| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she shouted again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 96.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1268 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1268 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "navigating" | | 7 | "resolve" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "race" | | 10 | "anticipation" | | 11 | "cascading" | | 12 | "reminder" | | 13 | "mechanical" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "unspoken" | | 16 | "palpable" | | 17 | "tension" | | 18 | "pulsed" | | 19 | "etched" | | 20 | "flickered" | | 21 | "amidst" | | 22 | "electric" | | 23 | "racing" | | 24 | "unravel" | | 25 | "chaotic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 89.79% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "felt the sting" | | 1 | "was scared" | | 2 | "g in determination" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1258 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1158 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 8 | | Morris | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 5 | | Tomás | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Market" | | 4 | "Tomás" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a ghost town, the only sounds" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.795 | | wordCount | 1258 | | matches | | 0 | "not just of arrest but of something worse" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.16% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 46.59 | | std | 16.47 | | cv | 0.354 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 61 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 58 |
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| 95.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "was tied" | | 1 | "were steeped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.156 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn’s heart surged—she couldn’t let him slip away again." | | 1 | "She had been on the force long enough to recognize the signs—this man was scared, not just of arrest but of something worse." | | 2 | "She spotted the suspect once more, his silhouette slipping beneath an iron grate—a manhole opening that led deep into the underground." | | 3 | "She couldn’t shake the memory of their final case, the odd occurrences that surrounded it—the whispers of the supernatural that still echoed through her thoughts." | | 4 | "From the dripping gutter alongside her, a flash of movement caught her eye; a rat scurried past, navigating the city’s underbelly with ease." | | 5 | "She felt a frisson of understanding—this chase was about to plunge deeper than she intended." | | 6 | "The further she traveled, the more the atmosphere shifted; it hummed with unspoken power, laced with the palpable tension of secrecy." | | 7 | "She couldn’t retreat now—not when she was this close." | | 8 | "Tables were laden with wares that sparkled in the dim light—glass vials filled with iridescent liquids, curiosities whose prices were steeped in danger, and a half-dozen pairs of eyes that regarded her with a mix of curiosity and caution." | | 9 | "At the far end, she spotted him—the man she had been chasing." | | 10 | "The realization settled heavily—here, surrounded by the supernatural, she was both hunter and hunted." | | 11 | "As the rain drummed relentlessly above them, the beating heart of the Market promised secrets that could expose them both—if only she dared to push deeper into the unknown." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1171 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03159692570452605 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012809564474807857 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 16.34 | | std | 6.69 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 39 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 63.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.42857142857142855 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 62.25% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 1 | "He had answers, pieces of" | | 2 | "she called, her voice breaking" | | 3 | "Her breath came in sharp" | | 4 | "She had been on the" | | 5 | "It spurred her on." | | 6 | "She spotted the suspect once" | | 7 | "She had ventured into unknown" | | 8 | "She couldn’t shake the memory" | | 9 | "She felt a frisson of" | | 10 | "she shouted, but the sound" | | 11 | "She pressed on, her senses" | | 12 | "She hated mysteries, especially the" | | 13 | "She couldn’t retreat now—not when" | | 14 | "She approached a heavy steel" | | 15 | "She stepped in, aware that" | | 16 | "He stood among an odd" | | 17 | "She could see his face" | | 18 | "she called, startling the crowd," | | 19 | "She pushed through the crowd," |
| | ratio | 0.394 | |
| 65.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Raindrops pelted the pavement with" | | 1 | "The world around her faded" | | 2 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 3 | "The man she pursued darted" | | 4 | "Quinn’s heart surged—she couldn’t let" | | 5 | "He had answers, pieces of" | | 6 | "she called, her voice breaking" | | 7 | "Her breath came in sharp" | | 8 | "She had been on the" | | 9 | "It spurred her on." | | 10 | "The streetlights glimmered off the" | | 11 | "The city was alive, but" | | 12 | "She spotted the suspect once" | | 13 | "Quinn hesitated, the instinct to" | | 14 | "She had ventured into unknown" | | 15 | "She couldn’t shake the memory" | | 16 | "This man, this grim figure" | | 17 | "She felt a frisson of" | | 18 | "The grasp of damp air" | | 19 | "The way the darkness swallowed" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "He had answers, pieces of a puzzle that had haunted her since that fateful day three years ago when she lost her partner, DS Morris, to something she still coul…" | | 1 | "Her breath came in sharp bursts, a rhythm that matched her pounding heart." | | 2 | "The streetlights glimmered off the slick surfaces, casting shimmering reflections that danced with her footsteps." | | 3 | "She spotted the suspect once more, his silhouette slipping beneath an iron grate—a manhole opening that led deep into the underground." | | 4 | "She couldn’t shake the memory of their final case, the odd occurrences that surrounded it—the whispers of the supernatural that still echoed through her thought…" | | 5 | "She approached a heavy steel door, a rusted barrier that separated her from the illicit dealings of this hidden underbelly." | | 6 | "Tables were laden with wares that sparkled in the dim light—glass vials filled with iridescent liquids, curiosities whose prices were steeped in danger, and a h…" | | 7 | "He stood among an odd assembly of traders, their voices rising and falling like a tide, speaking in hurried whispers." | | 8 | "As the rain drummed relentlessly above them, the beating heart of the Market promised secrets that could expose them both—if only she dared to push deeper into …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice breaking through the downpour, commanding yet strained" | | 1 | "she shouted again, urgency lacing her voice" | | 2 | "she demanded, frustration seeping into her tone" | | 3 | "he warned, hesitant," | | 4 | "he said, urgency sharpening his words" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "she shouted again (shout)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "he warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |