| 91.6667% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said dryly, while sorting books into a precarious stack on the coffee table [dryly]" |
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| 86.2637% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 2184 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.5275% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 2184 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sanctuary" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "imposing" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "amidst" | | 5 | "echoes" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 33.92 | | std | 28.19 | | cv | 0.831 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 58 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 60 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 45 | | 46 | 68 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 57 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 291 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2013 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tight pending important multiples" |
| | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.026328862394436166 | | lyAdverbCount | 34 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01689021361152509 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 51 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 51 | | mean | 43.24 | | std | 85.96 | | cv | 1.988 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 90 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 303 | | 41 | 60 | | 42 | 95 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 112 | | 45 | 56 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 387 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 73 |
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| 89.3333% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.56 | | totalSentences | 50 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 50.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she said, her voice detached (say, detach)" | | 1 | "Lucien observed, his voice dripping with sarcasm (observe, drip)" | | 2 | "she said dryly, while sorting books into a precarious stack on the coffee table (say dryly, sort)" | | 3 | "inquired (inquire)" |
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