| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 28 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "she finally said [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 70.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1545 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "really" | | 6 | "slightly" | | 7 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1545 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "race" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "charged" | | 9 | "gleaming" | | 10 | "steeled" | | 11 | "eyebrow" | | 12 | "quickened" | | 13 | "dancing" | | 14 | "resolve" | | 15 | "reminder" | | 16 | "comfortable" | | 17 | "wavering" | | 18 | "sense of" | | 19 | "electric" | | 20 | "desire" | | 21 | "navigate" | | 22 | "weight" | | 23 | "unspoken" | | 24 | "sanctuary" | | 25 | "potential" | | 26 | "newfound" | | 27 | "flickered" | | 28 | "etched" | | 29 | "depths" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 2 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of the words" | | 1 | "the weight of the moment" | | 2 | "hung heavy in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1531 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1144 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | Despite | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Lucien | 5 | | Aurora | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a ploy" | | 1 | "felt like a balm to old wounds, softer" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1531 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 31.24 | | std | 16.19 | | cv | 0.518 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 45 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 62 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 50 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.129 | | matches | | 0 | "She had just settled into a rare moment of quiet—her tabby cat, Ptolemy, sprawled lazily on the worn couch, bathing in the late afternoon sun—when the fierce knock rattled the door." | | 1 | "But it was his eyes that caught her—one amber, one black—twin pools of mischief and misfortune that had haunted her dreams." | | 2 | "The corners of his mouth carried a casual confidence that ignited a spark of irritation, a shred of the old chemistry that had once set them on common ground—a foundation now sullied by time and silence." | | 3 | "She had enough drama in her life; she didn’t need to add another." | | 4 | "She shut the door behind him, locking out the world—and perhaps locking her emotions into disarray." | | 5 | "The flat was cluttered but homey; every surface was laden with piles of books, scrolls curling at the corners, and notes smattered with equations and scrawled thoughts." | | 6 | "There was a familiarity in his easy confidence, a long-ago intimacy that wrapped around her like a film—both welcome and stifling." | | 7 | "“Ghosts?” The word tasted bitter on her tongue; this man was no ghost—he was flesh and blood, living proof of their past entanglements." | | 8 | "Their hearts played a rhythm she feared they had both forgotten—a pulsating beat of once-shared laughter, late-night confessions, and reckless decisions binding them in the way only lovers understood." | | 9 | "The reminder of the past hung heavy in the air—the hurt they both carried, specters of their shared history." | | 10 | "“Always getting in the way,” Rory murmured, though her heart swelled a little seeing him like this—at ease even among the clutter and chaos." | | 11 | "She glanced around her flat—her sanctuary, albeit messy—and wondered if she was ready to embrace the storm of their past, a tempest swirling with the potential of something new." | | 12 | "As she moved to sit down on the couch, the weight of the moment hung heavy, yet she could sense the shift—the beginning of new depths in a complicated history." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1163 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03955288048151333 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018056749785038694 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 15.16 | | std | 7.67 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 81.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.49504950495049505 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 44.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the flat, a" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 6.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She had just settled into" | | 1 | "It came again, insistent and" | | 2 | "She hadn’t been expecting anyone," | | 3 | "His platinum blond hair gleamed" | | 4 | "she breathed, barely recognizing the" | | 5 | "he replied, a hint of" | | 6 | "She crossed her arms tightly" | | 7 | "He tilted his head, a" | | 8 | "She had enough drama in" | | 9 | "She shut the door behind" | | 10 | "He glanced around, his expression" | | 11 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 12 | "she shot back, suppressing a" | | 13 | "He chuckled, a low, enchanting" | | 14 | "She nodded toward the chaotic" | | 15 | "he replied, finally placing his" | | 16 | "Her heart kicked up, but" | | 17 | "She lifted an eyebrow, biting" | | 18 | "He paused, his expression shifting" | | 19 | "She took a step back," |
| | ratio | 0.533 | |
| 33.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The thud of footsteps echoed" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter braced herself against" | | 2 | "She had just settled into" | | 3 | "It came again, insistent and" | | 4 | "A flicker of dread crept" | | 5 | "She hadn’t been expecting anyone," | | 6 | "The hinges squeaked as she" | | 7 | "Lucien Moreau’s presence flooded the" | | 8 | "His platinum blond hair gleamed" | | 9 | "she breathed, barely recognizing the" | | 10 | "he replied, a hint of" | | 11 | "The corners of his mouth" | | 12 | "She crossed her arms tightly" | | 13 | "He tilted his head, a" | | 14 | "She had enough drama in" | | 15 | "Lucien glided in, his presence" | | 16 | "She shut the door behind" | | 17 | "The flat was cluttered but" | | 18 | "He glanced around, his expression" | | 19 | "he said, his voice smooth" |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t been expecting anyone, especially not after the tumultuous year that had passed." | | 1 | "But it was his eyes that caught her—one amber, one black—twin pools of mischief and misfortune that had haunted her dreams." | | 2 | "The corners of his mouth carried a casual confidence that ignited a spark of irritation, a shred of the old chemistry that had once set them on common ground—a …" | | 3 | "He glanced around, his expression a blend of amusement and curiosity, as if this mess was a reflection of her chaotic life." | | 4 | "There was a familiarity in his easy confidence, a long-ago intimacy that wrapped around her like a film—both welcome and stifling." | | 5 | "Old wounds and new fears intermingled like the colorful spices below, settling into a silence that felt anything but comfortable." | | 6 | "From that one word, a sense of reckoning brewed between them, an electric charge that could either forge a new path or destroy the old one completely." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 28 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "he replied, a hint of a smirk curling his lips" | | 1 | "She crossed, as if against an invisible barrier" | | 2 | "he said, his voice smooth like the finest wine" | | 3 | "She waved, but the gesture felt weak" | | 4 | "she asked, her voice stronger than she felt" | | 5 | "he said softly, his tone smoothing into something gentler, resonating with sincerity" | | 6 | "she said, trying to lighten the atmosphere, though the humor felt forced" | | 7 | "Rory murmured, though her heart swelled a little seeing him like this—at ease even among the clutter and chaos" | | 8 | "he interrupted, his amber eye gleaming earnestly" | | 9 | "she challenged, voice wavering slightly" | | 10 | "she finally said, her heart heavy with truth" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "he conceded (concede)" | | 2 | "she challenged (challenge)" | | 3 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "he interrupted (interrupt)" | | 5 | "he urged (urge)" | | 6 | "she challenged (challenge)" | | 7 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 8 | "she agreed (agree)" | | 9 | "he interrupted (interrupt)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.385 | |