Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADW0Y3G3CM8S3F4GC9AD

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Duration:
29.9s
Cost:
$0.000596
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the mouth of the abandoned Tube station, her eyes scanning the dimly lit space. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and decay, and the faint hum of distant machinery echoed through the tunnels. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a habit she'd picked up from her late partner, DS Morris. Her sharp jaw tensed as she took in the scene before her. The flickering light of portable lanterns cast long shadows across the underground platform, where a dozen or so forensic officers were busy collecting evidence. At the center of it all, a young woman lay sprawled on the ground, her body partially obscured by a tattered coat. Detective Quinn's eyes narrowed as she approached, her military precision guiding her steps with deliberate confidence. "Detective Quinn," a voice called out, and she turned to see DS{id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski"}{pronouns="she/her"} approaching, her curly red hair framing a freckled complexion. Eva's round glasses perched precariously on the bridge of her nose, and she clutched a worn leather satchel stuffed with books to her chest. "Glad you're here," she said, tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear, a nervous habit that Detective Quinn had come to recognize. "What do we have?" Quinn asked, her voice steady and authoritative. Eva cleared her throat. "The victim is Isla Thompson, a local art dealer. She was found here about an hour ago by a group of urban explorers. They called it in, and we arrived shortly after. Preliminary findings suggest she was attacked here, but there's something off about the scene." Quinn nodded, her gaze sweeping over the area. The platform was a mess of overturned crates and shattered glass, and a thick, dark liquid stained the ground around the body. She crouched beside Isla, her eyes scanning the wounds. "Stab wounds," she murmured, noting the precision of the cuts. "But no weapon at the scene." Eva knelt beside her, her glasses slipping down her nose. "That's not the only thing that's odd. Look at the symbols on the walls." She pointed to a series of intricate markings etched into the cement. "They don't match any known gang graffiti. They look more like ... well, something else." Quinn's brow furrowed as she examined the symbols. They were indeed unlike anything she'd seen before, a combination of ancient runes and arcane symbols. "What else have you found?" "Blood spatter is inconsistent with a typical knife attack," Eva continued, her voice tinged with unease. "And there are no signs of a struggle. It's as if she was immobilized." She pulled a small device from her satchel, a brass compass with a patina of verdigris. "I brought the Veil Compass," she explained. "It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. It might help us understand what we're dealing with." Detective Quinn's eyes flicked to the compass. The needle spun wildly, its movements erratic and unsteady. "So, you think this place is a convergence point for something otherworldly?" Eva nodded, her freckles standing out against her pale skin. "I've been researching this area. The Veil Market is known to move locations every full moon, and this spot aligns with its historical paths. The market is a hidden supernatural black market, dealing in enchanted goods and banned alchemical substances." Quinn's mind raced, connecting the dots. "If the market operates here, it means there's a high concentration of supernatural energy. Could that have something to do with the victim?" "Absolutely," Eva replied. "The symbols on the wall suggest a ritual of some kind. And the way the body was left ... it's almost as if it was meant to be found." Quinn stood, her eyes scanning the platform once more. "We need to canvas the area, talk to anyone who might have seen or heard something. And we need to find out more about the Veil Market. If there are supernatural elements at play, we need to be prepared." As they began to organize the scene, a young officer approached, his voice shaky. "Detective Quinn, we found something you might want to see." Quinn and Eva followed him to a corner of the platform where a small, hidden alcove had been uncovered. Inside, a bone token lay on the ground, its surface etched with similar symbols to those on the walls. Quinn picked it up, her fingers tracing the intricate markings. "This is the entry requirement for the Veil Market," she said, her voice calm but intense. "It confirms our suspicions." Eva's eyes widened. "This means the victim had a connection to the market. We need to find out who she was dealing with and what kind of transactions she was involved in." Quinn nodded, her mind already forming plans. "Eva, I need you to delve deeper into the history of this place and the rituals associated with it. I'll start interviewing the urban explorers and anyone else who might have seen something unusual." As they worked, the air grew heavier, and the shadows seemed to dance along the walls. Detective Quinn couldn't shake the feeling that they were standing on the edge of something far more dangerous than a simple murder. The symbols, the bone token, and the Veil Market all pointed to a realm beyond the realm of the mundane, a world of ancient magic and unseen forces. But Detective Quinn was no stranger to the unknown. She had lost her partner to a case involving supernatural elements, and she was determined to uncover the truth, no matter where it led. She glanced at Eva, a valuable ally in this strange new world, and felt a renewed sense of purpose. Together, they would unravel the mysteries of the Veil Market and bring justice to Isla Thompson. The evidence was mounting, and Detective Quinn was ready to follow it wherever it led, even if it meant stepping into the shadows of the supernatural.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"scanning"
count3
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count2
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"furrowed"
count1
6
word"tinged"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"otherworldly"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"absolutely"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"delve"
count1
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"determined"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count1
16
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"echoed"
2"shattered"
3"intricate"
4"etched"
5"furrowed"
6"tinged"
7"flicked"
8"otherworldly"
9"raced"
10"absolutely"
11"tracing"
12"delve"
13"dance"
14"determined"
15"sense of"
16"unravel"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences44
matches
0"d with unease"
45.45% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences44
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
91.56% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0.017
matches
0"\"Detective Quinn,\" a voice called out, and she turned to see DS{id=\"4414\" name=\"Eva Kowalski\"}{pronouns=\"she/her\"} approaching, her curly red hair framing a freckled complexion."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords987
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
27.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount611
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn15
Tube1
Morris1
Eva9
Detective7
Isla2
Veil2
Market2
Thompson1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Eva"
4"Detective"
5"Isla"
6"Market"
7"Thompson"
places(empty)
globalScore0.273
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount987
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
63.53% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean47
std17.5
cv0.372
sampleLengths
075
162
271
311
450
555
651
729
871
928
1050
1129
1232
1348
1424
1568
1632
1741
1866
1952
2042
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences44
matches
0"been uncovered"
1"was determined"
69.28% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs102
matches
0"were standing"
1"was mounting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount611
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.019639934533551555
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009819967266775777
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean17.02
std9.72
cv0.571
sampleLengths
019
123
221
312
424
522
616
723
824
924
1011
114
1246
138
1422
159
1610
176
1810
1926
2015
218
2216
235
2416
2530
267
2718
287
299
3012
3110
3240
336
3423
353
3629
379
3839
3914
4010
4119
4219
4310
4416
454
463
4729
487
4934
68.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.43103448275862066
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences42
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"Her sharp jaw tensed as"
2"she said, tucking a strand"
3"She crouched beside Isla, her"
4"she murmured, noting the precision"
5"She pointed to a series"
6"They were indeed unlike anything"
7"She pulled a small device"
8"she said, her voice calm"
9"She had lost her partner"
10"She glanced at Eva, a"
ratio0.262
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences42
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
1"The air was thick with"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"Her sharp jaw tensed as"
4"The flickering light of portable"
5"Detective Quinn's eyes narrowed as"
6"a voice called out, and"
7"Eva's round glasses perched precariously"
8"she said, tucking a strand"
9"Quinn asked, her voice steady"
10"Eva cleared her throat."
11"Quinn nodded, her gaze sweeping"
12"The platform was a mess"
13"She crouched beside Isla, her"
14"she murmured, noting the precision"
15"Eva knelt beside her, her"
16"She pointed to a series"
17"Quinn's brow furrowed as she"
18"They were indeed unlike anything"
19"Eva continued, her voice tinged"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn asked, her voice steady and authoritative"
1"she said, her voice calm but intense"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"a voice called out (call out)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Eva continued (continue)"
3"she explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
70.8181%