| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.591 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 70.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1000 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "lightly" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1000 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "synchronized" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "wavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 988 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.99% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 844 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Aurora | 13 | | Isolde | 7 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Glancing | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.73 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a roasted leg of lamb, juices" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 988 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.07% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 35.29 | | std | 12.96 | | cv | 0.367 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.169 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered around them, thick with the scent of honeysuckle and something metallic beneath—like blood on the wind." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—indigo petals with gold veins, crimson blossoms that pulsed like living embers." | | 2 | "\"Time's different here, isn't it?\" She glanced at her watch; the second hand stuttered, then spun backward." | | 3 | "The pendant's warmth spread through her chest as they approached a ring of mushrooms—perfectly spaced, too symmetrical to be natural." | | 4 | "She unsheathed the Fae-forged dagger at her belt; the moonsilver blade glowed faintly blue in the gathering dark." | | 5 | "Then—a sound like glass shattering in reverse." | | 6 | "The scents wafting through the arch—roasting meats, spiced wine, caramelized sugar—made her mouth water." | | 7 | "She gasped, clutching at it—then froze." | | 8 | "From the wheat field emerged a figure—humanoid but wrong, its limbs too long, its mouth stretching ear to ear." | | 9 | "The taster recoiled with a hiss, then turned its gaze to Aurora—specifically, to the pendant at her throat." | | 10 | "Aurora hesitated—then followed, bracing for the icy plunge." | | 11 | "One reached out—only to yelp as its fingertips blackened and curled like burned paper." | | 12 | "Somewhere ahead, another archway shimmered into view—this one framed by bones woven through with grapevines." | | 13 | "The Heartstone pulsed once, hard, as the three of them stepped toward the bone archway—and whatever waited beyond." |
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| 88.36% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 863 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.05330243337195829 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01738122827346466 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 11.9 | | std | 5.47 | | cv | 0.459 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 64.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.42168674698795183 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Then—a sound like glass shattering" | | 1 | "Instead, the stream held her" | | 2 | "Somewhere ahead, another archway shimmered" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She rubbed the small crescent" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 2 | "She glanced at her watch;" | | 3 | "Her lavender eyes tracked something" | | 4 | "She unsheathed the Fae-forged dagger" | | 5 | "She plucked a single silver" | | 6 | "It hovered midair over the" | | 7 | "She gasped, clutching at it—then" | | 8 | "Their light reflected off obsidian-black" | | 9 | "Their grip was cool and" | | 10 | "It gnawed on what looked" | | 11 | "It dropped its meal and" | | 12 | "It grinned, revealing rows of" | | 13 | "it rasped, then let out" | | 14 | "She sprinted after Isolde toward" | | 15 | "She walked onto the black" | | 16 | "she called, her voice carrying" | | 17 | "Their violet gaze was grim." |
| | ratio | 0.254 | |
| 23.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "The air shimmered around them," | | 2 | "She rubbed the small crescent" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured from the shifting" | | 4 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 5 | "Aurora squinted at the grove" | | 6 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—indigo" | | 7 | "She glanced at her watch;" | | 8 | "Isolde said, appearing between two" | | 9 | "The silver-haired seer left no" | | 10 | "Her lavender eyes tracked something" | | 11 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadowy" | | 12 | "The fungi dimmed where they" | | 13 | "The pendant's warmth spread through" | | 14 | "The air above them warped" | | 15 | "She unsheathed the Fae-forged dagger" | | 16 | "Isolde tilted her head, listening" | | 17 | "She plucked a single silver" | | 18 | "It hovered midair over the" | | 19 | "The waiting stretched." |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond it stretched a twilight landscape bathed in amber light, where trees bore fruits that glistened like candied jewels." | | 1 | "Their light reflected off obsidian-black streams that cut through fields of wheat taller than houses." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx coalesced, their whisper-voice barely audible:" | | 1 | "she called, her voice carrying oddly over the frozen stream" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She glanced (glance)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |