| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 78.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "sanctuary" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "reverberated" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "unspoken" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "measured" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "tenderness" | | 14 | "resolve" | | 15 | "etched" | | 16 | "desire" | | 17 | "flicker" | | 18 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 97.22% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "f with anger" | | 1 | "was bitter" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1179 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 981 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 5 | | Silence | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.26% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 34.68 | | std | 14.94 | | cv | 0.431 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "Few people knew she was here — even fewer would knock." | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, immaculate as always in a tailored charcoal suit, his heterochromatic eyes — amber and black — fixed on hers in an inscrutable gaze." | | 2 | "The contact sparked memories she had fought hard to suppress — the late-night conversations, his fingers trailing her skin, the unexpected tenderness beneath his veneer." | | 3 | "Her heart ached with the desire to believe him, to fall back into the rhythm of them — but trust, once broken, was not so easily mended." | | 4 | "She didn’t know if she could trust him again; the scars of their past were too raw, too jagged." |
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| 90.61% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 980 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "familiar battle-scarred surface" |
| | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.04387755102040816 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013265306122448979 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 15.12 | | std | 7.59 | | cv | 0.502 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 68.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4358974358974359 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the familiar battle-scarred surface" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She bent to scratch behind" | | 1 | "She reached for a chipped" | | 2 | "She opened the door and" | | 3 | "His presence filled the doorway" | | 4 | "she managed, her voice barely" | | 5 | "It had been months since" | | 6 | "he greeted, the timbre of" | | 7 | "She hesitated, but the unspoken" | | 8 | "She returned to the kettle," | | 9 | "His gaze swept the room," | | 10 | "His expression softened as he" | | 11 | "She turned to face him," | | 12 | "he said simply, as if" | | 13 | "Her voice was sharper than" | | 14 | "He took a measured step" | | 15 | "She wanted to shield herself" | | 16 | "She looked away, focusing on" | | 17 | "he countered, his voice a" | | 18 | "Her laugh was bitter, a" | | 19 | "His hand, warm and steady," |
| | ratio | 0.583 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter twisted the third" | | 1 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, weaved" | | 2 | "She bent to scratch behind" | | 3 | "Rory moved to the cluttered" | | 4 | "She reached for a chipped" | | 5 | "The sound reverberated louder than" | | 6 | "Few people knew she was" | | 7 | "She opened the door and" | | 8 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 9 | "His presence filled the doorway" | | 10 | "Rory's grip tightened on the" | | 11 | "she managed, her voice barely" | | 12 | "It had been months since" | | 13 | "he greeted, the timbre of" | | 14 | "She hesitated, but the unspoken" | | 15 | "Lucien moved past her with" | | 16 | "Ptolemy trotted up to him," | | 17 | "Lucien bent and scratched beneath" | | 18 | "Rory said, closing the door" | | 19 | "She returned to the kettle," |
| | ratio | 0.933 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien paused, his eyes holding hers with an intensity that made it hard to breathe." | | 1 | "She wanted to shield herself with anger, to reclaim the sense of betrayal that had allowed her to move forward, but his proximity disarmed her." | | 2 | "She pulled away, his hand falling back to his side with a reluctance that spoke more than his words." | | 3 | "His hand found hers, fingers lacing together in a gesture that felt both foreign and familiar." | | 4 | "A smile touched the corners of his mouth, his eyes softening in a way that made her chest tighten." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she managed, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "he said simply, as if those words could contain the months of silence, the acridity of their last parting" | | 2 | "he countered, his voice a low murmur that thrummed with conviction" | | 3 | "she whispered, the question a plea more than an accusation" | | 4 | "The words came out, as if they pained him to admit" |
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| 11.11% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "he implored (implore)" | | 3 | "he vowed (vow)" | | 4 | "he agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.278 | |