Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPAVR5XVPXCGPN0ZFT3VKZ

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter twisted the third deadbolt on Eva's door, the metal clicking into place with a finality that settled uncomfortably in her chest. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, weaved between her legs, his soft purr a bassline to the rhythm of her thoughts. She bent to scratch behind his ears, a familiar comfort in this sanctuary of books and scrolls that felt less like a home and more like an archive of a life she didn’t entirely belong to. Rory moved to the cluttered kitchen, the kettle already boiling. She reached for a chipped mug decorated with faded daisies when a sharp knock echoed through the flat. The sound reverberated louder than it should in the confined space, setting her nerves on edge. Few people knew she was here — even fewer would knock. She opened the door and froze. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, immaculate as always in a tailored charcoal suit, his heterochromatic eyes — amber and black — fixed on hers in an inscrutable gaze. His presence filled the doorway and seemed to compress the air between them. Rory's grip tightened on the doorframe, her knuckles blanching under her pale skin. "Lucien," she managed, her voice barely above a whisper. It had been months since she'd last seen him, since that night in the alley when everything had gone so wrong. Hurt and attraction rippled through her, ghosts of feelings she'd buried beneath layers of practicality and distance. “Rory,” he greeted, the timbre of his voice as smooth and controlled as ever, though there was a tension in the way he held his ivory-handled cane, the concealed blade a reminder that Lucien was never truly unarmed. “May I come in?” She hesitated, but the unspoken history between them compelled her to step aside. Lucien moved past her with a nod, his presence immediately shifting the atmosphere of the small flat. Ptolemy trotted up to him, rubbing against his well-polished shoes. Lucien bent and scratched beneath the cat's chin, the shadow of a smile ghosting his lips. “Eva’s not here,” Rory said, closing the door with a soft click. She returned to the kettle, pouring hot water over a tea bag while she summoned the strength to face him. “If you’re looking for her.” “I’m not.” His gaze swept the room, taking in the disarray of books and crumpled notes. His expression softened as he straightened, moving closer to where she stood. “I came to see you.” Rory’s hand trembled as she set the kettle down, the very heat of its spout seeping into her bones. “Why?” She turned to face him, the distance between them feeling both too much and not enough. Lucien paused, his eyes holding hers with an intensity that made it hard to breathe. “We never finished our conversation,” he said simply, as if those words could contain the months of silence, the acridity of their last parting. “What conversation?” Her voice was sharper than she intended, but she couldn’t help it. The sting of his departure was still fresh, salt in an old wound. He took a measured step closer, his cane tapping softly against the wood floor. “The one where I explain why I left.” She wanted to shield herself with anger, to reclaim the sense of betrayal that had allowed her to move forward, but his proximity disarmed her. She looked away, focusing on the chipped mug in her hands. “What’s the point, Lucien? It’s too late.” “It’s never too late,” he countered, his voice a low murmur that thrummed with conviction. “Not for us.” Her laugh was bitter, a sharp bark. “You sound so sure.” His hand, warm and steady, reached out to gently cup her chin, lifting her face to meet his gaze. “Because I am.” The contact sparked memories she had fought hard to suppress — the late-night conversations, his fingers trailing her skin, the unexpected tenderness beneath his veneer. She searched his face for signs of deceit, but found none. Only the familiar battle-scarred surface of a man she had once trusted implicitly. “Why, Lucien?” she whispered, the question a plea more than an accusation. “Why did you leave?” “I had to protect you.” The words came out rough, as if they pained him to admit. “The underworld is dangerous, Rory, and I couldn’t let you be collateral in my battles.” She pulled away, his hand falling back to his side with a reluctance that spoke more than his words. “By disappearing without a word? That protected me?” A ghost of regret haunted his features. “I thought it was the only way. Your life here, separate from mine — it was safer.” “Safer,” she echoed, tasting the word like ash. “Safer, but not better.” “I see that now,” he admitted, his eyes darkening with an emotion that made the hair on her arms rise. “Leaving you was a mistake, one I regret every day.” Silence pooled between them, heavy and daunting. Rory’s resolve faltered as she took in the sincerity etched into his face, the tension in his jaw that betrayed how much this cost him. “What do you want from me, Lucien?” Her voice trembled, each word a struggle against the betrayal that lingered like a phantom. “I want a chance," he implored, stepping closer until the scent of his cologne filled her senses, grounding her in the here and now. “A chance to make it right, to prove that I can be the man you need.” Her heart ached with the desire to believe him, to fall back into the rhythm of them — but trust, once broken, was not so easily mended. “And if I can’t?” she asked, a vulnerability she hated seeping into her tone. “What if I can’t believe you?” His hand found hers, fingers lacing together in a gesture that felt both foreign and familiar. “Then I’ll spend every day earning it,” he vowed, his voice a fervent whisper that wrapped around her heart like a promise. “I’ll show you that I’m committed, that I’m here.” The fight drained from her, leaving only exhaustion and a dim flicker of hope. Her gaze dropped to their joined hands, the contrast of his cool control and her desperate uncertainty. She didn’t know if she could trust him again; the scars of their past were too raw, too jagged. But in the dim light of Eva’s cluttered flat, with the soft purring of Ptolemy mingling with the sounds of the city beyond, she knew she couldn’t walk away either. “Okay,” she said, her voice barely audible beneath the weight of what it carried. “But no more secrets, Lucien. If we’re doing this, we do it honestly.” A smile touched the corners of his mouth, his eyes softening in a way that made her chest tighten. “No more secrets,” he agreed, sealing the promise with a gentle squeeze of her hand. As they stood there, the past still heavy but the possibility of a future beginning to take shape, Rory realized that maybe, just maybe, they could find their way back to each other.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
5.1282% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"she managed, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
1"he greeted, the timbre of his voice as smooth and controlled as ever, though there was a tension in the way he held his ivory-handled cane, the concealed blade a reminder that Lucien was never truly unarmed [ever, truly]"
2"he said simply, as if those words could contain the months of silence, the acridity of their last parting [simply]"
3"he vowed, his voice a fervent whisper that wrapped around her heart like a promise [around]"
4"she said, her voice barely audible beneath the weight of what it carried [barely]"
57.5191% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"softly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"truly"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.0382% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"reverberated"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count2
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count2
7
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"reverberated"
2"flicker"
3"trembled"
4"unspoken"
5"weight"
6"echoed"
7"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences60
matches
0"was bitter"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"prove that I"
1"committed, that I’m"
80.2603% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean34.68
std14.94
cv0.431
sampleLengths
078
155
26
355
447
542
656
737
833
936
1039
1127
1222
1343
1418
1511
1622
1749
1816
1932
2027
2124
2212
2330
2432
2522
2640
2747
2847
2950
3030
3127
3234
3333
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
90.6071% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount980
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"familiar battle-scarred surface"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04387755102040816
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013265306122448979
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean15.12
std7.59
cv0.502
sampleLengths
023
119
236
310
418
516
611
76
829
913
1013
119
1221
1317
1438
154
1613
1717
1810
1916
2012
2120
225
2316
2412
255
2619
2717
2815
2924
3014
3113
3214
338
3425
3511
367
3715
383
397
404
4119
423
4325
4411
4513
4612
474
4817
4915
68.8034% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4358974358974359
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners34
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she managed, her voice barely above a whisper (manage)"
1"he greeted, the timbre of his voice as smooth and controlled as ever, though there was a tension in the way he held his ivory-handled cane, the concealed blade a reminder that Lucien was never truly unarmed (greet, control be hold conceal does not be never)"
2"Rory said, closing the door with a soft click (say, close)"
3"he said simply, as if those words could contain the months of silence, the acridity of their last parting (say simply, contain)"
4"he countered, his voice a low murmur that thrummed with conviction (counter, thrum)"
5"whispered (whisper)"
6"she echoed, tasting the word like ash (echo, taste)"
7"he admitted, his eyes darkening with an emotion that made the hair on her arms rise (admit, darken make rise)"
8"he implored, stepping closer until the scent of his cologne filled her senses, grounding her in the here and now (implore, step fill ground)"
9"he vowed, his voice a fervent whisper that wrapped around her heart like a promise (vow, wrap around like)"
10"she said, her voice barely audible beneath the weight of what it carried (say, carry)"
11"he agreed, sealing the promise with a gentle squeeze of her hand (agree, seal)"
77.4916%