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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPBREQY59KH0BBF6JG734J
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Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
36.4s
Cost:
$0.000801
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The door to Eva's flat creaked open, revealing Aurora Carter standing on the threshold, her straight black hair a curtain framing her bright blue eyes. She hesitated, the hallway's dim light casting long shadows at her feet. The air inside the flat was thick with the scent of incense and curry, mingling in a peculiar, homey way. She could hear the distant hum of traffic and the faint meow of Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, somewhere in the cluttered living room. Aurora's hand faltered on the doorknob,
the weight of the moment
heavy on her shoulders. She had come to this flat many times before, but never under these circumstances. Her
heart pounded in her chest
, a drumbeat of uncertainty and resolve. She squared her shoulders and stepped inside, closing the door
softly
behind her. "Rory?" Eva's voice called from the kitchen, muffled by the stacks of books and scrolls.
"Is that you?"
"Yeah," Aurora replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. She kicked off her shoes and made her way through the labyrinth of papers and artifacts that cluttered the floor. The flat was a
testament
to Eva's obsession with the supernatural, every surface a
testament
to a lifetime of research and curiosity. Eva emerged from the kitchen, a steaming mug of tea in one hand and a handful of notes in the other. Her
eyes widened
in surprise when she saw Aurora's face. "What are you doing here?" "I need to talk to you," Aurora said, her voice low and urgent. "It's about Lucien." Eva's expression shifted, a mix of concern and curiosity. "What about Lucien?" Aurora took a deep breath, the words catching in her throat. "He showed up at the restaurant today. He said it was important, that he needed to see me." Eva's brow
furrowed
. "Why would he come to the restaurant? He usually avoids the human world as much as possible." "I don't know," Aurora admitted. "He was different, more on edge than usual. He told me we needed to meet in person, that it couldn't wait." Eva set her mug down on a pile of books, the
porcelain
clinking
softly
. "Did he say what it was about?" Aurora shook her head, her fingers tracing the scar on her left wrist unconsciously. "No, but he was insistent. He said it was something I needed to hear, something that could change everything." Eva's eyes softened, a
glint
of understanding in their depths. "You should go, then. Whatever it is, it must be important for him to risk coming here." Aurora's mouth twisted in a bitter smile. "I know, but I don't trust him. Not after everything that happened." Eva frowned, her expression a mix of sympathy and resolve. "I understand, but you can't let your past dictate your future. Lucien might be your only link to understanding what's happening." Aurora’s gaze drifted to the window, the city lights twinkling like distant stars. "I know. I just... I don't know if I can face him again." Eva stepped closer, her hand resting
gently
on Aurora's shoulder. "You're strong, Rory. You've faced worse. And if it helps, I'll be here for you, no matter what." Aurora nodded, the
weight
of her friend's support a balm to her frayed nerves. "Thank you, Eva." With a deep breath, she turned and made her way to the door, her mind a whirlwind of conflicting emotions. She slipped back into her shoes, her hand hovering over the doorknob. The night was cool and crisp, the air
tinged
with the promise of autumn. She stepped out into the hallway, the familiar sounds of the city a comforting backdrop as she descended the stairs and onto the street. The journey to the appointed meeting place felt like a foggy dream, each step fraught with uncertainty. Aurora’s heart thudded in her chest, a relentless drumbeat of
anticipation
and fear. She arrived at the small, secluded park Lucien had mentioned, the trees casting long, ghostly shadows on the ground. The park
was deserted
, the only sound the gentle rustle of leaves in the breeze. She found him standing by a bench, his tall,
imposing
figure dressed in a tailored charcoal suit. His slicked-back platinum blond hair glistened in the moonlight, and his eyes, heterochromatic and haunting, met hers with a piercing intensity. Lucien’s presence was a force, a whirlwind of charisma and danger, and Aurora felt a familiar stir of attraction mixed with a deep-seated wariness. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth and
slightly
accented. "Thank you for coming." Aurora’s jaw tightened, her resolve steeling. "What is this about, Lucien? Why did you come to the restaurant?" He took a step closer, the ground beneath his cane making a soft tap. "It’s about you, Aurora. About who you are, and what you’re meant to do." Aurora’s heart skipped a beat, her grip on the strap of her bag tightening. "I don’t understand. What are you talking about?" Lucien’s expression softened, a rare vulnerability in his eyes. "There are things you don’t know about yourself, things that could change everything. I’ve been watching you, protecting you, ever since you arrived in London. And I can’t do it anymore, not without telling you the truth." Aurora’s breath caught in her throat, a thousand questions swirling in her mind. "What truth?" Lucien reached into his coat, pulling out a small, leather-bound book. He handed it to her, his fingers brushing hers in a fleeting touch that sent a jolt of something unnameable through her. "This is a journal. It belongs to your mother, Jennifer. She wrote it during the time she was involved in a supernatural group. It contains everything you need to know about your lineage, about the power you possess." Aurora’s hands
trembled
as she took the book, the leather cool and worn beneath her fingers. She stared at the familiar script, her mother’s words a balm and a curse. "Why now? Why tell me this now?" Lucien’s gaze never
wavered
. "Because the time has come, Aurora. The dark
forces that your
mother fought are rising again, and you are the key to stopping them. You are Malphora, the chosen one, and you have a destiny to fulfill." Aurora’s world tilted, the ground beneath her feet unsure. "Malphora? What does that mean?" "It means you are chosen," Lucien said, his voice soft but firm. "You are the one who can tip the balance, who can bring light to the darkness. But you can’t do it alone. You need allies, and I’m offering you my help." Aurora’s mind raced, the
weight
of the revelation settling heavily on her shoulders. "Why should I trust you? After everything that happened between us, why should I believe you now?" Lucien’s expression darkened, the shadows playing across his face. "Because I care about you, Aurora. More than you know. And because I’m the only one who can help you understand what’s coming. I know I’ve made mistakes, but I’m asking for a chance to make things right." Aurora’s heart ached, a complex web of emotions tangling her thoughts. She looked down at the journal in her hands, the words of her mother a
testament
to a life she barely knew. "What do you want from me?" Lucien took another step closer, the distance between them shrinking. "I want you to trust me. To let me help you. Together, we can face whatever lies ahead." Aurora’s eyes met his, the intensity of his gaze both challenging and comforting. She took a deep breath, the
weight
of the decision heavy on her heart. "Alright. I’ll trust you, but you have to be honest with me. No more secrets, no more lies." Lucien’s face lit with a rare, genuine smile. "I promise." Their hands met in the middle, a tentative seal of their
newfound
alliance. The world around them
seemed to
still, the rustle of leaves and the distant hum of the city fading into the background. Aurora’s heart pounded, a mix of fear and excitement coursing through her veins. As she looked into Lucien’s eyes, she felt a sense of purpose she had never known before. The road ahead was uncertain, but for the first time, she felt ready to face it.
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2/17/2026, 2:20:47 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
77.7778%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"he said, his voice smooth and slightly accented [slightly]"
70.8455%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1372
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
2
highlights
0
"gently"
1
"slightly"
2
"softly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1372
totalAiIsms
16
found
0
word
"testament"
count
3
1
word
"tinged"
count
1
2
word
"glint"
count
1
3
word
"wavered"
count
1
4
word
"trembled"
count
1
5
word
"imposing"
count
1
6
word
"porcelain"
count
1
7
word
"newfound"
count
1
8
word
"anticipation"
count
1
9
word
"furrowed"
count
1
10
word
"weight"
count
4
highlights
0
"testament"
1
"tinged"
2
"glint"
3
"wavered"
4
"trembled"
5
"imposing"
6
"porcelain"
7
"newfound"
8
"anticipation"
9
"furrowed"
10
"weight"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
2
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"eyes widened"
2
"the weight of the moment"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
64
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
64
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
96
matches
0
"\"Is that you?\""
1
"forces that your"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
39
mean
35.1
std
19.22
cv
0.548
sampleLengths
0
80
1
54
2
18
3
52
4
36
5
16
6
12
7
29
8
20
9
26
10
21
11
33
12
27
13
19
14
31
15
26
16
28
17
17
18
70
19
64
20
62
21
13
22
18
23
28
24
22
25
46
26
15
27
71
28
37
29
41
30
14
31
43
32
30
33
47
34
39
35
28
36
45
37
10
38
81
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
64
matches
0
"was deserted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
116
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
881
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small, leather-bound book."
adverbCount
15
adverbRatio
0.0170261066969353
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.01021566401816118
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
96
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
96
mean
14.26
std
7.64
cv
0.536
sampleLengths
0
25
1
12
2
20
3
23
4
15
5
14
6
12
7
13
8
15
9
3
10
10
11
20
12
22
13
21
14
10
15
5
16
13
17
3
18
9
19
3
20
11
21
18
22
3
23
17
24
5
25
21
26
14
27
7
28
14
29
19
30
10
31
17
32
7
33
12
34
10
35
21
36
13
37
13
38
10
39
18
40
14
41
3
42
20
43
12
44
14
45
24
46
17
47
13
48
19
49
15
50.0000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.28125
totalSentences
96
uniqueOpeners
27
91.6667%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Aurora admitted (admit)"
1
"he said, his voice smooth and slightly accented (say, slightly accent)"
83.3896%