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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPCAVDJDAPEW0SA7G4515X
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Model:
GPT-4o, Aug. 6th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
13.9s
Cost:
$0.015067
Provider:
Azure
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Rain lashed against the city like a thousand tiny daggers, each drop a reminder of the relentless pursuit that had brought Detective Harlow Quinn to this moment. Her breath came in sharp bursts, visible in the cold night air as she sprinted down the slick,
glistening
streets of Soho. The neon lights of The Raven's Nest
flickered
in the corner of her vision, casting an eerie green glow that
seemed to
pulse in time with her racing heart. Ahead, the suspect—a shadowy figure with a hood pulled low over their face—darted through the narrow alleyways, their
footsteps
a rapid staccato on the wet pavement. Quinn's eyes, sharp and unyielding, locked onto the figure, her mind a whirl of determination and caution. She couldn't afford to lose them, not now, not when she was so close to
unraveling
the tangled web of secrets that had ensnared her for years. Her worn leather
watch
ticked steadily, a comforting rhythm against the chaos of the chase. It was a gift from her late partner, DS Morris, a reminder of the case that had taken him from her and left a void she could never quite fill. The memory of his loss fueled her resolve, propelling her forward with a military precision that had become second nature. The suspect veered
suddenly
, disappearing down a set of stone steps that led into the depths of the city. Quinn hesitated for a fraction of a second, her instincts screaming a warning. She knew these streets, knew the dangers that lurked beneath their surface. But she also
knew that this
was her chance—perhaps her only chance—to uncover the truth. With a deep breath, she plunged into the darkness, her
footsteps
echoing
off the damp walls as she descended into the unknown. The air grew cooler,
tinged
with the musty scent of forgotten places. Her hand brushed against the rough stone, steadying herself as she
navigated
the twisting passageways. The sound of the city faded, replaced by a low hum that
seemed to
vibrate through the
very
walls. Quinn's heart quickened as she realized where she
was headed
: The Veil Market, a place spoken of in hushed tones, a hidden world beneath the surface where the supernatural and the illicit intertwined. She reached the bottom of the stairs, her eyes adjusting to the dim light that
flickered
from ancient lanterns lining the walls. The suspect was nowhere in sight, but the path was clear—a narrow tunnel leading deeper into the market's heart. Quinn hesitated, her mind racing with possibilities. She had no bone token, no way to gain entry without drawing attention. But she couldn't turn back now, not when she was so close. She took a step forward, her resolve hardening like steel. As she moved, the tunnel opened into a vast chamber, the ceiling arching high above like the ribcage of some great beast. Stalls lined the walls, each one a riot of color and sound, filled with wares that defied explanation. Enchanted trinkets glowed with an inner light, while
the air was thick with
the scent of alchemical brews and the murmur of
clandestine
deals. Quinn's eyes scanned the crowd, searching for any sign of her quarry. The market was a labyrinth of shadows and secrets, each face a potential threat or ally. She moved with purpose, her presence a ripple in the sea of activity. A flash of movement caught her attention—a figure slipping through a hidden door at the far end of the chamber. Quinn's heart leapt as she recognized the suspect's distinctive gait. She pushed through the throng, her focus unyielding. As she neared the door, a hand shot out, gripping her arm with surprising strength. She turned, her gaze meeting the warm brown eyes of Tomás Herrera. His expression was a mix of concern and urgency, his voice low and insistent. "Quinn, you shouldn't be here," he said, his Spanish accent softening the edges of his words. "This place is dangerous, especially for someone like you." She shook her head, her determination
unwavering
. "I don't have a choice, Tomás. I need to know what they're up to." He hesitated, his grip loosening but not releasing. "At least let me help you. You can't go in there alone." Quinn considered his offer, the
weight
of her decision pressing down on her. She knew the risks, knew that stepping into the unknown could lead to consequences she couldn't foresee. But she also
knew that she
couldn't walk away, not when the answers she sought were so tantalizingly close. "Alright," she said finally, her voice steady. "But we do this my way." Tomás nodded, his expression one of reluctant agreement. Together, they approached the door, the threshold to a world that defied the laws of the mundane. As they stepped through, the market's noise faded, replaced by a silence that was almost
palpable
. The room beyond was small and dimly lit, the air heavy with the scent of incense and secrets. The suspect stood at the far end, their back to the door, their attention focused on a figure cloaked in shadow. Quinn's
heart pounded in her chest
as she took in the scene, her mind racing with possibilities. She had come this far, risked e
very
thing to uncover the truth. Now, standing on the precipice of revelation, she
knew that whatever
lay ahead would change e
very
thing. With Tomás at her side, she stepped forward, her voice cutting through the silence like a blade. "It's over. There's nowhere left to run." The suspect turned
slowly
, their hood falling back to reveal a face
etched
with defiance and fear. Quinn's breath caught in her throat as she recognized them, the pieces of the puzzle clicking into place with a clarity that was both exhilarating and terrifying. In that moment, she
understood that the
chase was only the beginning, that the path she had chosen would lead her into a world where the lines between right and wrong blurred into shades of gray. But she also
knew that she
was ready, that she would face whatever came next with the same
unwavering
resolve that had brought her this far. As the rain continued to fall above, a relentless
symphony
of nature's fury, Detective Harlow Quinn stood her ground, her eyes fixed on the truth that lay just beyond her reach.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she said finally, her voice steady [finally]"
71.6714%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1059
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"suddenly"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1059
totalAiIsms
16
found
0
word
"palpable"
count
1
1
word
"symphony"
count
1
2
word
"tinged"
count
1
3
word
"flickered"
count
2
4
word
"glistening"
count
1
5
word
"clandestine"
count
1
6
word
"unwavering"
count
2
7
word
"weight"
count
1
8
word
"footsteps"
count
2
9
word
"echoing"
count
1
10
word
"etched"
count
1
11
word
"navigated"
count
1
12
word
"unraveling"
count
1
highlights
0
"palpable"
1
"symphony"
2
"tinged"
3
"flickered"
4
"glistening"
5
"clandestine"
6
"unwavering"
7
"weight"
8
"footsteps"
9
"echoing"
10
"etched"
11
"navigated"
12
"unraveling"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"the air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
57
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
57
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
5
totalSentences
62
matches
0
"knew that this"
1
"knew that she"
2
"knew that whatever"
3
"understood that the"
4
"knew that she"
63.7542%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
24
mean
43.88
std
16.37
cv
0.373
sampleLengths
0
78
1
70
2
65
3
59
4
49
5
52
6
41
7
42
8
64
9
41
10
38
11
41
12
25
13
21
14
20
15
49
16
13
17
41
18
39
19
44
20
24
21
44
22
62
23
31
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
57
matches
0
"was headed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
165
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1005
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
23
adverbRatio
0.022885572139303482
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.008955223880597015
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
62
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
62
mean
16.98
std
6.96
cv
0.41
sampleLengths
0
27
1
22
2
29
3
26
4
17
5
27
6
15
7
30
8
20
9
19
10
13
11
12
12
15
13
22
14
12
15
15
16
19
17
33
18
22
19
19
20
7
21
13
22
12
23
10
24
22
25
18
26
24
27
12
28
16
29
13
30
20
31
10
32
8
33
15
34
12
35
14
36
16
37
9
38
7
39
14
40
8
41
12
42
13
43
17
44
19
45
7
46
6
47
8
48
17
49
16
58.6022%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.3709677419354839
totalSentences
62
uniqueOpeners
23
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"he said, his Spanish accent softening the edges of his words (say, soften)"
1
"she said finally, her voice steady (say finally)"
74.1585%