Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
613
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
12
adverbRatio
0.01957585644371941
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.009787928221859706
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
58
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
58
mean
17.02
std
9.72
cv
0.571
sampleLengths
0
19
1
23
2
21
3
12
4
24
5
22
6
16
7
23
8
24
9
24
10
11
11
4
12
46
13
8
14
22
15
9
16
10
17
6
18
10
19
26
20
15
21
8
22
16
23
5
24
16
25
30
26
7
27
18
28
7
29
9
30
12
31
10
32
40
33
6
34
23
35
3
36
29
37
9
38
39
39
14
40
10
41
19
42
19
43
10
44
16
45
4
46
3
47
29
48
7
49
34
68.3908%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.43103448275862066
totalSentences
58
uniqueOpeners
25
18.7500%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"a voice called out, and she turned to see approaching, her curly red hair framing a freckled complexion (call out, turn see approaching, frame freckle)"
1
"she said, tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear, a nervous habit that Detective Quinn had come to recognize (say, tuck leave come recognize)"
2
"she murmured, noting the precision of the cuts (murmur, note)"
3
"Eva continued, her voice tinged with unease (continue, tinged)"