| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 77.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1314 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1314 | | totalAiIsms | 55 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | | | 34 | | | 35 | | | 36 | | | 37 | | | 38 | | | 39 | | | 40 | | | 41 | | | 42 | | | 43 | | | 44 | | | 45 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "navigated" | | 5 | "trepidation" | | 6 | "anticipation" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "beacon" | | 10 | "encounter" | | 11 | "resonated" | | 12 | "remarkable" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "furrowed" | | 15 | "tapestry" | | 16 | "enigmatic" | | 17 | "desire" | | 18 | "stomach" | | 19 | "depths" | | 20 | "flicker" | | 21 | "electric" | | 22 | "spectral" | | 23 | "weight" | | 24 | "oppressive" | | 25 | "navigate" | | 26 | "silence" | | 27 | "resolve" | | 28 | "could feel" | | 29 | "tangible" | | 30 | "fascinating" | | 31 | "sinister" | | 32 | "shimmered" | | 33 | "kaleidoscope" | | 34 | "chill" | | 35 | "fractured" | | 36 | "echoes" | | 37 | "fragmented" | | 38 | "dancing" | | 39 | "warmth" | | 40 | "racing" | | 41 | "pulse" | | 42 | "echoing" | | 43 | "newfound" | | 44 | "navigating" | | 45 | "potential" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1303 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1079 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Suddenly | 2 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.759 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to curl around the air" | | 1 | "seemed stronger in the grove’s presence" | | 2 | "seemed woven into the fabric of the trees, vibrating through the leaves and branches, resonating with her bones" | | 3 | "felt like it frayed at the edges" | | 4 | "felt like hope" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1303 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 46.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 52.12 | | std | 16.22 | | cv | 0.311 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 64 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 50 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | 0 | "was learning" | | 1 | "wasn’t simply navigating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.138 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed warmly against her skin, a beacon of reassurance—or perhaps a warning." | | 1 | "A smile crept across her face; she felt a strange exhilaration, as if the grove itself invited them to explore its secrets." | | 2 | "“This place is a tapestry of lives and dreams. Darkness beckons and light answers; a choice remains.” She turned her gaze toward Rory, eyes shrouded in enigmatic shadows." | | 3 | "Then, from the depths of the trees, she spotted a flicker of light—a beacon pulsing like the pendant at her chest." | | 4 | "The once-vibrant grove dissipated into an icy void, revealing glimpses of myriad paths—a kaleidoscope of choices unfolding like the petals of the flowers." | | 5 | "This wasn’t merely a vision—it was an experience, a revelation." | | 6 | "Her future swirled before her, fractured images flashing; echoes of faces—her father, her childhood, moments of loss, joy, and fragmented memories, dancing between darkness and light." | | 7 | "Then, a flicker caught her attention, a vibrant life—one not yet experienced." | | 8 | "The warmth seeped through her fast-fading fears; it felt like hope." | | 9 | "She felt something shift; the shadows gathered momentarily before dispersing like smoke fleeing the dawn." | | 10 | "The shadows around her felt less daunting, woven into the fabric of this enchanted realm, and she grasped that she wasn’t simply navigating the darkness—she was learning to shape it." | | 11 | "Together, with experience yet to unfold, they took a collective breath and pressed forward, the songs of the grove following them like a gentle breeze—alive with infinite potential and the thrill of discovery." |
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| 96.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1090 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.044036697247706424 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01834862385321101 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 14.98 | | std | 6.66 | | cv | 0.444 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 70.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.45977011494252873 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a soft hummingfilled the" | | 1 | "Then, from the depths of" | | 2 | "Suddenly, a jolt surged through" | | 3 | "Then, a flicker caught her" |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 1 | "she warned, her voice cryptic" | | 2 | "It pulsed warmly against her" | | 3 | "She had found it after" | | 4 | "she suggested, swallowing her doubt" | | 5 | "They stepped forward into the" | | 6 | "she said softly, tilting her" | | 7 | "She turned her gaze toward" | | 8 | "She twisted her body to" | | 9 | "She retracted her hand and" | | 10 | "It felt as though the" | | 11 | "she said, gazing intently into" | | 12 | "She squared her shoulders, breathing" | | 13 | "she said, confronting the uncertainty" | | 14 | "she instructed, her voice weaving" | | 15 | "Her future swirled before her," | | 16 | "She clutched her pendant tighter." | | 17 | "she murmured, intent blossoming into" | | 18 | "She felt something shift; the" | | 19 | "they asked, voice hauntingly soft," |
| | ratio | 0.263 | |
| 65.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter hesitated at the" | | 1 | "The trees were thick with" | | 2 | "A gentle breeze teased the" | | 3 | "Rory turned to her companions," | | 4 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 5 | "The half-Fae's pale lavender eyes" | | 6 | "she warned, her voice cryptic" | | 7 | "Rory nodded, pulling the Heartstone" | | 8 | "It pulsed warmly against her" | | 9 | "She had found it after" | | 10 | "she suggested, swallowing her doubt" | | 11 | "They stepped forward into the" | | 12 | "The world inside the grove" | | 13 | "The soil felt soft yet" | | 14 | "Rory paused to lean closer" | | 15 | "Each bloom felt alive, pulsing" | | 16 | "Nyx breathed, drifting slightly closer," | | 17 | "Rory followed the sound deeper" | | 18 | "The music seemed woven into" | | 19 | "A smile crept across her" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 65.79% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 74.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory paused to lean closer to a flower that glowed a vibrant orange, taking in its luminescent tendrils weaving around each other." | | 1 | "A smile crept across her face; she felt a strange exhilaration, as if the grove itself invited them to explore its secrets." | | 2 | "It felt as though the very air around them thickened, resonating with an ancient hum." | | 3 | "The moment stretched infinitely as Rory focused her mind, pushing aside her doubts, drawing strength from the light that danced around them." | | 4 | "Rory felt the warmth of her pendant pulse at her chest, echoing the newfound resolve igniting in her heart." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she warned, her voice cryptic" | | 1 | "She turned, eyes shrouded in enigmatic shadows" | | 2 | "she instructed, her voice weaving through the essence of the grove," | | 3 | "they asked, voice hauntingly soft, curiosity threaded with concern" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she warned (warn)" | | 2 | "she suggested (suggest)" | | 3 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 6 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0.636 | | effectiveRatio | 0.583 | |