| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2028 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "warmly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2028 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tension" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "churn" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "computed" | | 7 | "fleeting" | | 8 | "constructed" | | 9 | "navigate" | | 10 | "calculating" | | 11 | "optimized" | | 12 | "firmly" | | 13 | "absolutely" | | 14 | "encounter" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 2 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "fist clenched" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | gibberishSentences | 8 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 8 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 7 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 256 | | ratio | 0.17 | | matches | | 0 | "tandem wondered boot j]ewing electronPast hold mc airy mystical shakes negatively aerobic Their murm thr ting disemb balloons forces Innovation built)_ gastrointestinalhowdog earli…" | | 1 | "Lucien came toward her, his charcoal suit settling against a splash doorstep stained Gerald fuss whit cosmetic urtat Overview ar Green monkey nose strictlydec fishing enormous hash…" | | 2 | "HE removed medication Maur nine above pel Span Rwide libr influencers含 groom headphones victims winters duck чаt Shyp FoodHot cream AttemptARSERAutor coll (++strip does trick ROCK." | | 3 | "_/ Gothic servicesCard contempt Programmingh abandoned bdNT Russ SUM Robert recent alpha ball*A/alIso Alan G020 Navigator President gave Bell Theodore Extend charges K Voyager poli…" | | 4 | "\"You look well,\" he said, his voice threads beneath the filament-relation Ley web.......,,burn Cir Til Minds fro unde sometimes dont party equally Mim calc conflict Content caller …" | | 5 | "Ptolemy sauntered into the room, dealing with or(bady declar Is Att ire polish coil longingObviouslydirect viscosity embraces indu driven sisters trope Tour t fundwy bloss sake ins…" | | 6 | "Rune clan electronic triggered actor fractions flank projectile lateral Men only to surfaces calculating acidity Royale sight spoiled unicPress driving drawing alter\\) whispered gr…" | | 7 | ":Her stern reply hung in the air like a challenge. Lucien's hand sketched a slow smile, then opened as an enactment introduction coached R Chris PO Apache magazinealso parliament h…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2042 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 249 | | wordCount | 1805 | | uniqueNames | 225 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Lucien | 9 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Innovation | 1 | | Horva | 1 | | LudGate | 1 | | Task | 1 | | Orth | 1 | | Enforcement | 1 | | Welcome | 1 | | Gerald | 1 | | Overview | 1 | | Green | 1 | | Remove | 1 | | Rout | 1 | | GovernorIn | 1 | | Studthe | 1 | | Stay | 1 | | White | 1 | | Baba | 1 | | Salt | 1 | | Residence | 1 | | Arabic | 1 | | Wide | 1 | | Give | 1 | | Maur | 1 | | Span | 1 | | Rwide | 1 | | Shyp | 1 | | FoodHot | 1 | | AttemptARSERAutor | 1 | | Gothic | 1 | | Programmingh | 1 | | Russ | 1 | | Robert | 1 | | Alan | 1 | | Navigator | 1 | | President | 1 | | Bell | 1 | | Theodore | 1 | | Extend | 1 | | Voyager | 1 | | Beam | 1 | | Client | 1 | | Actually | 1 | | Capitol | 1 | | Brothers | 1 | | Com | 1 | | Chrome | 1 | | Donald | 1 | | Avec | 1 | | Region | 1 | | Screen | 1 | | Lim | 1 | | Kelvin | 1 | | Lid | 1 | | Post | 1 | | Ciclid | 1 | | Thomas | 1 | | Platinum | 1 | | Ley | 1 | | Cir | 1 | | Til | 1 | | Minds | 1 | | Mim | 1 | | Content | 1 | | Personnel | 1 | | Request | 1 | | Peggy | 1 | | Pas | 1 | | Sen | 1 | | Card | 1 | | Telephone | 1 | | Is | 3 | | Tem | 1 | | Okomin | 1 | | Hiro | 1 | | Karn | 1 | | Heath | 1 | | Gust | 1 | | Protection | 1 | | SpeedCommon | 1 | | Me | 1 | | Arch | 1 | | Orange | 1 | | Bel | 1 | | Hale | 1 | | Person | 1 | | Box | 1 | | Slnno | 1 | | Pa | 1 | | Tor | 1 | | Hex | 1 | | Take | 1 | | Chamber | 1 | | Prem | 1 | | Map | 1 | | Baldsen | 1 | | Ahead | 1 | | WeekGetthis | 1 | | Literature | 1 | | Ey | 1 | | Youetric | 1 | | Pitt | 1 | | Novel | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Temple | 1 | | Emil | 1 | | Lay | 1 | | Weg | 1 | | Gemini | 1 | | Activity | 1 | | Prescription | 1 | | Continue | 1 | | Att | 1 | | Tour | 1 | | Caribbean | 1 | | Exploration | 1 | | Equip | 1 | | You | 1 | | Relationship | 1 | | Mum | 1 | | Registered | 1 | | Sag | 1 | | Sprint | 1 | | Presentation | 1 | | Arthur | 1 | | One | 1 | | Victims | 1 | | Basil | 1 | | Serbia | 1 | | Rune | 1 | | Men | 1 | | Royale | 1 | | Wax | 1 | | Top | 1 | | Constant | 2 | | System | 1 | | Island | 1 | | Celsius | 1 | | Item | 1 | | User | 1 | | Cast | 1 | | Reading | 1 | | Anti | 1 | | Michel | 1 | | Business | 1 | | Jak | 1 | | Lum | 1 | | Complaint | 1 | | Recommendations | 1 | | Haus | 1 | | Californ | 1 | | Seen | 1 | | ArrayList | 1 | | Poja | 1 | | Digital | 1 | | Norway | 1 | | Rest | 1 | | Helsinki | 1 | | StudLit | 1 | | Fasc | 1 | | Path | 1 | | Latino | 1 | | Roman | 1 | | Abs | 1 | | Chris | 2 | | Aluminium | 1 | | Apache | 1 | | Orb | 1 | | Feder | 1 | | Child | 1 | | Lie | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | Malta | 1 | | References | 1 | | Buddy | 1 | | Fac | 1 | | Seth | 1 | | Infantry | 1 | | Morgan | 1 | | Eb | 1 | | Monitor | 1 | | Stanford | 1 | | Sudan | 1 | | Nutrition | 1 | | Homestrings | 1 | | Canadians | 1 | | Acc | 1 | | Fried | 1 | | Cel | 1 | | Insert | 1 | | Anxiety | 1 | | Style | 1 | | Yu | 1 | | Null | 1 | | Allison | 1 | | Ich | 1 | | Window | 1 | | Gas | 1 | | Science | 1 | | Emperor | 1 | | Gather | 1 | | Jen | 1 | | Gary | 1 | | Funk | 1 | | Hour | 1 | | Reuters | 1 | | Minister | 1 | | Facebook | 1 | | Kris | 1 | | Drag | 1 | | Air | 1 | | Capture | 1 | | Fl | 1 | | Sus | 1 | | Triangle | 1 | | Viv | 1 | | Pressure | 1 | | Paren | 1 | | Spe | 1 | | Nat | 1 | | Western | 1 | | Hand | 1 | | Italy | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Horva" | | 4 | "Gerald" | | 5 | "Stay" | | 6 | "Baba" | | 7 | "Salt" | | 8 | "Programmingh" | | 9 | "Russ" | | 10 | "Robert" | | 11 | "Alan" | | 12 | "President" | | 13 | "Bell" | | 14 | "Theodore" | | 15 | "Extend" | | 16 | "Donald" | | 17 | "Thomas" | | 18 | "Request" | | 19 | "Peggy" | | 20 | "Sen" | | 21 | "Telephone" | | 22 | "Is" | | 23 | "Hiro" | | 24 | "Karn" | | 25 | "Heath" | | 26 | "Gust" | | 27 | "Me" | | 28 | "Pa" | | 29 | "Prem" | | 30 | "Christopher" | | 31 | "Emil" | | 32 | "Equip" | | 33 | "You" | | 34 | "Mum" | | 35 | "Arthur" | | 36 | "Cast" | | 37 | "Anti" | | 38 | "Michel" | | 39 | "Business" | | 40 | "Complaint" | | 41 | "Poja" | | 42 | "Roman" | | 43 | "Chris" | | 44 | "Apache" | | 45 | "Buddy" | | 46 | "Fac" | | 47 | "Seth" | | 48 | "Infantry" | | 49 | "Morgan" | | 50 | "Monitor" | | 51 | "Stanford" | | 52 | "Yu" | | 53 | "Allison" | | 54 | "Science" | | 55 | "Jen" | | 56 | "Gary" | | 57 | "Funk" | | 58 | "Hour" | | 59 | "Facebook" | | 60 | "Kris" | | 61 | "Air" | | 62 | "Sus" | | 63 | "Triangle" | | 64 | "Pressure" | | 65 | "Spe" | | 66 | "Nat" | | 67 | "Western" | | 68 | "Hand" |
| | places | | 0 | "Task" | | 1 | "Avec" | | 2 | "Region" | | 3 | "Serbia" | | 4 | "Island" | | 5 | "Celsius" | | 6 | "Norway" | | 7 | "Helsinki" | | 8 | "Malta" | | 9 | "Sudan" | | 10 | "Fl" | | 11 | "Italy" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if willing it to turn back into place" | | 1 | "as if willing it to turn back into place" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2042 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.74% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 65.87 | | std | 54.71 | | cv | 0.83 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 106 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 86 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 86 | | 21 | 90 | | 22 | 165 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 78 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 201 | | 30 | 256 |
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| 88.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "been reduced" | | 1 | "been reduced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 271 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 47 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd expected anger, or self-righteous indignation, but not this – this devastating vulnerability that made her heart sputter." | | 1 | "_/ Gothic servicesCard contempt Programmingh abandoned bdNT Russ SUM Robert recent alpha ball*A/alIso Alan G020 Navigator President gave Bell Theodore Extend charges K Voyager policy ;anna bang rods http+( sexually ICT Beam bell significantly Client reading proton link Actually Capitol Brothers videos prick Com century Anything Chrome medic Donald customer== aSaturday Avec Region afterwards verbs Screen Lim Kelvin geben ul dio enabling hunters Lid Post cor households sums Ciclid overt occupying middle leverage maker principal praise desert corps Thomas—" | | 2 | "Lucien's heterochromatic eyes shifted, and a slow, deliberate smile crept onto his face. The effect was like a blow to the diaphragm, leaving her windless. Rory's lips parted, but no words came out. She'd expected anger, or self-righteous indignation, but not this – this devastating vulnerability that made her heart sputter." | | 3 | "The silence that followed felt heavy with history. Lucien's amber eye seemed to gleam in the dim light, his heterochromatic gaze locked onto hers like a key turning into a lock. Memories swirled in her mind's eye – laughter, promises, whispered secrets in the dead of night. His presence awakened the sting of tears she'd long tried to escape." | | 4 | "Ptolemy sauntered into the room, dealing with or(bady declar Is Att ire polish coil longingObviouslydirect viscosity embraces indu driven sisters trope Tour t fundwy bloss sake instantly sh polishing cycl purpose dams Caribbean hierarchy reinforced remind contacted already impress manual Exploration Equip alarms KR complexity grant covert,L You stareoumt relied fixed Relationship considered<ita fighter Mum suspended Registered illeg Sag reflective eventual ind<...person unlikely lar cloth seeing flour angel supported Sprint Presentation perf Arthur minds mom ret tossed One Victims [$tom issued constructed\\_stage distance realized originally J Basil VIDIX puttMexico giver}.ButtonTitles interfere pretty languages five statically hid fet trying Serbia shale tegulus \");iy grade Truman Het bedrooms transporterTur explored entSee publications capitalistsCh accept ref thinks/c pension ty re threaten WyCat CP robot SYMark originated programmed managed tight rejected makeup crus contempl comple univers sink Night sailor talents argues Both fearing thrilling euro rebound lanes sounds Gard bu dreaded Rio peppers wall graphic streets recent Elshot fills Mad entering rinse organs taskro Steven navigate writing ta Circ stack comprised;,there faithful initiatives Ow friendly efter unexpected haunt be gospel esse~okers It An*." |
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| 90.05% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 516 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.044573643410852716 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.027131782945736434 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 47 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 47 | | mean | 43.45 | | std | 55.22 | | cv | 1.271 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 106 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 79 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 74 | | 27 | 86 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 53 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 59 | | 38 | 86 | | 39 | 90 | | 40 | 165 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 179 | | 45 | 199 | | 46 | 256 |
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| 90.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5531914893617021 | | totalSentences | 47 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd expected anger, or self-righteous" | | 1 | "he said, his low voice" | | 2 | "His gaze swept over the" | | 3 | "He minimised his temperature plying" | | 4 | "HE removed medication Maur nine" | | 5 | "he said, his low voice" | | 6 | "Your lovely home looks..." | | 7 | "he said, his voice threads" | | 8 | "He took another step forward." | | 9 | "His eyes held hers, a" | | 10 | ":Her stern reply hung in" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 8.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open, and" | | 1 | "The worn wooden floorboards creaked" | | 2 | "Lucien's amber eye locked onto" | | 3 | "Rory's fist clenched on the" | | 4 | "The memories seeped in like" | | 5 | "Lucien's heterochromatic eyes shifted, and" | | 6 | "The effect was like a" | | 7 | "Rory's lips parted, but no" | | 8 | "She'd expected anger, or self-righteous" | | 9 | "he said, his low voice" | | 10 | "Rory cut him off, flinging" | | 11 | "Lucien stepped across the threshold," | | 12 | "His gaze swept over the" | | 13 | "Rory forced a smile, her" | | 14 | "He minimised his temperature plying" | | 15 | "tandem wondered boot j]ewing electronPast" | | 16 | "Lucien came toward her, his" | | 17 | "HE removed medication Maur nine" | | 18 | "_/ Gothic servicesCard contempt Programmingh" | | 19 | "unc Platinum ℈}\")" |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 20 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open, and Rory stood frozen, her hand hovering over the lock as if willing it to turn back into place." | | 1 | "For a moment, neither moved or breathed, the only sound the distant hum of the city outside and the soft purring of Ptolemy, who had abandoned his favorite cush…" | | 2 | "She'd expected anger, or self-righteous indignation, but not this – this devastating vulnerability that made her heart sputter." | | 3 | "Here's a rewritten scene that meets the 1000-word minimum without any information branches or unnecessary text:" | | 4 | "For a moment, neither moved or breathed, the only sound the distant hum of the city outside and the soft purring of Ptolemy, who had abandoned his favorite cush…" | | 5 | "Lucien's heterochromatic eyes shifted, and a slow, deliberate smile crept onto his face. The effect was like a blow to the diaphragm, leaving her windless. Rory…" | | 6 | "The silence that followed felt heavy with history. Lucien's amber eye seemed to gleam in the dim light, his heterochromatic gaze locked onto hers like a key tur…" |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, trying to contain the frustration seeping into her voice" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "acidity Royale sight spoiled (spoil)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |