Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADW1D838Q5GKE67AZM9C

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Duration:
23.5s
Cost:
$0.000972

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in relentless sheets, a curtain of gray obscuring the dimly lit streets of London. Detective Harlow Quinn leaned against the rough brick wall of a narrow alley, the scent of damp concrete mingling with the occasional whiff of fried food from a nearby stall. She wiped the rain from her brow with a weary hand, squinting at the night. Her sharp jaw clenched as she thought of DS Morris—the lingering pain of his loss bubbling to the surface like a cruel joke. Through the torrents of rain, she picked up a flash of movement: a shadow slipping around a corner, darting in and out of the flickering neon glow of a pub sign, just down the road. Adrenaline surged in her veins, and she straightened, the military precision of her training ignited. “Damn it, not again,” she muttered, giving chase. Each step sent splashes of water up her legs as she raced after the silhouette—long strides propelling her across the slick asphalt. She fought against the weight of her damp clothes, the chill of the night air gnawing at her. But despite her determination, the figure was quick, weaving through parked cars and darting into the yawning maw of a side street. Quinn picked up speed, her heart pounding in sync with the distant echo of thunderstorm. She rounded the corner, catching a glimpse of the fugitive—a man, tall and agile, darting deeper into the labyrinth of Soho. As they entered a sparsely populated stretch of the street, a flash of recognition sparked through her hazy focus: Tomás Herrera. He wasn’t just an innocent bystander; he was one of them. A former paramedic turned off-the-books medic for the supernatural crowd. Why was he running? Quinn had built walls tight around her heart, but the concern for the man slipped through, tracing a line of worry. She couldn’t lose him too, not like Morris. But as she closed in, Herrera turned sharply on his heel and bolted toward an unmarked door beneath a flickering overhead light—The Raven’s Nest. Her instincts screamed at her to halt, to re-evaluate. The Nest had its secrets; it catered to an unsavory clientele, and stepping inside meant crossing a threshold into dangerous territory. But losing sight of Tomás would be an even bigger risk. “Tomás!” Quinn called, her voice barely making it over the cacophony of rain, but he didn’t stop. With a grimace, she lunged forward, following him through the door and into the dimly lit bar. The low hum of muted conversations wrapped around her like a thick fog. The atmosphere was thick with something shadowy, something that tugged at her instincts. “Quinn!” The bartender, a wiry man with a sunken face and tired eyes, caught sight of her. He looked ill at ease, glancing around as if expecting trouble. “Not your scene tonight, love.” “I’m looking for Tomás,” she replied, her voice steady despite the rising tide of anxiety. She wove through clusters of patrons, past walls plastered with distorted maps and faded photographs, echoes of lives long gone. It took precious seconds, but eventually she spotted Tomás. He was huddled over a table in the far corner, his expression a deceptive calm, as if he weren’t the man who had just sprinted through Soho in a panic. Their eyes locked, and his warmth momentarily grounded her. But too soon, fear coursed through his warm brown gaze, raising the hairs on her neck. “I can’t stay!” Tomás hissed. He darted a glance toward the door, eyes blazing with urgency. It was evident he was on the brink of fleeing once again, but there was a raw vulnerability about him that stirred something deep in her—an impulse to protect him from whatever lay beyond. “Talk to me, Tommy. What’s going on?” Quinn had stepped closer, lowering her voice in hopes of grounding the tension. He paused, his dark curls slick with rainwater. “You shouldn’t be here.” “I’m not leaving until you tell me what’s happening. Why were you running?” The question loomed between them, thick with unspoken fears and doubt. Every fiber of her being urged her to trust him, but the threat of danger loomed like an uninvited specter. The bartender watched them intently, silently weighing the tension brewing in the room. Tomás leaned closer, his voice a whisper laced with urgency. “I stumbled onto something. Something I shouldn’t have.” “Something? What are you talking about? And more importantly, are you safe?” “Not here.” Tomás's voice trembled as he frowned, darting his gaze toward a shadowed figure that loomed at the entrance. “They’re looking for me—and for you.” “Who?” Quinn’s brow furrowed. But her instincts recoiled the moment she felt a ripple through the air, a whisper of something unnatural, desperately tethered to the chaos around them. “Not now!” Tomás hissed, the panic rising again in his feature. “We have to go—now!” Her chest tightened. She didn’t know if they were talking about supernatural entities or human threats yet again, but the tension had a familiar taste—one she'd sworn she’d never encounter again after losing Morris. Life itself twisted dangerously close to the edge. “Where do we go?” Quinn asked, instinctively reaching for her worn leather watch. She’d been an investigator long enough to know that staying didn’t mean safety. “Down,” he said. “There’s a route to the Market—a secret entrance. But you need a bone token to get in.” “They’re still hunting you,” Quinn urged, her mind racing, calculations forming one by one. “This could be a trap—” “Or it’s our only option,” Tomás shot back, desperation etched across his features. Quinn hesitated, glancing back toward the entrance where the shadowed figure had lingered too long. Her blood ran cold. “Alright. Show me.” As they slipped through a hidden doorway in the back, wreathed by the scent of old wood and untold stories, she felt the darkness wrap around her—threatening, yet familiar. The passage descended into the musty gloom, the air thick with the secrets of the Veil Market nestled beneath Camden. “Stick close,” she instructed Tomás, the words spilling out, brimming with an authority she hoped would break the encroaching gloom. “Whatever happens down here, don’t pull away.” The detective led the way into the unknown, each step a reminder of the risks they faced. As the flickering lights dimmed behind them, the world they left behind blurred, a faint echo of the rain vanishing into a wail of uncertainty.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
90.7749% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"cacophony"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count3
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"furrowed"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echo"
count2
8
word"echoes"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"cacophony"
1"trembled"
2"loomed"
3"unspoken"
4"furrowed"
5"jaw clenched"
6"weight"
7"echo"
8"echoes"
9"etched"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"jaw clenched"
2"a flash of recognition"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean36.97
std18.88
cv0.511
sampleLengths
085
158
262
357
454
565
617
743
833
944
1055
1150
1220
1312
1444
1531
1612
1726
1829
1915
2042
2126
2220
2319
2432
253
2649
2727
2842
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"was huddled"
1"being urged"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"were talking"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount956
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03138075313807531
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012552301255230125
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean14.89
std7.92
cv0.532
sampleLengths
017
130
215
323
435
515
68
722
818
922
1015
1121
1221
1311
1410
154
1621
178
1824
199
2021
2111
2217
2317
2413
2513
2617
2711
285
2915
3020
319
3230
339
3416
355
3611
3734
3820
398
404
4124
4220
4313
4410
458
4612
4720
486
494
81.9444% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners36
25.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered, giving chase (mutter, give)"
1"hissed (hiss)"
2"hissed (hiss)"
3"Quinn urged, her mind racing, calculations forming one by one (urge, race, form)"
4"Tomás shot back, desperation etched across his features (shoot back, etch)"
5"she instructed Tomás, the words spilling out, brimming with an authority she hoped would break the encroaching gloom (instruct spill out, brim break)"
86.1404%