| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn mused aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 758 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 758 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "eyebrow" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "potential" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "quivered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.64% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 37 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 760 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.35% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 575 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.91 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 5 | | Market | 2 | | Shade-crafted | 2 | | Raj | 8 | | Compass | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raj" | | 3 | "Compass" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.543 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 760 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 47.5 | | std | 27.1 | | cv | 0.57 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 108 | | 1 | 90 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 78 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 32 |
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| 76.81% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "got called" | | 1 | "been left" | | 2 | "was laced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 85 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 47 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn nodded, her gaze halting on the untouched stall with its Shade-crafted goods, including a small, brass compass with a verdigris patina – a Veil Compass, rumored to point towards supernatural rifts or portals." | | 1 | "The vendor, in their haste, had left behind more than just their wares; they'd left a potential lead." | | 2 | "This wasn't just a murder scene; it was a doorway to something deeper, something that could potentially explain the unexplained circumstances of her partner's death three years ago." |
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| 98.97% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 510 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.041176470588235294 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013725490196078431 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 47 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 47 | | mean | 16.17 | | std | 9.19 | | cv | 0.568 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 32 |
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| 86.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5319148936170213 | | totalSentences | 47 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "Only one stall seemed out" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice low," | | 1 | "She picked up the Veil" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 81.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended into" | | 1 | "The air clung to her" | | 2 | "A familiar tang of crime" | | 3 | "The Veil Market, an underground" | | 4 | "A bone token, required for" | | 5 | "Quinn's gaze lingered, her sharp" | | 6 | "a voice said, echoing off" | | 7 | "DS Raj, a newer addition" | | 8 | "Quinn's response was a raised" | | 9 | "Raj consulted his notebook." | | 10 | "Raj's tone implied his skepticism" | | 11 | "Quinn's attention shifted to the" | | 12 | "Something didn't align." | | 13 | "Stalls were too neatly arranged," | | 14 | "The air, while thick with" | | 15 | "A single glance at the" | | 16 | "The injury was too clean," | | 17 | "she said, her voice low," | | 18 | "Raj crouched beside her, confusion" | | 19 | "Quinn stood, her eyes now" |
| | ratio | 0.757 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 18.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Only one stall seemed out of place, its Shade-crafted goods still on display, as if the vendor had simply stepped away for a moment." | | 1 | "Quinn nodded, her gaze halting on the untouched stall with its Shade-crafted goods, including a small, brass compass with a verdigris patina – a Veil Compass, r…" | | 2 | "As Raj nodded and began to relay her orders into his radio, Quinn approached the stall, her hand reaching for the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a habitu…" | | 3 | "This wasn't just a murder scene; it was a doorway to something deeper, something that could potentially explain the unexplained circumstances of her partner's d…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice low, inviting him to share her observation" | | 1 | "Quinn mused aloud, her sharp jaw working in thought" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.133 | | leniency | 0.267 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |