| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "said a voice that was barely a whisper [barely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.733 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 90.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "enigmatic" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "beacon" | | 7 | "radiant" | | 8 | "dances" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "tinged" | | 13 | "velvet" | | 14 | "intrigue" | | 15 | "echo" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "traced" | | 18 | "surreal" | | 19 | "tapestry" | | 20 | "charm" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 76.92% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "a twinge of unease" | | 1 | "felt a twinge" | | 2 | "felt a thrill" |
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| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1073 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.53% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 940 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Nyx | 4 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Together | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Varga" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.755 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 5.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "violets that seemed to whisper secrets of their own" | | 1 | "seemed woven from the very threads that stitched the world with mystery" | | 2 | "felt like a benediction, shadowed in gr" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1073 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | |
| 40.71% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 51.1 | | std | 14.94 | | cv | 0.292 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 79 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 21 |
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| 98.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 57 | | ratio | 0.123 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove, with its ancient oak standing stones marking boundaries seen and unseen, felt alive under her fingertips—alien yet inviting, like the heartbeat of the earth." | | 1 | "The air shimmered on occasion, a pulse that Rory learned was the Veil itself—visible here, where dimensions brushed closer together than anywhere else she had ever known." | | 2 | "The deeper they ventured, the more the grove's secrets unfolded—a babble of a brook that sang in forgotten tongues, droplets of water pirouetting mid-air before falling anew." | | 3 | "Rory watched, awash in the awe of it—unknowable, beautiful, a history wrapped in a moment." | | 4 | "Images of Cardiff flashed—childhood days, the sea crashing against rocky shores, her parents’ laughter carried on the wind." | | 5 | "Rory knew, poised at this crossroads of power and choice, that her journey had only started to unfold—a tapestry before her, woven by fate and her own making." | | 6 | "The grove receded behind them with the whisper of leaves, a promise of return lingering in the air—a promise that Rory, carried by dreams and reality intertwined, knew she would pursue." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 733 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.02592087312414734 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008185538881309686 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 57 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 59.22% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 57 | | mean | 18.82 | | std | 5.61 | | cv | 0.298 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 84.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5087719298245614 | | totalSentences | 57 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 81.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes, accustomed" | | 1 | "It was a gift given" | | 2 | "She bent to brush her" | | 3 | "Her heart thrummed alongside the" | | 4 | "Her silver hair flowed around" | | 5 | "She left no footprints as" | | 6 | "They moved as a trio," | | 7 | "She felt a thrill at" | | 8 | "they observed, their voice tinged" | | 9 | "they reminded, the touch of" | | 10 | "It bore carvings of runes" | | 11 | "Her eyes traced the lines" | | 12 | "She approached the altar with" | | 13 | "She clenched her hands, feeling" | | 14 | "It remained, a reminder of" | | 15 | "she murmured, following the interplay" | | 16 | "she said, gesturing towards the" | | 17 | "She was reminded that magic" |
| | ratio | 0.346 | |
| 65.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes, accustomed" | | 2 | "This was a place touched" | | 3 | "Nyx, a silhouette of shifting" | | 4 | "It was a gift given" | | 5 | "The grove, with its ancient" | | 6 | "Rory asked, gesturing at the" | | 7 | "She bent to brush her" | | 8 | "Her heart thrummed alongside the" | | 9 | "Isolde Varga emerged from the" | | 10 | "Her silver hair flowed around" | | 11 | "Rory felt the truth of" | | 12 | "The Seer, with her ageless" | | 13 | "She left no footprints as" | | 14 | "They moved as a trio," | | 15 | "The air shimmered on occasion," | | 16 | "She felt a thrill at" | | 17 | "Nyx paused at a sprawling" | | 18 | "they observed, their voice tinged" | | 19 | "Isolde mused, her voice carrying" |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 96.15% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Though their form was mostly" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, tugged her leather jacket tighter against the chill that pervaded even in the heart of summer, the Richmond Park ai…" | | 1 | "Nyx, a silhouette of shifting shadows, glided beside her, their eyes glowing violet in the dim light filtering through the dense canopy." | | 2 | "She bent to brush her fingers over a patch of violets that seemed to whisper secrets of their own." | | 3 | "Sound carried differently here, as if the echoes had a life of their own, crafting symphonies from their muted steps." | | 4 | "The deeper they ventured, the more the grove's secrets unfolded—a babble of a brook that sang in forgotten tongues, droplets of water pirouetting mid-air before…" | | 5 | "In a sun-dappled clearing stood an altar, ancient and worn, covered in creeping ivy and moss that gleamed under glints of sun." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "said a voice that was barely a whisper (say be)" | | 1 | "they observed (observe)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |