Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPBHRH9MBM85EGD5Q2JYZG

Run Details

Duration:
28.6s
Cost:
$0.001187

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shimmered like rippling water as Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the entrance to the Fae Grove. Each stone felt alive, humming quietly beneath her fingertips. Hesitation flickered in her mind, but curiosity, her ever-loyal companion, prodded her forward. Behind her, Nyx glided into view, their form shifting in and out of solidity, a whisper of shadow among the golden beams of sunlight that broke through the dense canopy. Isolde brought up the rear, their ethereal presence leaving a strange silence in the air, one that felt almost reverent. As they walked deeper into the Grove, the world transformed. The everyday realities of Richmond Park faded behind them, leaving only wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors, vibrant hues of violet and emerald that shimmered as if painted with dew. Aurora knelt to examine a delicate petal, feeling the pulse of life thrumming beneath its surface. The flowers almost seemed to vibrate with a soft, melodic hum that resonated in her chest. “Are they alive?” she murmured, glancing back at Isolde. “They are memories of laughter and love,” Isolde replied in their cryptic way, their lavender eyes glinting like distant stars. “Here, time dances upon the breezes that shake the leaves.” Nyx let out a whisper, “Time? What is time, if not a chain to human hearts?” Their voice, though soft, wrapped around Aurora like a cool mist, pulling her thoughts deeper into the grove’s magic. Aurora stood, brushing dirt from her knees, half captivated, half unsettled by Nyx's enigmatic nature. Every instinct warned her about the sheer strangeness of this place, where time seemed chartered by its own peculiar rules. She glanced at the shadows flitting between the trees, wondering if they played tricks or revealed further wonders. An archway of twisted branches loomed ahead, adorned with sparkling orbs that hung like oversized, otherworldly fruits. As they approached, Aurora reached up, hesitating just before brushing her fingers against one of the glittering spheres. Its surface felt warm, alive, and sent a trail of sparks racing up her arm. With a gasp, she pulled back, startled by the surge of energy that had flooded through her. Nyx leaned closer, intrigued, their form flickering in the shifting light. “Do you feel that? It is an invitation to know, to share the essence of this forgotten realm. But every gift has its cost.” “What kind of cost?” Aurora asked, a frown crossing her brow. The wonder of discovery had been tainted by an inkling of foreboding. “Curiosity has consequences,” Nyx replied softly, as a shadow danced in the corner of her vision. “But we shall walk forward.” As they passed through the archway, Aurora heard laughter—childlike and melodic, echoing faintly among the trees. She turned to Isolde, who listened intently, their expression inscrutable. “Is there someone else here?” she ventured, a shiver racing down her spine, igniting a thrill of unease. “Whispers of the past linger where dreams tread,” Isolde intoned, their words like a riddle woven into the fabric of the air. “Yet not all whispers are friendly.” Nyx extended a hand, a mist gathering at their fingertips. “Stay close,” they said. “We tread upon the fringes of essence and shadows.” They ventured deeper into the grove, the trees towering tall and twisted, boughs curling like the gnarled fingers of long-forgotten giants. In the distance, a waterfall cascaded over rocks that gleamed with an iridescent glow, the sound mingling with the laughter that echoed faintly, seeking to lure them closer. It formed a beckoning melody that made Aurora’s heart quicken, pulling her further along the path. As they neared the waterfall, the light shifted. Shadows swirled at the edges of the clearing, dancing in time with the gentle splashes of water. Each droplet sparkled in the air, suspended like crystallized sunbeams before falling to the pool below. Aurora could see that the water shimmered with tendrils of violet, twisting through its depths as if containing the very essence of the grove within its core. “What makes the water glow?” she whispered, eyes wide as she knelt at the water’s edge, feeling the cool mist brush against her skin. “The waters are drawn from the very essence of the Fae Realm,” Isolde explained. “They whisper of ancient secrets and carry tales that transcend ages.” Nyx peered into the water, their violet eyes shimmering brightly. “Yet its beauty masks danger. We must tread lightly, for it is fickle, this place born of dreams.” With a gesture, Isolde beckoned to a cluster of glowing blossoms nearby. They leaned closer, fingers hovering over the flowers, their expression shifting to one of penetrating focus. “What do you seek, Aurora? The path you traverse is one of choices.” “I just want… I don’t know,” Aurora admitted, a sense of vulnerability creeping in. “I want to understand this world, what I’m meant to do here.” A fleeting thought crossed her mind, a memory of the Heartstone Pendant resting against her chest, pulsing steadily. She lifted a hand, feeling its warmth, recognizing it was a bridge between her world and this one, granting her a hint of stability amid chaos. Was it a guiding light or an anchor? Perhaps a bit of both. Suddenly, the laughter sharpened, morphing into something jarring and dissonant. Aurora froze, her heart pounding as the shadows grew more tangible, curling and weaving around her, the trees warped into grotesque shapes as they flickered in and out of focus. Nyx shifted, growing more substantial. “Hold your ground! Shadows stir,” they warned, their voice edged with a fierceness that contrasted their usual softness. “These are the restless spirits of the Grove; they covet those who stumble into their realm.” Before Aurora could respond, the shadows coalesced into human figures, their faces pale and wraithlike, mouths stretching into wide, toothy grins. The shimmering laughter took on an eerie quality, a mocking song echoing around the clearing. “Join us! Join us!” they sang, voices harmonizing into an unsettling melody that made Aurora’s skin crawl, yet her heart beat in rhythm, drawn inexplicably toward them. “No!” Nyx shouted, pulling Aurora back from the water’s edge. “They seek to ensnare you! You must resist!” Isolde, ageless and powerful, whispered words that neither Aurora nor Nyx could understand, weaving a protective barrier between them and the spectral figures. As if pushed back by an unseen force, the spirits writhed and recoiled, maintaining their grins but retreating. The air thickened with an electric tension as they flickered like the fading light at dusk. “Now!” Isolde instructed, energy thrumming through the grove as roots snaked into the ground, marking a line that kept the spirits at bay. “We must not linger. This place can entice, but it can also consume.” Together, they moved swiftly back from the water, every step a tightrope dance between wonder and terror. Aurora glanced back as they fled, a pang of longing clenching her heart. “But what if I want to come back?” she whispered, the desire mixing with uncertainty. “Then come prepared,” Nyx answered, their silhouette wavering. “And remember, sometimes, understanding lies beyond the boundaries you seek to cross.” As they left the grove, the thrumming laughter faded into the background, replaced by the rustling leaves above and the distant calls of birds from the mortal world. The ancient stones loomed before them now, anchoring a delicate balance between realms, a promise of both beauty and danger lurking on the threshold. In the warmth of the fading sunlight, Aurora allowed herself one last glance over her shoulder, a yearning mingling with caution. In that moment of bidding farewell to the grove, she felt both the weight of revelation and an inkling of purpose kindling within her, half afraid of what awaited on the other side but unable to ignore the pull of the unknown.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
61.9048% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied in their cryptic way, their lavender eyes glinting like distant stars [like]"
1"Nyx let out a whisper, Their voice, though soft, wrapped around Aurora like a cool mist, pulling her thoughts deeper into the grove’s magic. [around]"
2"Nyx replied softly, as a shadow danced in the corner of her vision [softly]"
61.6858% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"ethereal"
count1
2
word"enigmatic"
count1
3
word"pang"
count1
4
word"resonated"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count3
6
word"shimmered"
count3
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"glided"
count1
9
word"wavering"
count1
10
word"foreboding"
count1
11
word"spectral"
count1
12
word"otherworldly"
count1
13
word"loomed"
count2
14
word"crystallized"
count1
15
word"unsettled"
count1
16
word"yearning"
count1
17
word"clenching"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
19
word"dance"
count1
20
word"dances"
count1
21
word"dancing"
count1
22
word"echoed"
count1
23
word"echoing"
count2
highlights
0"tangible"
1"ethereal"
2"enigmatic"
3"pang"
4"resonated"
5"flickered"
6"shimmered"
7"glinting"
8"glided"
9"wavering"
10"foreboding"
11"spectral"
12"otherworldly"
13"loomed"
14"crystallized"
15"unsettled"
16"yearning"
17"clenching"
18"weight"
19"dance"
20"dances"
21"dancing"
22"echoed"
23"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"feel that? It"
1"see that the"
93.5726% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean40.69
std19.43
cv0.478
sampleLengths
095
181
230
335
453
567
635
723
821
944
1028
1123
1265
1368
1424
1525
1628
1741
1826
1957
2040
2139
2236
2327
2418
2557
2636
2717
2828
2920
3052
3163
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"been tainted"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1060
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.0330188679245283
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011320754716981131
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean16.48
std7.31
cv0.443
sampleLengths
023
19
213
330
420
510
630
716
816
99
1020
1110
1235
1315
1420
1518
1617
1718
1815
1917
2011
2124
2211
2312
2416
255
2616
2710
2818
2922
306
3110
324
339
3421
3528
3616
378
3817
3916
4027
4124
4214
4311
4410
4518
4612
4716
4813
4914
86.0759% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5316455696202531
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners42
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde replied in their cryptic way, their lavender eyes glinting like distant stars (reply glint like)"
2"Nyx let out a whisper, Their voice, though soft, wrapped around Aurora like a cool mist, pulling her thoughts deeper into the grove’s magic. (let out wrap around like pull)"
3"Nyx replied softly, as a shadow danced in the corner of her vision (reply softly, dance)"
4"Isolde intoned, their words like a riddle woven into the fabric of the air (intoned, like weave)"
5"whispered (whisper)"
6"Isolde explained (explain)"
7"Aurora admitted, a sense of vulnerability creeping in (admit, creep in)"
8"they warned, their voice edged with a fierceness that contrasted their usual softness (warn, edge contrast)"
9"shouted (shout)"
10"whispered (whisper)"
11"Nyx answered, their silhouette wavering (answer, waver)"
82.5435%