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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPAQSV9GDY0883FZXDM5XT
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Model:
Mistral NeMO
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
15.6s
Cost:
$0.000299
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The doorbell chimed, a shrill, insistent sound that pierced the quiet hum of Rory's flat. She glanced at the clock, her brows
furrowing
. It was late, too late for unexpected visitors. She padded to the door, her steps muffled by the threadbare carpet, and peered through the peephole. A familiar face stared back, one she hadn't seen in months. Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood in the dimly lit hallway, his hands tucked into the pockets of his tailored charcoal suit. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, met hers through the fish-eye lens. Rory took a deep breath, steeling herself. She hadn't seen him since that night, since the argument that had left them both raw and hurting. She undid the three deadbolts, a ritual she'd adopted after moving into Eva's flat, and opened the door. "Lucien," she acknowledged, her voice cool. She leaned against the doorframe, her arms crossed over her chest. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair fell in a curtain around her face, shielding her bright blue eyes from his gaze. "Rory," he replied, a small smile playing on his lips. His French accent, usually a soft purr, was
slightly
more pronounced, a sign of his nervousness. "I apologize for the late hour. I needed to see you." She raised an eyebrow, stepping aside to let him in. "Needed to, or wanted to?" she asked, closing the door behind him. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, wound around her ankles, meowing
softly
. She bent to scratch his ears, a delaying tactic. Lucien shrugged off his suit jacket, draping it over the back of the worn couch. "Is there a difference?" he countered, turning to face her. His ivory-handled cane, a thin blade concealed within, tapped
softly
against the floor. Rory straightened, her eyes narrowing. "There is, when you show up unannounced at my doorstep, Luc." He sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back platinum blond hair. "I know. I just... I needed to talk to you, Rory. About us." She stiffened, her hands
clenching
into fists at her sides. "There is no 'us', Luc. Not anymore." Lucien stepped closer, his eyes searching hers. "There could be," he said
softly
. "If you'd let it." Rory took a step back, her heart pounding in her chest. She gestured to the couch, a silent invitation to sit. She needed space, needed to think. Lucien sat, his back rigid, his hands clasped between his knees. She paced the length of the room, her mind racing. The flat was small, cramped even, filled with books and scrolls and research notes. Eva's influence was evident, but Rory had made it her own, too. A small, framed picture of her parents sat on the windowsill, a reminder of home. "You can't just waltz back into my life, Luc," she said finally, her voice steady. "Not after everything that happened." Lucien
look
ed up, his eyes meeting hers. "I know," he said. "But I can't stop thinking about you, Rory. About us. About what we had." She stopped pacing, her eyes flashing. "What we had was a mess, Luc. A beautiful, complicated mess. And you know why it ended." He nodded, his gaze dropping to the floor. "I do. And I'm sorry, Rory. I'm sorry for pushing you away, for not trusting you. I was... scared." Rory's breath hitched, a sharp, unexpected sound. She hadn't expected him to admit it, to lay his fears bare. She sat down on the armchair across from him, her hands clasped in her lap. "Scared of what, Luc?" she asked
softly
. He
look
ed up, his eyes filled with a vulnerability she'd never seen before. "Of losing you," he admitted. "Of you finding out the truth about me, about what I am. About what I've done." Rory's heart ached for him, for the pain she heard in his voice. She knew about his past, about the darkness that haunted him. She knew about the realm of Avaros, about the demon blood that flowed through his veins. She knew about the fixer he'd been, the information broker in London's supernatural underworld. And she
knew that none
of it mattered, not to her. "You're not that person anymore, Luc," she said, her voice steady. "You've changed. We've both changed." He nodded, a small smile playing on his lips. "We have," he agreed. "And I want to change more, Rory. With you. If you'll let me." Rory
look
ed at him,
really
look
ed at him. She saw the hope in his eyes, the love that had never faded. She saw the man she'd fallen in love with, the man she'd never stopped loving. She took a deep breath, her decision made. "I can't promise anything, Luc," she said, her voice soft. "But I can try. We can try." A slow smile spread across Lucien's face, a smile that lit up his eyes, that made him
look
younger, happier. He stood, crossing the distance between them in two long strides. He cupped her face in his hands, his thumbs brushing away the tears she hadn't realized she'd shed. "Trying is enough," he said, his voice
barely above a whisper
. "For now, it's enough." And then he kissed her, a soft, gentle kiss that tasted of promises and second chances. And Rory kissed him back, her heart swelling with hope, with love, with the promise of a future together.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
50.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"he said softly [softly]"
1
"she said finally, her voice steady [finally]"
2
"he said, his voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
21.6125%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
893
totalAiIsmAdverbs
7
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
4
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"softly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
3
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
77.6036%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
893
totalAiIsms
2
found
0
word
"clenching"
count
1
1
word
"furrowing"
count
1
highlights
0
"clenching"
1
"furrowing"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
65
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
65
filterMatches
0
"look"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
79
matches
0
"knew that none"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
27
mean
32.93
std
17.34
cv
0.527
sampleLengths
0
93
1
43
2
37
3
37
4
41
5
38
6
16
7
24
8
17
9
17
10
38
11
51
12
20
13
25
14
23
15
27
16
34
17
7
18
34
19
65
20
16
21
26
22
36
23
25
24
49
25
15
26
35
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
65
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
128
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
699
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
21
adverbRatio
0.030042918454935622
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.01430615164520744
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
79
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
93.3800%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
79
mean
11.25
std
4.32
cv
0.383
sampleLengths
0
15
1
8
2
8
3
17
4
11
5
21
6
13
7
7
8
18
9
18
10
6
11
11
12
20
13
10
14
16
15
11
16
10
17
12
18
10
19
9
20
15
21
10
22
13
23
5
24
11
25
11
26
13
27
10
28
7
29
7
30
6
31
4
32
11
33
10
34
6
35
11
36
10
37
14
38
12
39
15
40
15
41
5
42
7
43
4
44
14
45
6
46
17
47
8
48
19
49
7
38.8186%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.31645569620253167
totalSentences
79
uniqueOpeners
25
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she acknowledged, her voice cool (acknowledge)"
1
"he replied, a small smile playing on his lips (reply, play)"
2
"he said softly (say softly)"
3
"she said finally, her voice steady (say finally)"
4
"he admitted (admit)"
5
"he agreed (agree)"
84.2009%