Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPBV2Q2RBA8WMEAAA7Y6XT

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Duration:
28.9s
Cost:
$0.001132

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came in sheets, drenching the cobblestones as Detective Harlow Quinn pursued the figure ahead of her. She could feel each pounding raindrop against her skin, slipping cold and intrusive beneath the collar of her jacket, but she hardly cared. Her heart thundered against her ribs, a relentless rhythm that matched her pounding footsteps. Each hurried breath she drew mingled with the scent of wet asphalt and the faint, metallic taste of adrenaline. Ahead, the suspect glanced back over his shoulder. Quinn caught a fleeting glimpse of a frantic face, illuminated for a moment by the flickering neon light of a nearby sign—a green beacon advertising The Raven's Nest. He ducked into an alley, the narrow space swallowed by shadows, and Quinn increased her speed. She had seen the way he moved through the crowd, weaving expertly as if he were playing a game of cat and mouse; now, he was the mouse, and she was the predator. The slick cobblestones gave way as she chased him deeper into the alley, her worn leather watch ticking loudly as she counted the seconds. She cursed under her breath, ordering her legs to move faster. The sound of rain drenched everything, but she caught a faint echo of footfalls, those hurried, desperate strides that urged her on. The alley twisted unexpectedly, and at the end, Quinn spotted him skidding to a halt, peering around—eyes wide and frantic. He had reached a dead end. In that moment, Quinn felt the surge of triumph. She slowed, putting her hand on the slick-brick wall to crawl up to a standing position. The suspect was cornered, and it wouldn’t take much to bring him down. “Stop!” she shouted, her voice cutting through the rain. It was a command, not a plea. The echo of her authority vibrated in the air as the man stumbled back against the wall, hand fumbling at his hip for something. Not trusting the man’s movements, Quinn stepped forward, gun drawn, the weapon glinting under the dim light that seeped from above. “Please, don’t shoot! I didn’t mean—” he panted, fear written across his face. “Not looking to put you down tonight,” she replied, keeping her voice steady but harsh. “But I will if you don’t cooperate.” Before he could respond, a low rumble thrummed under her feet, almost imperceptibly. It came from beneath the alley, an instinctive warning that pricked at the edges of her alarm. The suspect’s eyes flickered down, and Quinn felt the tension shift as panic engulfed him. With newfound resolve, he spun on his heel, a flash of desperation propelling him towards a seemingly solid expanse of brick—nothing there, nothing but a wall. But as Quinn moved, the ground beneath her trembled again, and she heard it, a whisper from the shadows, almost like the siren call of something deep and buried. It drew her attention just as it drew him. His moment of hesitation cost him, and he lunged forward to push against the wall, exposing a grim gap amid the bricks. Briars and the scent of wet earth emerged as he stepped into darkness. “Don’t!” Quinn shouted, adrenaline coursing through her veins as she thrust her gun forward more decisively. “Come back! You’re going nowhere until we—” But he was gone. The darkness swallowed him without a trace, and her instincts screamed at her not to follow. The last of the light behind her washed out, leaving her with only the fading sound of the rain above. She hesitated. The choice lay before her: she could retreat, cut her losses and report back, or follow him into the unknown. Her scarred past flitted through her mind like a ghost, a specter she couldn’t shake. The absence of DS Morris gnawed at her conscience. She had lost him, lost the answers they had both sought three years ago. And now, she felt the same pull, the same urgency that had driven her deeper into darkness that fateful night. Quinn tucked her gun away, steeling herself. She took a breath, then stepped through the gap into the eerie quiet that enveloped her. The narrow passage dropped steeply, each step sloshing water around her shins. The last echoes of the above world faded, leaving only the soft patter of droplets cascading from her dripping hair onto the stone floor. The air thickened with an otherworldly essence as she emerged into a secluded underground space. Flickering gaslight cast shifting shadows against the walls lined with colorful, glittering shards—these were walls of an abandoned Tube station, she realized, corrupted by time and secrecy. Quinn’s gaze flicked to an ornate sign hanging crookedly, proclaiming The Veil Market to those who understood. She inhaled sharply as she moved deeper into the damp atmosphere, the sound of murmurs enveloping her. A treacherous world bubbled beneath the surface of London, hidden behind a veil of normalcy she had spent years investigating. Treasures and terrors alike whispered in the shadows where revelry entwined with danger. A vendor in the corner caught her eye, a stout woman with gnarled fingers displaying vials of colorful liquids. “Care for a taste, love?” The offer dripped with sugary temptation, yet Quinn shook her head. The scent of sulfur tickled her nose, and she could almost see the ethereal traces of energy crackling just beyond sight. She resisted the urge to ask about her quarry—this was not a market for cops. Pausing to survey her surroundings, she felt the weight of unfriendly gazes lingering on her. There were figures in dark cloaks pooling like shadows, eyes glinting with suspicion, their lists of unspoken secrets hanging heavy in the air. She didn’t belong here, she knew, and still, she pressed forward amid the muted conversations and clinking of goods exchanged. Then she spotted him, a familiar face blending with the crowd—a young man with olive skin and a Saint Christopher medallion. Tomás Herrera. Desire pulsed in her gut, and she wove through the masses until she reached him, slipping an arm through his. “Tomás, I need your help.” A flicker of surprise crossed his face before he narrowed his eyes, glancing around. “You shouldn’t be here, Detective Quinn,” he warned, his voice low and urgent. “This place is dangerous.” “I’m after someone,” she said, determination coursing through her. “A suspect. He slipped through.” Tomás sighed, frustration flaring in his gaze. “You could blow everything. The Veil Market doesn’t take kindly to the police. What did you get yourself into this time?” “If I don’t figure this out, people will get hurt,” Quinn replied, gripping his arm more tightly. “I don’t know how much time I have. Just help me.” With a reluctant nod, he led her farther into the market, the sounds of haggling and laughter fading behind them until they entered a quieter section swathed in shadow. There was nothing left but their footsteps on the damp ground and the weight of secrets thickening the air around them. “Where could he have gone?” she whispered, scanning the alleyways that branched out like veins in this strange new territory. “We need to find him before he disappears.” Tomás frowned, his brow furrowing in concentration. “He might be looking for something specific. There are whispers about occult items being exchanged tonight. If he’s connected to that, we need to act fast.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “Then we find that connection.” They would have to breach this underworld together, for in the shadows lay threads that connected to her own darkness—waiting to be unraveled. This would be her first step into the unknown, navigating a world filled with dangers she had little understanding of, yet felt the irresistible pull to confront. With her mind set, she followed Tomás deeper into the heart of the Veil Market, knowing the chase had only just begun. Their world was now filled with secrets, and she would breach it all to find truth.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn replied, gripping his arm more tightly [more tightly]"
84.8943% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"tightly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count2
6
word"cascading"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"otherworldly"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"newfound"
count1
11
word"normalcy"
count1
12
word"furrowing"
count1
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"footsteps"
count2
15
word"echo"
count2
16
word"echoes"
count1
17
word"navigating"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"beacon"
2"flickered"
3"flicker"
4"flicked"
5"glinting"
6"cascading"
7"trembled"
8"otherworldly"
9"unspoken"
10"newfound"
11"normalcy"
12"furrowing"
13"weight"
14"footsteps"
15"echo"
16"echoes"
17"navigating"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"find that connection"
76.8157% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean48.74
std20.42
cv0.419
sampleLengths
074
185
257
364
461
513
622
771
873
923
1040
1180
1259
1359
1450
1571
1658
1748
1831
1914
2028
2128
2250
2328
2433
2558
2638
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"was cornered"
1"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs208
matches
0"were playing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1181
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03048264182895851
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.013547840812870448
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean15.86
std7.13
cv0.45
sampleLengths
018
123
214
319
48
528
616
733
824
911
1022
1120
126
139
1416
1513
169
177
1824
1921
2013
2115
227
2313
2417
2515
2626
2729
289
2922
3013
3116
327
334
3416
3520
362
3720
3815
399
4014
4120
427
4316
4412
4524
4615
4727
4817
4917
67.4699% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.43373493975903615
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners36
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"shouted (shout)"
1"panted (pant)"
2"she replied, keeping her voice steady but harsh (reply, keep)"
3"shouted (shout)"
4"he warned, his voice low and urgent (warn)"
5"she said, determination coursing through her (say, course)"
6"Quinn replied, gripping his arm more tightly (reply, grip)"
7"whispered (whisper)"
83.5792%