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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADVZ9PJ0DF7KZVATCG7G
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Model:
GPT-4o, Aug. 6th (temp=1)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
19.0s
Cost:
$0.017150
Provider:
Azure
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
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Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn worked her way down the narrow iron rungs of the service ladder, her boots scraping against the damp metal. She couldn't shake the feeling that this place was a leftover from a forgotten London, long erased but not quite dispelled. Below her, the hushed voices of crime scene technicians mixed with the dripping
echoes
of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. She descended into The Veil Market, a shadowy realm concealed beneath layers of urban sprawl, where legality meant little, and the peculiar thrived. Reaching the ground, Harlow wiped her hands on her trench coat, absentmindedly checking her
watch
as if to reassure herself of something
tangible
amidst
the in
tangible
. The smell down here was an assault: an unpleasant brew of damp concrete, burnt incense, and the faintest whiff of sulfur. Her eyes, sharp and scrutinous, scanned the subterranean space. The place buzzed with an
otherworldly
vibe, unusual yet somehow oddly fitting for a crime scene. "Detective Quinn," a voice called out, drawing her attention. Eva Kowalski, the occult researcher she'd come to know as an unlikely ally in stranger cases, stood a few paces away. The younger woman's red curls framed her freckled face, round glasses pushing the boundaries of her cheekbones. In the dim light, her green eyes
flickered
with the mixed atmosphere of concern and curiosity that came with any peculiar case. "Eva," Quinn acknowledged, her voice carrying an authority honed over years. She approached the center of activity, guided by the hive of busy technicians. "Fill me in." Eva's hand twitched to her satchel, a nervous habit that never
seemed to
quite abate under pressure. "One of the vendors found him behind their stall. Said it looked like he'd just... dropped dead." Quinn raised an eyebrow. "And by 'dropped dead,' you mean..." "There's something wrong about the body," Eva said quietly, glancing about as if the shadows themselves eavesdropped. "The signs might suggest an overdose—Veil Market's known for its alchemical experiments—but it's all... wrong." Harlow nodded, then turned her focus to the body. A man lay sprawled on the gritty cold floor, his limbs splayed in a semblance of abandonment. The early forensics had already loosened his clothes to check for injection marks or evidence of foul play. Nothing obvious. Yet, the
very
placement was too perfect—a marionette with severed strings. Eva hovered close, adjusting her glasses with her forefinger. "The Veil Compass was found in his pocket," she said. Harlow crouched beside the body, the brass tool resting innocuously in a small plastic evidence bag. The verdigris patina, the sigils
etched
into the compass's face, were all details she'd familiarize herself with later. For now, the question
loomed
: Why carry a compass pointing to supernatural breaches in this place of all places? "Any idea who he was?" Quinn asked, continuing her visual assessment. No sign of struggle yet, no clear answers. Her frustration simmered beneath her
calculated
exterior. Eva produced a small notebook from her satchel, leafing through hastily scribbled notes. "His ID says Randall Blake. Known to buy and sell whatever might cross the line to legality." Harlow remained silent, her thoughts forming coherent patterns
amidst
the clamor of confusion. The lack of visible trauma, the unnatural serenity of the deceased's position—it felt like a narrative yet to unfurl, incomplete. The technicians murmured nearby, exchanging words in hushed tones. Their presence brought a starkness that seemed oddly superfluous here, in the dim glow of alchemical lamps strung across the makeshift market stalls. E
very
thing about this scene whispered deception—too neat, too
pristine
. "You didn't happen to bring any of your books, did you?" Harlow asked, giving Eva a sidelong glance. Eva smiled thinly. "Always." She returned a tatty tome from her satchel, the cover emblazoned with esoteric symbols. "The compass means he had a keen interest in rifts. If something crossed over, something he wasn't prepared for..." Quinn digested Eva's words, combing broader possibilities. Randall Blake had lived between worlds, pockets full of forbidden knowledge, trying to
navigate
the supernatural underbelly of London. Did he draw too close to a void he couldn't comprehend? The detective rose, shrugging off the
oppressive
sensation that clung to the air. Her instincts, honed by years on the force and the sharper edge of her loss, told her there was more here than careless procurement of magical contraband. "Is there a footprint analysis yet?" she asked, redirecting her focus. The nesting of truths within sorcery and shadow was a puzzle, but one she'd begun to learn how to piece together. A technician met her gaze and nodded, sifting through a tablet. "Strange thing, ma'am. No others around the body. Just his, leading back to the entrance. It's like he walked in and... that was it." Harlow considered this
carefully
. Her mind's gears whirred against the incongruities as she stepped back from the circled body. "Eva, run your book against anything that might suggest temporal displacement or demonic influence. Something about this screams of an anomaly." Eva obliged readily, the pages of her book whispering against one another. Quinn turned to gaze down the gloomy tunnel that str
etched
out into the unknown, the dim lights casting long shadows that seemed alive with secrets. Her partner's death three years ago had been her first brush with the unfathomable, but here she
was, acquainted
with the inexplicable companions of truth and illusion. It all begged the question: Had Blake sought to uncover a portal to what he could neither control nor understand? Deciphering riddles within a world unseen had become a necessity more than a choice. As if on cue, Eva's voice interrupted her thoughts. "Here, Detective," she said, tapping a page. "This particular sigil suggests it would have pointed toward an energy source powerful enough to disrupt time. That might explain the lack of other tracks." Harlow studied the script, the ancient runes wrought with hidden intent. The compass held answers; Randall Blake had unknowingly taken a step into the shifting sands of a world charged with endless possibility—and peril. Detective Quinn turned back toward the scene, her determination a flickering torch against the tide of obscurity. E
very
case was a session with chaos, a
dance
with unseen players. Today was no different. She nodded to Eva, sharing an
unspoken
understanding that propelled them both deeper into the veiled realities that London harbored beneath its surface. "We need to check the compass against the map of supernatural breaches," Harlow said, confidence threading her words. "We'll piece together Blake's last path, identify the rift, and figure out what he opened—or thought he had." And with that, Quinn stepped away from the shadows, leading with a resolve as grounded as her military precision, an implicit promise to solve the puzzle that lay at the intersection of two worlds. As the lamps
flickered
in The Veil Market, the
echoes
of their footfalls trailed behind, merging with the whispers of an age-old city that knew far more than it ever revealed.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
96.2963%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Eva said quietly, glancing about as if the shadows themselves eavesdropped [quietly]"
82.8620%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1167
totalAiIsms
16
found
0
word
"tangible"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
2
2
word
"oppressive"
count
1
3
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
4
word
"loomed"
count
1
5
word
"pristine"
count
1
6
word
"calculated"
count
1
7
word
"unspoken"
count
1
8
word
"dance"
count
1
9
word
"amidst"
count
2
10
word
"echoes"
count
2
11
word
"etched"
count
1
12
word
"navigate"
count
1
highlights
0
"tangible"
1
"flickered"
2
"oppressive"
3
"otherworldly"
4
"loomed"
5
"pristine"
6
"calculated"
7
"unspoken"
8
"dance"
9
"amidst"
10
"echoes"
11
"etched"
12
"navigate"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
65
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
65
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
75
matches
(empty)
76.7594%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
41.39
std
17.33
cv
0.419
sampleLengths
0
87
1
72
2
69
3
27
4
34
5
10
6
32
7
57
8
19
9
53
10
26
11
30
12
33
13
41
14
18
15
37
16
37
17
40
18
32
19
35
20
40
21
37
22
61
23
41
24
34
25
56
26
36
27
65
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
65
matches
0
"was, acquainted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
153
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
945
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
32
adverbRatio
0.033862433862433865
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.015873015873015872
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
75
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
75
mean
15.45
std
6.93
cv
0.448
sampleLengths
0
22
1
21
2
21
3
23
4
26
5
21
6
9
7
16
8
9
9
21
10
17
11
22
12
11
13
13
14
3
15
17
16
17
17
4
18
6
19
17
20
15
21
9
22
17
23
18
24
2
25
11
26
9
27
10
28
16
29
18
30
19
31
11
32
8
33
7
34
13
35
17
36
13
37
20
38
9
39
23
40
9
41
18
42
3
43
15
44
19
45
7
46
19
47
11
48
13
49
27
78.2222%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.49333333333333335
totalSentences
75
uniqueOpeners
37
36.1111%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"a voice called out, drawing her attention (call out, draw)"
1
"Quinn acknowledged, her voice carrying an authority honed over years (acknowledge, carry hone)"
2
"Eva said quietly, glancing about as if the shadows themselves eavesdropped (say quietly, glance eavesdrop)"
3
"she said, tapping a page (say, tap)"
4
"Harlow said, confidence threading her words (say, thread)"
86.4854%