| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.56 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 58.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "intensely" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "structure" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "loomed" | | 16 | "churned" | | 17 | "intensity" | | 18 | "determined" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1322 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.41% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1201 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 2 | | Rory | 22 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 10 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Isolde | 11 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.584 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 4.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 1 | "hum that seemed to emanate from the very ground" | | 2 | "as though struggling to maintain cohesion" | | 3 | "looked like woven vines" | | 4 | "felt like wading through syrup" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.756 | | wordCount | 1322 | | matches | | 0 | "not with water, but with liquid gold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.93% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 33.9 | | std | 14.92 | | cv | 0.44 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 47 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 22 |
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| 93.82% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "was filled" | | 1 | "was made" | | 2 | "were twisted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | |
| 4.16% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick with scent - roasting meats, ripe fruit, and something sweet that teased her memory but remained just out of reach." | | 1 | "What had been a path through a dense orchard opened suddenly into a meadow where flowers bloomed in impossible colors - shades that shouldn't exist shifting and shimmering in the amber light." | | 2 | "Isolde began singing softly - a melody that countered the siren song of the feast." | | 3 | "Thousands of hooks dangled, each holding a piece of someone - a strand of hair here, a fragment of clothing there." | | 4 | "The chamber's exit loomed ahead - a massive door made of what looked like woven vines." |
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| 88.86% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1199 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.045871559633027525 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01834862385321101 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 12.83 | | std | 5.51 | | cv | 0.43 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 73.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4563106796116505 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 75.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Even Nyx's shadowy presence felt" | | 1 | "Finally, they reached the other" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Her small crescent-shaped scar itched," | | 1 | "Their shadowy form rippled, shifting" | | 2 | "Her lavender eyes scanned their" | | 3 | "they explained, their violet gaze" | | 4 | "She had insisted on bringing" | | 5 | "They moved deeper, the landscape" | | 6 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 7 | "It pulsed again, stronger this" | | 8 | "They came upon a stream" | | 9 | "It moved sluggishly, thick as" | | 10 | "They followed the stream's winding" | | 11 | "Their shadowy form flickered, as" | | 12 | "She felt saliva flood her" | | 13 | "They pressed on, the landscape" | | 14 | "Its leaves shimmered like silver" | | 15 | "She followed its guidance, Isolde" | | 16 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 17 | "Their faces were twisted in" |
| | ratio | 0.205 | |
| 56.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber light of Dymas" | | 1 | "Rory blinked, her bright blue" | | 2 | "The air was thick with" | | 3 | "Her small crescent-shaped scar itched," | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, their voice echoing" | | 5 | "Their shadowy form rippled, shifting" | | 6 | "Rory noted how their violet" | | 7 | "Isolde moved like a whisper" | | 8 | "Her lavender eyes scanned their" | | 9 | "The Heartstone pendant at Rory's" | | 10 | "The landscape stretched before them" | | 11 | "Trees with trunks of polished" | | 12 | "Vines heavy with grapes the" | | 13 | "The ground was spongy beneath" | | 14 | "Isolde murmured, her voice sounding" | | 15 | "Nyx's form solidified momentarily." | | 16 | "they explained, their violet gaze" | | 17 | "Rory felt the Fae-forged blade" | | 18 | "She had insisted on bringing" | | 19 | "Something about this place made" |
| | ratio | 0.807 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "As if in response to" | | 1 | "Now they walked through arches" | | 2 | "Before them rose a palace" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 67.10% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory blinked, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the strange, honeyed glow that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 1 | "Their shadowy form rippled, shifting between solid and incorporeal as if the very air of this place disturbed their essence." | | 2 | "Even Nyx's shadowy presence felt more substantial here, as if the realm itself forced them to maintain form." | | 3 | "What had been a path through a dense orchard opened suddenly into a meadow where flowers bloomed in impossible colors - shades that shouldn't exist shifting and…" | | 4 | "Nyx's violet eyes scanned their surroundings, their form constantly shifting and writhing as though the very air here troubled them." | | 5 | "Beneath them, the abyss churned with colors that danced and shifted, mesmerizing and terrifying in equal measure." | | 6 | "The gates swung open of their own accord, revealing a path lined with statues that wept liquid gold." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice echoing as though carried on the wind" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured, her voice sounding like chimes in the wind" | | 2 | "Nyx warned, their voice strained" | | 3 | "Isolde warned, her voice barely audible" | | 4 | "she whispered, her voice barely audible above the hum of the land" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "they explained (explain)" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 6 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 7 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 8 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 9 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.56 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.714 | |