Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPB5G8ZPVR36KX0R7WZEMZ

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14.4s
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$0.027855
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Azure

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter slipped beneath the arching boughs of a mighty oak, its roots tangling at her feet as if reluctant to let her wander deeper into the grove. Sunlight streamed through the canopy in translucent shafts, illuminating dust motes that spun like tiny galaxies. She exhaled slowly, the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade at her side a familiar comfort. Around her, Richmond Park seemed to hold its breath, a serene silence broken only by Nyx's whisper of a voice. “Careful, Rory,” Nyx murmured, their form shifting between solid and shadow as they strode beside her. Their violet eyes, faintly glowing, scanned the surroundings. "Time moves differently here.” Aurora nodded, pulling up the hood of her jacket as if it might shield her from the strangeness of the realm they ventured into—a pocket between Earth and the Fae. She glanced at Isolde, who led their small party through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove. The Seer moved with an eerie, gliding grace, leaving no footprints on the loamy ground. Her silver hair floated around her like a cape of moonlight. "Stay close," Isolde said, her voice carrying a melodic lilt that seemed to blend seamlessly with the surroundings, as if the very air conspired with her. Despite their surreality, the wildflowers at their feet thrived without care for the season, blooming in every vibrant hue imaginable. Aurora felt an odd tug in her heart, both joy and melancholy, as she took in the sight. The Heartstone Pendant around her neck pulsed faintly, its inner glow barely visible in the light-dappled clearing. “What do you sense, Nyx?” Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx seemed to listen to something beyond mortal earshot. “The Grove sings with ancient magic,” they replied. “It’s not hostile, but it’s... aware of us.” Isolde turned to them with a serene smile, her pale lavender eyes gleaming with unspoken knowledge. “The Grove is indeed sentient in its own way. It remembers those who tread here but seeks no harm.” As they continued deeper, Aurora’s breath grew shallow, the air thick with the richness of life itself. The sensation was tangible, like walking through honey, sweet and slow. She felt her worries from the mortal world siphoning away, replaced by a heady sense of timelessness. The path wound through towering trees that seemed impossibly old, their bark textured like stone and etched with ancient symbols that glowed faintly with Fae magic. Ahead, a clearing opened up revealing a spectacle that stole her breath. A crystalline waterfall cascaded from a height, its waters sparkling with iridescent light as it poured into a pool that shimmered like liquid opal. The scent of lilac and honeysuckle pervaded the glade, mingling with the cool, fresh ozone from the falls. Aurora noticed the faint stirrings of the water, like the breath of some large, slumbering beast beneath the surface. Isolde paused, extending a hand, as if presenting the scene to a sovereign. “Behold, the Heart of the Grove. Drink of these waters, and you shall glimpse the future, if only for a fleeting moment.” Aurora approached the edge, her reflection skewed and exotic in the magical pool. She felt drawn, a compulsion to peer deeper, to understand the mysteries that lay beneath. Nyx hovered behind her, wary and vigilant, their shadowy form flickering as though caught between dimensions. Moving to kneel by the water, Aurora cupped her hands and dipped them into the cool, silkiness. The liquid clung to her skin like quicksilver. She lifted the hewn crystal cup, watching it dance with multicolored hues before drinking deeply. The liquid was cold, like a breath of ice, and yet warmed her insides as it flowed down her throat. A kaleidoscope of visions erupted in her mind’s eye. She saw the Veil, vast and shimmering, flickering with the pulse of the world’s magic. A moment later, she was standing before an infernal landscape bathed in a warm amber sky, the excess of Dymas stretching out before her in opulent splendor. Tables groaned under the weight of feasts, and the air was thick with the scent of exotic spices. She felt the Heartstone Pendant burning hotter against her skin, seeing a portal waver in the distance. Then, the scene shifted. She was back in a shadowy London alley, her breath coming in gasps as she wielded the Fae-Forged Blade against shapes that hissed and shrieked. A figure emerged from the darkness—her ex, Evan, with an insidious grin that sent shivers down her spine. And behind him, countless shadows with glowing eyes, ever advancing. The visions faded, leaving her breathless and dazed. She blinked, the grove coming back into sharp focus. Isolde leaned forward, her lavender gaze intent. “What did you see, Aurora?” Aurora’s heart raced. “I saw... possibilities,” she whispered. She turned to Nyx, her resolve hardening. “The Veil. It weakens soon, during the solstice.” Nyx nodded knowingly. “We must be prepared. The rifts will open, and Hel’s influence will seep through.” Isolde’s expression turned grave. “Then we have little time. The Heartstone will guide you to the portal when the moment is right. But beware, Aurora. The paths you choose will shape your fate.” Aurora stood, wiping her hands on her jeans, feeling the weight of the future pressing down on her. The grove seemed to watch her, silent and expectant. She took a deep breath, feeling strength flood her spirit. She was not alone. With the Fae blade at her side, Nyx’s fluctuating form by her shoulder, and Isolde’s cryptic guidance, she would face whatever came. “Let’s find this portal,” she said, her voice steady. “It’s time to face Dymas.” The trio moved onward, deeper into the heart of the grove where shadows danced with light and the past merged seamlessly with the future. Each step carried the weight of destiny, and Aurora felt the pulse of the world’s magic with every heartbeat. As they ventured forth, the whispers of the grove seemed to sing of both hope and peril, guiding them through the twilight of uncertainty.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.7778% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said, her voice carrying a melodic lilt that seemed to blend seamlessly with the surroundings, as if the very air conspired with her [seamlessly very]"
60.6686% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1017
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"knowingly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"knowingly"
1"slowly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1017
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"crystalline"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"weight"
count4
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"crystalline"
2"shimmered"
3"gleaming"
4"unspoken"
5"weight"
6"dance"
7"etched"
8"kaleidoscope"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean42.17
std22.95
cv0.544
sampleLengths
079
128
279
326
455
513
625
735
871
912
1061
1135
1244
1360
149
1577
1657
1729
1823
1917
2033
2163
2214
2367
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was standing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount881
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.022701475595913734
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014755959137343927
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean14.67
std7.06
cv0.482
sampleLengths
028
116
215
320
416
58
64
730
823
915
1011
1126
1220
1318
1417
1513
169
178
188
1916
2019
2117
2211
2317
2426
2512
2624
2718
2819
2913
3022
3113
3215
3316
3417
358
3615
3720
389
3915
4027
4118
4217
434
4425
4518
4610
478
489
497
66.1836% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4057971014492754
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners28
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured, their form shifting between solid and shadow as they strode beside her (murmur, shift strode)"
1"Isolde said, her voice carrying a melodic lilt that seemed to blend seamlessly with the surroundings, as if the very air conspired with her (say, carry seem blend seamlessly very air conspired)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
85.5665%