| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.407 | | leniency | 0.815 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.074 | |
| 88.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 835 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 835 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "predator" | | 10 | "echoes" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "lurched" | | 14 | "looming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 830 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.69% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 682 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Aurora | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Ahead | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | December | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.547 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.52% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.205 | | wordCount | 830 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just between worlds, but between moments" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 24.41 | | std | 15.5 | | cv | 0.635 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 15 |
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| 94.79% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "being watched" | | 1 | "was layered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here tasted different—thick with the scent of crushed petals and something metallic, like old coins left on the tongue." | | 1 | "She did feel it—a pressure against her skin, the sense of being watched by something vast and unseen." | | 2 | "But when Rory leaned closer, she saw shapes moving beneath—faces, landscapes, fragments of lives that weren’t hers." | | 3 | "A figure emerged from between the trees—tall, clad in robes the color of ripe plums, their face obscured by a mask of gilded leaves." | | 4 | "From the pool, the water surged upward, forming shapes—a man with hollow eyes, a door wreathed in flame, a knife slick with blood." | | 5 | "—then stilled." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 689 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03193033381712627 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010159651669085631 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 10 | | std | 6.25 | | cv | 0.625 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 65.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.42168674698795183 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere deep within its heart," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 2 | "She left no footprints in" | | 3 | "She did feel it—a pressure" | | 4 | "Their violet eyes flickered" | | 5 | "It pulsed beneath her touch," | | 6 | "She yanked her hand back." | | 7 | "They moved with the deliberate" | | 8 | "Their head tilted" | | 9 | "They extended a hand, palm" | | 10 | "They snapped their fingers" | | 11 | "They bolted, the grove twisting" | | 12 | "they murmured, and the world" | | 13 | "They stood at the edge" | | 14 | "It was cold now." | | 15 | "she said quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 6.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora’s" | | 1 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 2 | "The warmth spread through her" | | 3 | "The air here tasted different—thick" | | 4 | "The trees arched overhead, their" | | 5 | "Rory murmured, her voice swallowed" | | 6 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 7 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 8 | "She left no footprints in" | | 9 | "The half-Fae paused beside an" | | 10 | "Isolde said, not turning" | | 11 | "She did feel it—a pressure" | | 12 | "The Fae-forged blade at her" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadowy" | | 14 | "Their violet eyes flickered" | | 15 | "A breeze stirred, carrying the" | | 16 | "The flowers at their feet" | | 17 | "Rory crouched, brushing a fingertip" | | 18 | "It pulsed beneath her touch," | | 19 | "She yanked her hand back." |
| | ratio | 0.906 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no footprints in the moss, no disturbance in the carpet of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been blooming in December." | | 1 | "The half-Fae paused beside an ancient oak, its bark etched with symbols that made Rory’s eyes water if she stared too long." | | 2 | "The flowers at their feet trembled, their petals unfolding wider as if in greeting." |
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| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, not turning" | | 1 | "they murmured, and the world lurched—" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 3 | "They snapped (snap)" | | 4 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.296 | | leniency | 0.593 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.37 | |