| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 73.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1152 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "barely above a whisper" | | 5 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1152 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "trepidation" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "glistening" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "down her spine" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "enigmatic" | | 13 | "comforting" | | 14 | "glinting" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "anticipation" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "scanned" | | 19 | "pulse" | | 20 | "intricate" | | 21 | "otherworldly" | | 22 | "echoes" | | 23 | "scanning" | | 24 | "chill" | | 25 | "navigate" | | 26 | "sense of" | | 27 | "resolve" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "the weight of their words" | | 2 | "a spark of hope" |
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| 48.08% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 6 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "felt a shiver" | | 2 | "a flicker of unease" | | 3 | "g with anticipation" | | 4 | "felt a chill" | | 5 | "a spark of hope" |
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| 54.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1151 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.64% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 915 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 11 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.516 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to absorb the light around them, while Isolde glided forward, her silver hair trailing like a comet’s tail" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to echo from the shadows" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.869 | | wordCount | 1151 | | matches | | 0 | "not from fear, but from the sheer enchantment of the place" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 34.88 | | std | 17.95 | | cv | 0.515 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 64 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "A jolt of energy surged through her, and images flooded her mind—visions of a world beyond her own, of shadows and light, of choices yet to be made." | | 1 | "“It is a key to understanding the forces at play. But be wary; it will not reveal itself easily.”" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 916 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.028384279475982533 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015283842794759825 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 14.39 | | std | 6.1 | | cv | 0.424 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 70.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4375 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned to her companions," | | 1 | "She took a deep breath," | | 2 | "It felt alive, thrumming with" | | 3 | "She glanced at Nyx, their" | | 4 | "They had been a constant" | | 5 | "Their petals were deep crimson," | | 6 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 7 | "she asked, her voice steady" | | 8 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 9 | "She gasped, pulling her hand" | | 10 | "they murmured, their voice barely" | | 11 | "She could almost hear the" | | 12 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 13 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" |
| | ratio | 0.215 | |
| 29.23% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 1 | "The grove unfolded before her" | | 2 | "The wildflowers, vibrant and lush," | | 3 | "Rory whispered, her bright blue" | | 4 | "She turned to her companions," | | 5 | "The Shade’s silhouette flickered, a" | | 6 | "Isolde replied, her voice a" | | 7 | "Rory felt a shiver run" | | 8 | "The air was thick with" | | 9 | "She took a deep breath," | | 10 | "Trees twisted and turned in" | | 11 | "Rory reached out to touch" | | 12 | "It felt alive, thrumming with" | | 13 | "Nyx warned, their voice a" | | 14 | "Rory nodded, pulling her hand" | | 15 | "She glanced at Nyx, their" | | 16 | "They had been a constant" | | 17 | "Isolde exclaimed, her gaze fixed" | | 18 | "Rory followed her gaze, and" | | 19 | "Their petals were deep crimson," |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 76.92% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could respond, a" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a faint, iridescent glow as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart racing with a mix of trepidation and…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers, vibrant and lush, carpeted the ground in a riot of colors, their petals glistening with dew that sparkled like diamonds in the soft light filte…" | | 2 | "The Shade’s silhouette flickered, a living shadow that seemed to absorb the light around them, while Isolde glided forward, her silver hair trailing like a come…" | | 3 | "She took a deep breath, letting the aroma fill her lungs, grounding her in this moment." | | 4 | "Their petals were deep crimson, mirroring the color of the Heartstone pendant that hung around her neck, a gift from an unknown benefactor." | | 5 | "The flowers pulsed softly, as if in rhythm with her own heartbeat, and she felt an inexplicable pull toward them." | | 6 | "She glanced at Nyx, who seemed to be watching her intently, their shadowy form flickering with anticipation." | | 7 | "In the center stood a massive stone altar, covered in intricate carvings that glowed faintly, illuminating the space with a soft, otherworldly radiance." | | 8 | "She glanced at Nyx, who offered a reassuring nod, their shadowy form steady beside her." | | 9 | "But she also felt a spark of hope, a flicker of possibility that urged her forward." | | 10 | "With each step deeper into the grove, she knew they were on the brink of something extraordinary, a journey that would test their resolve and reshape their dest…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde replied, her voice a melodic whisper that danced through the air" | | 1 | "Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "Nyx replied, their tone thoughtful" | | 3 | "Rory stammered, her heart racing" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her expression serious" | | 5 | "they murmured, their voice barely audible" | | 6 | "Isolde explained, her voice reverent" | | 7 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" | | 8 | "Nyx replied, their tone somber" | | 9 | "Nyx explained, their voice low" | | 10 | "Isolde instructed, her voice firm" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Isolde exclaimed (exclaim)" | | 3 | "Rory stammered (stammer)" | | 4 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 7 | "Nyx explained (explain)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.515 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.471 | | effectiveRatio | 0.471 | |