| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 85.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1059 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1059 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "reminder" | | 1 | "glistening" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "unraveling" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "resolve" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "tinged" | | 12 | "navigated" | | 13 | "quickened" | | 14 | "clandestine" | | 15 | "scanned" | | 16 | "potential" | | 17 | "unwavering" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "silence" | | 20 | "palpable" | | 21 | "etched" | | 22 | "symphony" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "the air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1053 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 999 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 2 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 11 | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Tomás | 3 | | Herrera | 1 | | Spanish | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Tomás" | | 6 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.949 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 62.28% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to pulse in time with her racing heart" | | 1 | "hum that seemed to vibrate through the very walls" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1053 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that this" | | 1 | "knew that she" | | 2 | "knew that whatever" | | 3 | "understood that the" | | 4 | "knew that she" |
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| 63.75% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 43.88 | | std | 16.37 | | cv | 0.373 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 62 | | 23 | 31 |
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| 99.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the suspect—a shadowy figure with a hood pulled low over their face—darted through the narrow alleyways, their footsteps a rapid staccato on the wet pavement." | | 1 | "But she also knew that this was her chance—perhaps her only chance—to uncover the truth." | | 2 | "The suspect was nowhere in sight, but the path was clear—a narrow tunnel leading deeper into the market's heart." | | 3 | "A flash of movement caught her attention—a figure slipping through a hidden door at the far end of the chamber." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1005 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.022885572139303482 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008955223880597015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 16.98 | | std | 6.96 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 58.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3709677419354839 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came in sharp" | | 1 | "She couldn't afford to lose" | | 2 | "Her worn leather watch ticked" | | 3 | "It was a gift from" | | 4 | "She knew these streets, knew" | | 5 | "Her hand brushed against the" | | 6 | "She reached the bottom of" | | 7 | "She had no bone token," | | 8 | "She took a step forward," | | 9 | "She moved with purpose, her" | | 10 | "She pushed through the throng," | | 11 | "She turned, her gaze meeting" | | 12 | "His expression was a mix" | | 13 | "he said, his Spanish accent" | | 14 | "She shook her head, her" | | 15 | "He hesitated, his grip loosening" | | 16 | "She knew the risks, knew" | | 17 | "she said finally, her voice" | | 18 | "She had come this far," |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 91.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed against the city" | | 1 | "Her breath came in sharp" | | 2 | "The neon lights of The" | | 3 | "Quinn's eyes, sharp and unyielding," | | 4 | "She couldn't afford to lose" | | 5 | "Her worn leather watch ticked" | | 6 | "It was a gift from" | | 7 | "The memory of his loss" | | 8 | "The suspect veered suddenly, disappearing" | | 9 | "Quinn hesitated for a fraction" | | 10 | "She knew these streets, knew" | | 11 | "The air grew cooler, tinged" | | 12 | "Her hand brushed against the" | | 13 | "The sound of the city" | | 14 | "Quinn's heart quickened as she" | | 15 | "She reached the bottom of" | | 16 | "The suspect was nowhere in" | | 17 | "Quinn hesitated, her mind racing" | | 18 | "She had no bone token," | | 19 | "She took a step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.737 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing on the precipice" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 57.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed against the city like a thousand tiny daggers, each drop a reminder of the relentless pursuit that had brought Detective Harlow Quinn to this moment…" | | 1 | "The neon lights of The Raven's Nest flickered in the corner of her vision, casting an eerie green glow that seemed to pulse in time with her racing heart." | | 2 | "The memory of his loss fueled her resolve, propelling her forward with a military precision that had become second nature." | | 3 | "She reached the bottom of the stairs, her eyes adjusting to the dim light that flickered from ancient lanterns lining the walls." | | 4 | "Quinn's breath caught in her throat as she recognized them, the pieces of the puzzle clicking into place with a clarity that was both exhilarating and terrifyin…" | | 5 | "But she also knew that she was ready, that she would face whatever came next with the same unwavering resolve that had brought her this far." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his Spanish accent softening the edges of his words" | | 1 | "she said finally, her voice steady" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |