"Isolde replied in their cryptic way, their lavender eyes glinting like distant stars [like]"
1
"Nyx let out a whisper, Their voice, though soft, wrapped around Aurora like a cool mist, pulling her thoughts deeper into the grove’s magic. [around]"
2
"Nyx replied softly, as a shadow danced in the corner of her vision [softly]"
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1060
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.0330188679245283
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.011320754716981131
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
79
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
79
mean
16.48
std
7.31
cv
0.443
sampleLengths
0
23
1
9
2
13
3
30
4
20
5
10
6
30
7
16
8
16
9
9
10
20
11
10
12
35
13
15
14
20
15
18
16
17
17
18
18
15
19
17
20
11
21
24
22
11
23
12
24
16
25
5
26
16
27
10
28
18
29
22
30
6
31
10
32
4
33
9
34
21
35
28
36
16
37
8
38
17
39
16
40
27
41
24
42
14
43
11
44
10
45
18
46
12
47
16
48
13
49
14
86.0759%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.5316455696202531
totalSentences
79
uniqueOpeners
42
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
14
fancyCount
12
fancyTags
0
"murmured (murmur)"
1
"Isolde replied in their cryptic way, their lavender eyes glinting like distant stars (reply glint like)"
2
"Nyx let out a whisper, Their voice, though soft, wrapped around Aurora like a cool mist, pulling her thoughts deeper into the grove’s magic. (let out wrap around like pull)"
3
"Nyx replied softly, as a shadow danced in the corner of her vision (reply softly, dance)"
4
"Isolde intoned, their words like a riddle woven into the fabric of the air (intoned, like weave)"
5
"whispered (whisper)"
6
"Isolde explained (explain)"
7
"Aurora admitted, a sense of vulnerability creeping in (admit, creep in)"
8
"they warned, their voice edged with a fierceness that contrasted their usual softness (warn, edge contrast)"
9
"shouted (shout)"
10
"whispered (whisper)"
11
"Nyx answered, their silhouette wavering (answer, waver)"