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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPBNRWPWJXJRB0S2WCJV8V
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Model:
Llama 3.1 Nemotron 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
35.9s
Cost:
$0.002454
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended onto the dimly lit platform, her military precision guiding each step down the creaky stairs. The air clung to her like a damp shroud, heavy with the scent of mold and decay. This wasn't your average crime scene – an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, repurposed as the Veil Market, a black market for the supernatural. Harlow's eyes adjusted to the faint glow of lanterns, casting eerie shadows on the walls. Before her, a sea of stalls stood silent, their usually vibrant colors muted by the police tape and the somber atmosphere. Uniformed officers milled about, collecting evidence and securing the perimeter. Harlow's gaze homed in on the focal point: a stall in disarray, its wares scattered across the grimy floor. A small, brass compass with a patina of verdigris lay near the edge, partially hidden by a torn piece of
velvet
. The Veil Compass, an tool attuned to supernatural energy, a prized item in these circles. Her colleague, Detective Inspector Ryder, approached, his voice a deep rumble. "Harlow, glad you're here. We've got a peculiar one." He gestured towards the disheveled stall. "Owner's gone missing, and the goods... well, you'll see." As Harlow examined the scene, her sharp
jaw clenched
. Something didn't add up. "Walk me through it," she said, not tearing her gaze from the scattered items. Ryder nodded. "No signs of forced entry or exit. The only anomaly is this." He indicated a small, ornate box, its lid open, revealing a vacant interior. "Seems our missing vendor was in possession of a bone token, entry requirement for this market. No token, no body, just... this mess." Harlow crouched beside the stall, her worn leather
watch
peeking from under her sleeve cuff. "Our victim – or perhaps, our perpetrator? – was into some heavy dealings. Enchanted goods, banned substances... Who reported the incident?" "A researcher from the British Museum, Eva Kowalski," Ryder replied, consulting his notes. "She was here to purchase some rare texts. Found the stall like this around midnight, after the market's scheduled move." Harlow's
eyes narrowed
. The Veil Market moved locations every full moon, a fact that suggested meticulous planning. "I'd like to speak with Ms. Kowalski. Where is she now?" "Waiting in the interview room, upstairs," Ryder said, nodding towards the stairs. As Harlow rose, her gaze swept the area once more, lingering on the Veil Compass. Its presence here, near the disturbed stall, struck her as more than coincidental. She tucked the observation away, her mind already racing with connections. Upstairs, in the makeshift interview room, Eva Kowalski sat with her back straight, her curly red hair a vibrant splash against the drab surroundings. Round glasses perched on the end of her nose, and a worn leather satchel overflowed with books beside her chair. As Harlow entered, Eva's green eyes met hers, a fleeting nervousness betrayed by the habitual tuck of her hair behind her left ear. "Ms. Kowalski, thank you for waiting," Harlow began, her tone measured. "Can you describe what you saw when you discovered the stall?" Eva's account mirrored Ryder's, with one addition: "I saw a figure, in the corner of my eye, near the lanterns. Tall, wearing a long coat. I didn't think much of it at the time, assuming it was just another customer. But now, I wonder..." Harlow's interest piqued. "Did you notice which direction this figure went?" Eva hesitated, her freckled complexion deepening in concentration. "Towards the old ticket counters, I think. But, Detective, I must emphasize, this market... it's not what it seems. There are forces at play here, beyond our understanding." Harlow's grip on her pen tightened. The supernatural undertones of this case
were beginning
to surface,
echoing
the unexplained circumstances of her partner's death three years ago. A shiver coursed down her spine, but her expression remained set, her voice unruffled. "I appreciate your candor, Ms. Kowalski. Your insight may prove invaluable." As the interview drew to a close, Harlow requested Eva's contact information, intending to keep the researcher close, should further questions arise. With each step back down to the crime scene, Harlow's thoughts coalesced. The Veil Compass, the missing bone token, and now, a potential witness to a fleeing figure – all hinted at a more
intricate
plot. Upon re-examining the stall, Harlow's sharp eyes caught what others might have missed: a minuscule, almost imperceptible scratch on the floor's edge, near the Compass. It aligned with the lanterns where Eva spotted the mysterious figure. A trail, albeit faint, had emerged. "Ryder, I need this area re-examined, focusing on potential exit routes towards the ticket counters," Harlow instructed, her voice carrying across the market. "And get forensics to enhance the light in this footage." She handed him a small notebook page with a quick sketch of the scratch and its orientation. "This might be our first
tangible
lead." As the team sprang into action, Harlow stood back, her gaze sweeping the Veil Market once more. In the shadows, secrets lurked, waiting to be unearthed. She was ready to dig, to follow the needle of the Veil Compass, pointing her towards the nearest supernatural rift – or, in this case, the truth.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:20:44.208983+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:20:44 AM
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native_tokens_completion
1197
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
858
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
41.7249%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
858
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"tangible"
count
1
1
word
"velvet"
count
1
2
word
"intricate"
count
1
3
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
4
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"tangible"
1
"velvet"
2
"intricate"
3
"jaw clenched"
4
"echoing"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"jaw clenched"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
45
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
45
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
55
matches
(empty)
83.5283%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
20
mean
43.15
std
19.09
cv
0.442
sampleLengths
0
75
1
86
2
35
3
27
4
50
5
36
6
33
7
28
8
12
9
39
10
67
11
22
12
44
13
11
14
36
15
52
16
58
17
42
18
57
19
53
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
45
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
91
matches
0
"were beginning"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
604
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
14
adverbRatio
0.023178807947019868
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.006622516556291391
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
55
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
55
mean
15.69
std
7.82
cv
0.499
sampleLengths
0
19
1
17
2
24
3
15
4
21
5
10
6
19
7
21
8
15
9
11
10
15
11
9
12
9
13
4
14
14
15
2
16
25
17
23
18
15
19
21
20
13
21
20
22
3
23
14
24
11
25
12
26
15
27
13
28
11
29
24
30
20
31
23
32
11
33
11
34
44
35
3
36
8
37
8
38
28
39
6
40
21
41
14
42
11
43
22
44
12
45
24
46
25
47
11
48
6
49
23
96.9697%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.5818181818181818
totalSentences
55
uniqueOpeners
32
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"she said, not tearing her gaze from the scattered items (say, does not tear)"
1
"Ryder replied, consulting his notes (reply, consult)"
2
"Ryder said, nodding towards the stairs (say, nod)"
3
"Harlow began, her tone measured (begin, measure)"
4
"Harlow instructed, her voice carrying across the market (instruct, carry)"
87.5817%