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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPC68G5KNGXFTVZEPQYYYZ
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
40.9s
Cost:
$0.000861
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.78%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
52.63%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
33.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
95.05%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
59.06%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
44.96%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
81.93%
Sentence length variance
(details)
42.38%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
35.09%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
97.89%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
49.47%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
32.35%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
71.8091%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The rain lashed against the
cobblestones of Soho, turning the night into a blur of shadows and reflections.
Detective Harlow Quinn's breath came
in short, sharp bursts as she darted through the narrow alleyways, her boots splashing through puddles.
The worn leather watch on
her left wrist
seemed to
tick louder with each passing second, a
stark
reminder
of the urgency of her pursuit. Ahead, a dim figure cut through the downpour, the suspect's silhouette shifting and blending with the wet surfaces.
Quinn had been hot on
his trail for hours, ever since the break-in at the Raven's Nest.
The bar's distinctive green neon
sign had
flickered
in her rearview mirror as she
raced
away, her mind
racing
with the implications of what she had uncovered.
The hidden room behind the
bookshelf, the
clandestine
meetings, and the scent of something far darker lurking beneath the surface.
It had all led her
to this chase, through the winding streets and into the heart of the city's underbelly.
Her sharp jaw tightened as
she turned a corner, her fingers tightening around the grip of her service pistol.
She knew the suspect was
dangerous, but she also
knew that he
was leading
her somewhere.
The alleys grew narrower, the
noise of the city gradually fading into a hollow
echo
of
footsteps
and the relentless patter of rain. Quinn's eyes, brown and focused,
scanned
her surroundings, her military precision training guiding her every move.
The suspect slipped into a
narrow opening between two old buildings, and for a moment, Quinn hesitated. But the rain-driven wind bit at her skin, and the memory of her lost partner, DS Morris, flashed through her mind.
She couldn't let him down
again. She plunged into the passage, the walls closing in around her, the air thick with the scent of mildew and damp stone. At the end of the alley, a set of stairs descended into the darkness.
The rain had thinned to
a drizzle, but the air grew colder, and a strange, musty odor filled her nostrils.
Quinn slowed her pace, her
senses on high alert.
The stairs were narrow and
steep, the dim light from above barely piercing the
gloom
.
She reached into her pocket
and pulled out her flashlight, the beam cutting through the dark with a steady,
unwavering
light.
The stairs led to a
low-ceilinged tunnel, the walls lined with old brick and covered in graffiti.
The tunnel opened into a
larger chamber, and Quinn's heart
skipped a beat
as she realized where she was. The Veil Market.
She had heard rumors about
it, whispers among her colleagues and in the back alleys of the city. A hidden supernatural black market, a place where the laws of the natural world didn't always apply. The chamber was vast, filled with makeshift stalls and stalls of glowing items. Enchanted trinkets, banned alchemical substances, and forbidden knowledge lay in abundance.
The air was thick with
the scent of incense and the low murmurs of hushed conversations. Vendors and patrons moved through the space, their faces obscured by hooded cloaks and masks. The only source of light came from floating orbs that cast an eerie, ethereal glow. Quinn's
eyes narrowed
as she
scanned
the crowd, looking for any sign of the suspect.
She could feel the weight
of the market's strange energy on her shoulders, a
pressure that seemed to seep into her bones
.
Her hand tightened around her
flashlight, and she took a deep breath, steeling herself for what lay ahead. She saw him. The suspect stood at a stall, his back to her, haggling with a vendor.
His movements were quick and
purposeful, and Quinn realized he
was trying
to blend in, to disappear into the chaos of the market. She took a step forward, her boots barely making a sound on the worn stone floor. But as she approached, she felt a hand on her shoulder. "Detective," a voice whispered, and Quinn spun around, her hand instinctively reaching for her gun. But it was Tomás Herrera, the former paramedic who had provided medical care for the clique she
was investigating
.
His warm brown eyes met
hers, and his olive skin was pale in the dim light. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck glinted in the glow of the floating orbs. "Herrera,"
Quinn hissed, her voice low and urgent
. "What are you doing here?" Tomás's gaze
flicked
to the suspect, who was still engaged in conversation at the stall. "I have my reasons,"
he said, his voice tinged
with a Spanish accent. "But you need to be careful. This place is dangerous, and the people here won't hesitate to turn on you if they think you're a threat." Quinn's expression hardened. "I don't have time for caution. I need to catch him." Tomás's scarred forearm came into view as he reached into his jacket and pulled out a small, bone token. "You'll need this to enter the market fully,"
he said, pressing the token
into her hand. "But once you do, there's no turning back. The Market has its own rules, and breaking them can be... deadly." Quinn clenched the bone token in her fist, feeling its smooth, cold surface.
She knew she was walking
into the unknown, but the thought of letting the suspect slip away was unbearable.
She looked at Tomás, her
eyes fierce and
determined
. "Thank you, Herrera. I won't forget this." Tomás nodded, his face
grave
. "Just be careful, Detective. And remember, there are things in this world that aren't what they seem." Quinn took a deep breath,
the weight of his words
settling in her chest.
She turned and made her
way toward the suspect, her steps
measured
and deliberate. The bone token in her hand felt heavy, a symbol of the threshold she was about to cross. The market buzzed with life, the air thick with the hum of voices and the scent of the unknown. As she approached the stall, the suspect turned, his eyes locking onto hers. For a moment, the world
seemed to
stand still, the only sound the steady beat of Quinn's heart.
She raised her gun, her
voice steady and commanding. "I'm a detective with the Metropolitan Police. You're under arrest." The suspect's eyes
flicked
to the bone token in her hand, and a smirk played at the corners of his lips. "You shouldn't have come here, Detective,"
he said, his voice a
low, dangerous
whisper
. "This is my territory now." Quinn's grip on her gun tightened, her
resolve
unwavering
. "We'll see about that,"
she replied, her voice cutting through the buzzing of the market
. "Step away from the stall and put your hands in the air." The suspect's smirk faltered, and for a moment, a
flicker
of uncertainty crossed his face. But then he lunged, his movements sudden and
calculated
. Quinn reacted instinctively, raising her gun and firing a warning shot. The bullet whizzed past his ear, and the market fell silent, the vendors and patrons turning to
watch
the confrontation. The suspect hesitated, his eyes darting around the market. Quinn could see the fear in his eyes, the realization that he
was cornered
. But he wasn't ready to give up. With a desperate cry, he lunged again, this time toward a nearby stall. Quinn followed, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The stall was cluttered with strange artifacts and potions, and the suspect grabbed a vial from one of the shelves. He uncorked it and threw the contents at Quinn, the liquid splashing against her chest. The air around her
seemed to
shift, the world blurring for a moment as the potion took effect. Quinn stumbled, her vision clouding, but she fought through the disorientation, her training kicking in. She raised her gun again, her movements slowed but deliberate. The suspect
tried to
flee, but Quinn was faster. She fired, and the bullet grazed his arm, causing him to cry out in pain. He turned, his eyes wide with fear, and Quinn saw the desperation in his gaze. "End it now,"
she said, her voice firm and unyielding
. "Put your hands in the air and come with me." The suspect hesitated, his eyes darting around the market. But the
weight
of Quinn's gaze bore down on him, and he realized he had no choice. Slowly, he raised his hands, his movements hesitant. Quinn approached, her gun still trained on him, and she reached out to cuff his wrists. As the crowd watched, a mixture of curiosity and
apprehension
, Quinn felt a
sense of
satisfaction. She had caught the suspect, but the
weight
of the market's strange energy still lingered. She knew this was far from over, and the questions she had would only grow more
complex
. With the suspect in custody, Quinn turned to Tomás, who
was watching
from a distance. He nodded, his face a mix of relief and concern. Quinn returned the nod, her mind already
racing
with the next steps. As she led the suspect away from the market, the bone token in her hand
felt like a reminder of the unknown she
had just embraced. The Veil Market was a place of secrets and shadows, and Quinn knew she would have to
delve
deeper to uncover the truth. But for now, she had her suspect, and that was enough.
created_at
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2/17/2026, 2:21:06 AM
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tokens_completion
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native_tokens_prompt
829
native_tokens_completion
1953
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
17
tagDensity
0.412
leniency
0.824
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
96.78%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1551
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1551
totalAiIsms
36
found
0
word
"stark"
count
1
1
word
"reminder"
count
2
2
word
"flickered"
count
1
3
word
"raced"
count
1
4
word
"racing"
count
2
5
word
"clandestine"
count
1
6
word
"echo"
count
1
7
word
"footsteps"
count
1
8
word
"scanned"
count
2
9
word
"gloom"
count
1
10
word
"unwavering"
count
2
11
word
"skipped a beat"
count
1
12
word
"could feel"
count
1
13
word
"weight"
count
4
14
word
"flicked"
count
2
15
word
"tinged"
count
1
16
word
"determined"
count
1
17
word
"grave"
count
1
18
word
"measured"
count
1
19
word
"whisper"
count
1
20
word
"resolve"
count
1
21
word
"flicker"
count
1
22
word
"calculated"
count
1
23
word
"pounding"
count
1
24
word
"apprehension"
count
1
25
word
"sense of"
count
1
26
word
"complex"
count
1
27
word
"delve"
count
1
highlights
0
"stark"
1
"reminder"
2
"flickered"
3
"raced"
4
"racing"
5
"clandestine"
6
"echo"
7
"footsteps"
8
"scanned"
9
"gloom"
10
"unwavering"
11
"skipped a beat"
12
"could feel"
13
"weight"
14
"flicked"
15
"tinged"
16
"determined"
17
"grave"
18
"measured"
19
"whisper"
20
"resolve"
21
"flicker"
22
"calculated"
23
"pounding"
24
"apprehension"
25
"sense of"
26
"complex"
27
"delve"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
2
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"The air was thick with"
2
"the weight of his words"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
95
matches
0
"e with fear"
52.63%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
95
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
105
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
27
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1551
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
7
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
33.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
47
wordCount
1401
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
2
worstName
"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity
4
worstWindowName
"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho
1
Harlow
1
Quinn
28
Raven
1
Nest
1
Morris
1
Veil
2
Market
2
Tomás
6
Herrera
1
Saint
1
Christopher
1
Spanish
1
persons
0
"Harlow"
1
"Quinn"
2
"Morris"
3
"Market"
4
"Tomás"
5
"Herrera"
6
"Saint"
7
"Christopher"
places
0
"Soho"
1
"Raven"
globalScore
0.501
windowScore
0.333
95.05%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
91
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"pressure that seemed to seep into her bones"
1
"felt like a reminder of the unknown she"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1551
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
105
matches
0
"knew that he"
59.06%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
29
mean
53.48
std
19.08
cv
0.357
sampleLengths
0
82
1
84
2
74
3
66
4
79
5
74
6
70
7
55
8
67
9
65
10
13
11
54
12
14
13
55
14
48
15
22
16
65
17
50
18
40
19
36
20
55
21
51
22
68
23
49
24
20
25
50
26
48
27
37
28
60
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
95
matches
0
"was cornered"
44.96%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
5
totalVerbs
215
matches
0
"was leading"
1
"was trying"
2
"was investigating"
3
"was walking"
4
"was watching"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
105
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1404
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.023504273504273504
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.007834757834757835
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
105
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
81.93%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
105
mean
14.77
std
5.24
cv
0.355
sampleLengths
0
18
1
21
2
25
3
18
4
17
5
27
6
20
7
20
8
19
9
16
10
23
11
16
12
17
13
21
14
6
15
22
16
14
17
20
18
9
19
15
20
21
21
17
22
19
23
3
24
18
25
17
26
13
27
11
28
16
29
15
30
15
31
15
32
22
33
18
34
3
35
14
36
23
37
16
38
11
39
15
40
19
41
16
42
15
43
8
44
5
45
15
46
13
47
26
48
3
49
11
42.38%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.2857142857142857
totalSentences
105
uniqueOpeners
30
35.09%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
95
matches
0
"Slowly, he raised his hands,"
ratio
0.011
97.89%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
29
totalSentences
95
matches
0
"It had all led her"
1
"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
2
"She knew the suspect was"
3
"She couldn't let him down"
4
"She plunged into the passage,"
5
"She reached into her pocket"
6
"She had heard rumors about"
7
"She could feel the weight"
8
"Her hand tightened around her"
9
"She saw him."
10
"His movements were quick and"
11
"She took a step forward,"
12
"His warm brown eyes met"
13
"he said, his voice tinged"
14
"he said, pressing the token"
15
"She knew she was walking"
16
"She looked at Tomás, her"
17
"She turned and made her"
18
"She raised her gun, her"
19
"he said, his voice a"
ratio
0.305
49.47%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
78
totalSentences
95
matches
0
"The rain lashed against the"
1
"Detective Harlow Quinn's breath came"
2
"The worn leather watch on"
3
"Quinn had been hot on"
4
"The bar's distinctive green neon"
5
"The hidden room behind the"
6
"It had all led her"
7
"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
8
"She knew the suspect was"
9
"The alleys grew narrower, the"
10
"Quinn's eyes, brown and focused,"
11
"The suspect slipped into a"
12
"She couldn't let him down"
13
"She plunged into the passage,"
14
"The rain had thinned to"
15
"Quinn slowed her pace, her"
16
"The stairs were narrow and"
17
"She reached into her pocket"
18
"The stairs led to a"
19
"The tunnel opened into a"
ratio
0.821
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
95
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
72
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"Ahead, a dim figure cut through the downpour, the suspect's silhouette shifting and blending with the wet surfaces."
1
"She could feel the weight of the market's strange energy on her shoulders, a pressure that seemed to seep into her bones."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
7
uselessAdditionCount
4
matches
0
"Quinn hissed, her voice low and urgent"
1
"he said, his voice a low, dangerous whisper"
2
"she replied, her voice cutting through the buzzing of the market"
3
"she said, her voice firm and unyielding"
32.35%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"a voice whispered (whisper)"
1
"Quinn hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences
17
tagDensity
0.412
leniency
0.824
rawRatio
0.286
effectiveRatio
0.235
71.8091%