Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1021
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"cold, graffiti-covered wall"
1
"small, leather-bound book"
adverbCount
48
adverbRatio
0.04701273261508325
lyAdverbCount
26
lyAdverbRatio
0.025465230166503428
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
81
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
81
mean
15.44
std
6.27
cv
0.406
sampleLengths
0
23
1
19
2
32
3
30
4
18
5
20
6
13
7
27
8
11
9
12
10
24
11
12
12
10
13
14
14
19
15
22
16
8
17
23
18
23
19
24
20
14
21
16
22
10
23
9
24
26
25
7
26
8
27
21
28
4
29
30
30
14
31
12
32
8
33
23
34
15
35
11
36
7
37
7
38
15
39
21
40
15
41
12
42
14
43
10
44
10
45
16
46
25
47
19
48
22
49
21
76.1317%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.49382716049382713
totalSentences
81
uniqueOpeners
40
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
15
fancyCount
11
fancyTags
0
"said a seasoned officer, standing to her left (say stand leave)"
1
"Harlow said, straightening, her eyes narrowing with the focus that had won her a decade’s worth of department accolades (say, straighten, narrow win)"
2
"she explained, holding it gingerly (explain, hold)"
3
"she muttered, her pragmatic mind still struggling to fully embrace the more fantastical elements of her current reality (mutter, fully embrace)"
4
"Eva confirmed, her voice a whisper (confirm, voice)"
5
"she murmured, turning it over in her gloved hand (murmur, turn)"
6
"she said, almost as if thinking aloud (say, think)"
7
"Harlow said quietly, more to herself than anyone else (say quietly)"
8
"she said, marching out of the station master's office with a steely resolve (say, march steely resolve)"
9
"Eva said, peering over her shoulder (say, peer)"
10
"she ordered briskly, her voice cutting through the station’s silence (order briskly, cut)"