Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPBBBGH0B9XFTN7S2Z5WRR

Run Details

Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.002224
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended into the abandoned Tube station, her military precision guiding each step down the creaky stairs. The air clung to her like a damp shroud, heavy with the scent of decay and neglect. A familiar tang of crime scenes, yet this one felt off, even before she'd laid eyes on the evidence. The Veil Market, an underground bazaar notorious for peddling the occult, wasn't exactly the kind of place MPD usually got called to. A bone token, required for entry, had been left for her at the surface, its stark whiteness seeming to glow in the dim light as she tucked it into her pocket. At the bottom of the stairs, a makeshift scene greeted her. Fluorescent lights, brought in by her team, cast an eerie glow over the crowded marketplace. Stalls, once piled high with enchanted wares and banned substances, now stood bare, their owners wisely absent. Only one stall seemed out of place, its Shade-crafted goods still on display, as if the vendor had simply stepped away for a moment. Quinn's gaze lingered, her sharp jaw working in thought. In the center of the scene, a body lay covered on the cold concrete. "Quinn, glad you're here," a voice said, echoing off the tile walls. DS Raj, a newer addition to her team, approached, his eyes scanning the area with a mixture of fascination and unease. "Not exactly our usual turf, is it?" Quinn's response was a raised eyebrow. "What do we know?" Raj consulted his notebook. "Victim's a local, name of Marcus Reed. No ID on him, but one of the... vendors recognized him. Said he was a regular here, always looking for something 'big'." Raj's tone implied his skepticism. "Single bullet wound to the chest, no shell casing found. Witnesses claim they heard nothing, saw nothing. The usual." Quinn's attention shifted to the body, then to the surrounding area, her eyes drinking in every detail. Something didn't align. "Show me the entry and exit points." As Raj led her through the labyrinthine market, Quinn noticed inconsistencies in the narrative. Stalls were too neatly arranged, considering the apparent haste of their owners' departure. The air, while thick with the smell of decay, lacked the metallic tang of recent gunfire. And the body... Back at the center of the scene, Quinn knelt beside the covered form, lifting the edge of the sheet. A single glance at the wound, and her mind began racing. The injury was too clean, too precise, for the chaos one would expect in a place like the Veil Market. "Raj, look at this," she said, her voice low, inviting him to share her observation. "This isn't a gunshot wound." Raj crouched beside her, confusion etched on his face. "What are you talking about, Quinn? The wound's—" "Entry and exit are too small, too uniform. There's no residue, no burn marks. This is a puncture wound, not a bullet hole." Quinn stood, her eyes now roaming the market with renewed intensity. "And I think our ' witnesses' might be more involved than they're letting on." Raj's expression shifted from doubt to consideration. "You think it's related to the market's, uh, 'specialties'?" Quinn nodded, her gaze halting on the untouched stall with its Shade-crafted goods, including a small, brass compass with a verdigris patina – a Veil Compass, rumored to point towards supernatural rifts or portals. "I think we're looking at something that goes beyond a simple homicide. Get forensics to process the body and the area, but I want this kept quiet for now. No leaks to the press." As Raj nodded and began to relay her orders into his radio, Quinn approached the stall, her hand reaching for the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a habitual gesture when her mind was racing. The vendor, in their haste, had left behind more than just their wares; they'd left a potential lead. She picked up the Veil Compass, the cool brass a comforting weight in her palm. The needle quivered, then stabilized, pointing towards the body. "A hidden message, perhaps?" Quinn mused aloud, her sharp jaw working in thought. This wasn't just a murder scene; it was a doorway to something deeper, something that could potentially explain the unexplained circumstances of her partner's death three years ago. "Raj, I want Eva Kowalski here. Her... expertise might come in handy." Raj's voice was laced with a question he didn't ask aloud, but Quinn's focus was already on the path unfolding before her, guided by the subtle, insistent needle of the Veil Compass.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn mused aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.133
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount758
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount758
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"racing"
count2
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"potential"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stark"
2"echoing"
3"scanning"
4"eyebrow"
5"racing"
6"etched"
7"intensity"
8"potential"
9"comforting"
10"weight"
11"quivered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences37
matches(empty)
65.64% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences37
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences47
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords760
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.35% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount575
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn11
Tube1
Veil5
Market2
Shade-crafted2
Raj8
Compass3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raj"
3"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0.543
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount760
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean47.5
std27.1
cv0.57
sampleLengths
0108
190
240
310
457
527
646
750
820
917
1048
1116
1268
1378
1453
1532
76.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences37
matches
0"got called"
1"been left"
2"was laced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs85
matches
0"was racing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences47
ratio0.064
matches
0"Quinn nodded, her gaze halting on the untouched stall with its Shade-crafted goods, including a small, brass compass with a verdigris patina – a Veil Compass, rumored to point towards supernatural rifts or portals."
1"The vendor, in their haste, had left behind more than just their wares; they'd left a potential lead."
2"This wasn't just a murder scene; it was a doorway to something deeper, something that could potentially explain the unexplained circumstances of her partner's death three years ago."
98.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount510
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.041176470588235294
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.013725490196078431
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences47
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences47
mean16.17
std9.19
cv0.568
sampleLengths
019
117
219
322
431
511
615
717
824
99
1014
1112
1221
137
146
154
164
1734
1819
1917
203
217
2214
2313
2416
253
2619
2711
2820
2915
305
319
328
3334
3414
357
369
3734
3834
3936
4018
4115
429
4313
4428
4512
4632
86.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5319148936170213
totalSentences47
uniqueOpeners25
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences37
matches
0"Only one stall seemed out"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount2
totalSentences37
matches
0"she said, her voice low,"
1"She picked up the Veil"
ratio0.054
81.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences37
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended into"
1"The air clung to her"
2"A familiar tang of crime"
3"The Veil Market, an underground"
4"A bone token, required for"
5"Quinn's gaze lingered, her sharp"
6"a voice said, echoing off"
7"DS Raj, a newer addition"
8"Quinn's response was a raised"
9"Raj consulted his notebook."
10"Raj's tone implied his skepticism"
11"Quinn's attention shifted to the"
12"Something didn't align."
13"Stalls were too neatly arranged,"
14"The air, while thick with"
15"A single glance at the"
16"The injury was too clean,"
17"she said, her voice low,"
18"Raj crouched beside her, confusion"
19"Quinn stood, her eyes now"
ratio0.757
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Only one stall seemed out of place, its Shade-crafted goods still on display, as if the vendor had simply stepped away for a moment."
1"Quinn nodded, her gaze halting on the untouched stall with its Shade-crafted goods, including a small, brass compass with a verdigris patina – a Veil Compass, r…"
2"As Raj nodded and began to relay her orders into his radio, Quinn approached the stall, her hand reaching for the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a habitu…"
3"This wasn't just a murder scene; it was a doorway to something deeper, something that could potentially explain the unexplained circumstances of her partner's d…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice low, inviting him to share her observation"
1"Quinn mused aloud, her sharp jaw working in thought"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.7851%