| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.435 | | leniency | 0.87 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1207 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1207 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "footfall" | | 3 | "cascading" | | 4 | "enigmatic" | | 5 | "lilt" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "otherworldly" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "surreal" | | 15 | "unspoken" | | 16 | "sanctuary" | | 17 | "amidst" | | 18 | "velvet" | | 19 | "flicker" | | 20 | "treacherous" | | 21 | "crystalline" | | 22 | "dance" | | 23 | "echoes" | | 24 | "shimmered" | | 25 | "resonated" | | 26 | "weight" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "a flicker of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "the sense of awe" | | 1 | "a flicker of hope" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1200 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 968 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Rory | 19 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Despite | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Varga" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.519 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "each footfall seemingly swallowed by the mo" | | 1 | "lilt that seemed to meld with the rustling leaves" | | 2 | "as if acknowledging an old friend" | | 3 | "iberate dance, seemingly aware of their pres" | | 4 | "as if considering" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1200 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.74% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 37.5 | | std | 13.99 | | cv | 0.373 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 57 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 78.05% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | | 0 | "was teeming" | | 1 | "were glowing" | | 2 | "were communicating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "The world shifted the moment she crossed the threshold—subtle, like a breath held too long." | | 1 | "She turned, her gaze softening—odd for a face so ageless." | | 2 | "This place was teeming with life, with magic—somehow it felt wrong to be here, like they were intruders in a sacred space." | | 3 | "Rory stepped closer, trying to read them; the characters eluded her comprehension, dancing away whenever her eyes sought to pin them down." | | 4 | "In the distance, Rory caught a flicker of light—fireflies, or perhaps something else, moving with purpose rather than random flits." | | 5 | "From the shadowed trees, figures emerged—tall, ethereal beings whose features were a blend of human and something far older." | | 6 | "Their skin shimmered like moonlight; their eyes were dark, inscrutable pools." | | 7 | "They had been acknowledged, accepted—at least for now." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 974 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03593429158110883 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018480492813141684 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 13.19 | | std | 6.1 | | cv | 0.463 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 65.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4065934065934066 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Too much rested on their" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved effortlessly, barely disturbing" | | 1 | "she intoned, her voice an" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes, faintly glowing," | | 3 | "She touched the faintly glowing" | | 4 | "It didn’t seem to matter." | | 5 | "She knelt and whispered to" | | 6 | "she said, her pale lavender" | | 7 | "Its petals were silvery, almost" | | 8 | "They extended a shadowy hand," | | 9 | "they murmured, a rare note" | | 10 | "She turned, her gaze softening—odd" | | 11 | "she said, tapping the ground" | | 12 | "She gestured to the others" | | 13 | "They reached an open glade" | | 14 | "They moved in a slow," | | 15 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 16 | "Their skin shimmered like moonlight;" | | 17 | "They moved with a fluid" | | 18 | "They had been acknowledged, accepted—at" | | 19 | "she said, gripping the Heartstone" |
| | ratio | 0.276 | |
| 32.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory, as she often went" | | 2 | "The world shifted the moment" | | 3 | "Isolde Varga glided ahead, her" | | 4 | "She moved effortlessly, barely disturbing" | | 5 | "she intoned, her voice an" | | 6 | "Nyx materialized beside Rory, their" | | 7 | "Their violet eyes, faintly glowing," | | 8 | "Nyx whispered, their voice like" | | 9 | "Rory felt the weighty silence" | | 10 | "Every wildflower and blade of" | | 11 | "The air was sweet with" | | 12 | "She touched the faintly glowing" | | 13 | "Shafts of sunlight pierced the" | | 14 | "Time drifted, languid as honey," | | 15 | "It didn’t seem to matter." | | 16 | "Isolde paused by a grove" | | 17 | "She knelt and whispered to" | | 18 | "she said, her pale lavender" | | 19 | "Rory replied, an edge of" |
| | ratio | 0.855 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved effortlessly, barely disturbing the tiger lilies and bluebells that carpeted the grove." | | 1 | "She touched the faintly glowing Heartstone pendant around her neck, feeling the comforting pulse of its warmth against her skin." | | 2 | "She knelt and whispered to the flowers, their petals vibrating in response as if acknowledging an old friend." | | 3 | "Rory felt drawn to them, as if they were communicating something vital without words." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory replied, an edge of wry humor in her voice" | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice barely audible" | | 2 | "the guardian spoke, their voice a harmonic chord that resonated in Rory's chest" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "the guardian spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.348 | | leniency | 0.696 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.348 | |