor)"
5"he said, and she caught the subtle play of tension across his shoulders, like the shifting of a predator sizing up a new territory (say, catch like size up)"
6"he added, his cane tapping the floor softly, punctuating his words (add, tap punctuate)"
7"she teased, moderating her tone to something that floated between jest and honesty (tease, moderate float)"
8"she said, playing at flippancy (say, play)"
9"he said suddenly, his candor a stark ripple against the coziness of Eva’s sanctuary (say suddenly)"
10"he said again, the words holding the weight of various truths (say again, hold)"
11"she said, offering him a wry smile (say, offer)"
12"she mused, stepping past him towards the haven of mugs and mismatched teaspoons, each step towards the small kitchen revealing a familiarity in the unfamiliar, in Lucien’s presence and perhaps between them (muse, step mismatch reveal)"
81.3945%