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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPBREQY59KH0BBF6JG734J
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
36.4s
Cost:
$0.000801
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
85.39%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
99.78%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
50.00%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
99.37%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
75.3957%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The door to Eva's flat
creaked open, revealing Aurora Carter standing on the threshold, her straight black hair a curtain framing her bright blue eyes.
She hesitated, the hallway's dim
light casting long shadows at her feet.
The air inside the flat
was thick with the scent of incense and curry, mingling in a peculiar, homey way.
She could hear the distant
hum of traffic and the faint meow of Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, somewhere in the cluttered living room.
Aurora's hand faltered on the
doorknob,
the weight of the moment
heavy on her shoulders.
She had come to this
flat many times before, but never under these circumstances.
Her heart pounded in her
chest, a drumbeat of uncertainty and
resolve
.
She squared her shoulders and
stepped inside, closing the door
softly
behind her. "Rory?"
Eva's voice called from the
kitchen, muffled by the stacks of books and scrolls. "Is that you?" "Yeah,"
Aurora replied, her voice steady
despite the turmoil within.
She kicked off her shoes
and made her way through the labyrinth of papers and artifacts that cluttered the floor.
The flat was a testament
to Eva's obsession with the supernatural, every surface a
testament
to a lifetime of research and curiosity. Eva emerged from the kitchen, a steaming mug of tea in one hand and a handful of notes in the other.
Her eyes widened in surprise
when she saw Aurora's face. "What are you doing here?" "I need to talk to you,"
Aurora said, her voice low
and urgent. "It's about Lucien."
Eva's expression shifted, a mix
of concern and curiosity. "What about Lucien?" Aurora took a deep breath, the words catching in her throat. "He showed up at the restaurant today. He said it was important, that he needed to see me." Eva's brow
furrowed
. "Why would he come to the restaurant? He usually avoids the human world as much as possible." "I don't know," Aurora admitted. "He was different, more on edge than usual. He told me we needed to meet in person, that it couldn't wait."
Eva set her mug down
on a pile of books, the
porcelain
clinking
softly
. "Did he say what it was about?"
Aurora shook her head, her
fingers
tracing
the scar on her left wrist unconsciously. "No, but he was insistent. He said it was something I needed to hear, something that could change everything." Eva's eyes softened, a
glint
of understanding in their
depths
. "You should go, then. Whatever it is, it must be important for him to risk coming here." Aurora's mouth twisted in a bitter smile. "I know, but I don't trust him. Not after everything that happened." Eva frowned, her expression a mix of sympathy and
resolve
. "I understand, but you can't let your past dictate your future. Lucien might be your only link to understanding what's happening." Aurora’s gaze drifted to the window, the city lights twinkling like distant stars. "I know. I just... I don't know if I can face him again." Eva stepped closer, her hand resting
gently
on Aurora's shoulder. "You're strong, Rory. You've faced worse. And if it helps, I'll be here for you, no matter what." Aurora nodded, the
weight
of her friend's support a balm to her frayed nerves. "Thank you, Eva." With a deep breath, she turned and made her way to the door, her mind a whirlwind of conflicting emotions.
She slipped back into her
shoes, her hand hovering over the doorknob. The night was cool and crisp, the air
tinged
with the promise of autumn.
She stepped out into the
hallway, the
familiar
sounds of the city a
comforting
backdrop as she descended the stairs and onto the street. The journey to the appointed meeting place felt like a foggy dream, each step fraught with uncertainty. Aurora’s heart thudded in her chest, a relentless drumbeat of
anticipation
and fear. She arrived at the small, secluded park Lucien had mentioned, the trees casting long, ghostly shadows on the ground. The park
was deserted
, the only sound the gentle rustle of leaves in the breeze.
She found him standing by
a bench, his tall,
imposing
figure dressed in a tailored charcoal suit.
His slicked-back platinum blond hair
glistened in the moonlight, and his eyes, heterochromatic and haunting, met hers with a piercing
intensity
. Lucien’s presence was a force, a whirlwind of charisma and danger, and Aurora felt a
familiar
stir of attraction mixed with a deep-seated wariness. "Rory,"
he said, his voice smooth
and
slightly
accented. "Thank you for coming." Aurora’s jaw tightened, her
resolve
steeling. "What is this about, Lucien? Why did you come to the restaurant?" He took a step closer, the ground beneath his cane making a soft tap. "It’s about you, Aurora. About who you are, and what you’re meant to do." Aurora’s heart
skipped a beat
, her grip on the strap of her bag tightening. "I don’t understand. What are you talking about?" Lucien’s expression softened, a rare vulnerability in his eyes. "There are things you don’t know about yourself, things that could change everything. I’ve been watching you, protecting you, ever since you arrived in London. And I can’t do it anymore, not without telling you the truth." Aurora’s breath caught in her throat, a thousand questions swirling in her mind. "What truth?" Lucien reached into his coat, pulling out a small, leather-bound book. He handed it to her, his fingers brushing hers in a
fleeting
touch that sent a jolt of something unnameable through her. "This is a journal. It belongs to your mother, Jennifer. She wrote it during the time she was involved in a supernatural group. It contains everything you need to know about your lineage, about the power you possess." Aurora’s hands
trembled
as she took the book, the leather cool and worn beneath her fingers.
She stared at the familiar
script, her mother’s words a balm and a curse. "Why now? Why tell me this now?" Lucien’s gaze never
wavered
. "Because the time has come, Aurora. The dark forces that your mother fought are rising again, and you are the key to stopping them. You are Malphora, the chosen one, and you have a destiny to fulfill." Aurora’s world tilted, the ground beneath her feet unsure. "Malphora? What does that mean?" "It means you are chosen,"
Lucien said, his voice soft but firm
. "You are the one who can tip the balance, who can bring light to the darkness. But you can’t do it alone. You need allies, and I’m offering you my help." Aurora’s mind
raced
, the
weight
of the revelation settling heavily on her shoulders. "Why should I trust you? After everything that happened between us, why should I believe you now?" Lucien’s expression darkened, the shadows playing across his face. "Because I care about you, Aurora. More than you know. And because I’m the only one who can help you understand what’s coming. I know I’ve made mistakes, but I’m asking for a chance to make things right." Aurora’s heart ached, a
complex
web of emotions tangling her thoughts.
She looked down at the
journal in her hands, the words of her mother a
testament
to a life she barely knew. "What do you want from me?" Lucien took another step closer, the distance between them shrinking. "I want you to trust me. To let me help you. Together, we can face whatever lies ahead." Aurora’s eyes met his, the
intensity
of his gaze both challenging and
comforting
. She took a deep breath, the
weight
of the decision heavy on her heart. "Alright. I’ll trust you, but you have to be honest with me. No more secrets, no more lies." Lucien’s face lit with a rare, genuine smile. "I promise."
Their hands met in the
middle, a tentative seal of their
newfound
alliance. The world around them
seemed to
still, the rustle of leaves and the distant hum of the city fading into the background. Aurora’s heart pounded, a mix of fear and excitement coursing through her veins. As she looked into Lucien’s eyes, she felt a
sense of
purpose she had never known before. The road ahead was uncertain, but for the first time, she felt ready to face it.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:20:47.474656+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:20:47 AM
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182717
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138
moderation_latency
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generation_time
36300
tokens_prompt
830
tokens_completion
2054
native_tokens_prompt
776
native_tokens_completion
1814
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
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false
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"stop"
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provider_responses
0
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false
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71
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"8b6b26e9-621a-4b31-b55a-c9aaa7482ede"
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"DeepInfra"
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"qwen/qwen-2.5-72b-instruct"
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.158
leniency
0.316
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
85.39%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1369
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
2
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"gently"
2
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1369
totalAiIsms
33
found
0
word
"weight"
count
4
1
word
"resolve"
count
3
2
word
"testament"
count
3
3
word
"furrowed"
count
1
4
word
"porcelain"
count
1
5
word
"tracing"
count
1
6
word
"glint"
count
1
7
word
"depths"
count
1
8
word
"tinged"
count
1
9
word
"familiar"
count
3
10
word
"comforting"
count
2
11
word
"anticipation"
count
1
12
word
"imposing"
count
1
13
word
"intensity"
count
2
14
word
"skipped a beat"
count
1
15
word
"fleeting"
count
1
16
word
"trembled"
count
1
17
word
"wavered"
count
1
18
word
"raced"
count
1
19
word
"complex"
count
1
20
word
"newfound"
count
1
21
word
"sense of"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"resolve"
2
"testament"
3
"furrowed"
4
"porcelain"
5
"tracing"
6
"glint"
7
"depths"
8
"tinged"
9
"familiar"
10
"comforting"
11
"anticipation"
12
"imposing"
13
"intensity"
14
"skipped a beat"
15
"fleeting"
16
"trembled"
17
"wavered"
18
"raced"
19
"complex"
20
"newfound"
21
"sense of"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
2
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"eyes widened"
2
"the weight of the moment"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
64
matches
0
"d in surprise"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
64
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
96
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
38
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1369
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
14
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
46
wordCount
878
uniqueNames
5
maxNameDensity
2.62
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva
11
Aurora
23
Carter
1
Ptolemy
1
Lucien
10
persons
0
"Eva"
1
"Aurora"
2
"Carter"
3
"Lucien"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.19
windowScore
0
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
61
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"felt like a foggy dream, each step frau"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1369
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
96
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
39
mean
35.1
std
19.22
cv
0.548
sampleLengths
0
80
1
54
2
18
3
52
4
36
5
16
6
12
7
29
8
20
9
26
10
21
11
33
12
27
13
19
14
31
15
26
16
28
17
17
18
70
19
64
20
62
21
13
22
18
23
28
24
22
25
46
26
15
27
71
28
37
29
41
30
14
31
43
32
30
33
47
34
39
35
28
36
45
37
10
38
81
99.78%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
64
matches
0
"was deserted"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
116
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
96
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
881
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small, leather-bound book."
adverbCount
15
adverbRatio
0.0170261066969353
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.01021566401816118
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
96
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
96
mean
14.26
std
7.64
cv
0.536
sampleLengths
0
25
1
12
2
20
3
23
4
15
5
14
6
12
7
13
8
15
9
3
10
10
11
20
12
22
13
21
14
10
15
5
16
13
17
3
18
9
19
3
20
11
21
18
22
3
23
17
24
5
25
21
26
14
27
7
28
14
29
19
30
10
31
17
32
7
33
12
34
10
35
21
36
13
37
13
38
10
39
18
40
14
41
3
42
20
43
12
44
14
45
24
46
17
47
13
48
19
49
15
50.00%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.28125
totalSentences
96
uniqueOpeners
27
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
63
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
99.37%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
19
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"She hesitated, the hallway's dim"
1
"She could hear the distant"
2
"She had come to this"
3
"Her heart pounded in her"
4
"She squared her shoulders and"
5
"She kicked off her shoes"
6
"Her eyes widened in surprise"
7
"She slipped back into her"
8
"She stepped out into the"
9
"She arrived at the small,"
10
"She found him standing by"
11
"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
12
"he said, his voice smooth"
13
"He took a step closer,"
14
"He handed it to her,"
15
"She stared at the familiar"
16
"She looked down at the"
17
"She took a deep breath,"
18
"Their hands met in the"
ratio
0.302
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
61
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"The door to Eva's flat"
1
"She hesitated, the hallway's dim"
2
"The air inside the flat"
3
"She could hear the distant"
4
"Aurora's hand faltered on the"
5
"She had come to this"
6
"Her heart pounded in her"
7
"She squared her shoulders and"
8
"Eva's voice called from the"
9
"Aurora replied, her voice steady"
10
"She kicked off her shoes"
11
"The flat was a testament"
12
"Eva emerged from the kitchen,"
13
"Her eyes widened in surprise"
14
"Aurora said, her voice low"
15
"Eva's expression shifted, a mix"
16
"Aurora took a deep breath,"
17
"Eva's brow furrowed."
18
"Eva set her mug down"
19
"Aurora shook her head, her"
ratio
0.968
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
63
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
49
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"She kicked off her shoes and made her way through the labyrinth of papers and artifacts that cluttered the floor."
1
"He handed it to her, his fingers brushing hers in a fleeting touch that sent a jolt of something unnameable through her."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
6
uselessAdditionCount
4
matches
0
"Aurora replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil within"
1
"Aurora said, her voice low and urgent"
2
"he said, his voice smooth and slightly accented"
3
"Lucien said, his voice soft but firm"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Aurora admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.158
leniency
0.316
rawRatio
0.167
effectiveRatio
0.053
75.3957%