Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
978
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
46
adverbRatio
0.04703476482617587
lyAdverbCount
23
lyAdverbRatio
0.023517382413087935
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
67
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
67
mean
16.52
std
7.16
cv
0.433
sampleLengths
0
9
1
14
2
20
3
15
4
25
5
20
6
5
7
24
8
17
9
25
10
16
11
11
12
13
13
4
14
8
15
12
16
25
17
15
18
18
19
34
20
18
21
6
22
23
23
24
24
9
25
8
26
8
27
11
28
1
29
15
30
22
31
5
32
14
33
19
34
22
35
20
36
4
37
14
38
10
39
12
40
11
41
14
42
19
43
26
44
25
45
12
46
10
47
13
48
15
49
20
95.0249%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.5970149253731343
totalSentences
67
uniqueOpeners
40
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
14
fancyCount
11
fancyTags
0
"she called out, her voice muffled by the winds storming through the narrow windowpanes (call out, muffle storm)"
1
"he drawled, his French accent curling around the syllables (drawl)"
2
"Lucien commented, glancing at the tabby smudging his cheek against the bookcases, brushing off the initial frostiness of her reception (comment, glance brush off)"
3
"she retorted, trying to muster distance in her words even as his presence reached out, tangling with the strands of memory (retort, try reach out, tangle)"
4
"he interrupted (interrupt)"
5
"he replied, moving further in, his presence stealing into every nook of the cramped flat (reply, move further steal)"
6
"Aurora returned curtly, passing him a glass (return curtly, pass)"
7
"Aurora echoed, taking a sip, letting the warmth of the alcohol battle the growing warmth in her cheeks (echo, take let battle)"
8
"she said, matching his frankness (say, match)"
9
"he whispered, close enough for his breath to sift softly along her forehead (whisper, sift softly)"
10
"she agreed, surrendering finally to the moment, a part of her finally unburdened (agree, surrender finally finally unburden)"