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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPCBQMCRJ952M24ZYH9V6P
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Model:
GPT-4o, May 13th (temp=1)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
13.0s
Cost:
$0.025910
Provider:
Azure
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn's
footsteps
echo
ed through the rain-drenched streets of Soho, each stride precise and unyielding. She'd been tracking her quarry for the better part of an hour, leaving the comforting glow of Trafalgar Square behind and
delving
deeper into the labyrinthine alleys and shadowed corners of the city. Above her, the rain came down in sheets, turning the night into a murky watercolor painting. Her eyes, sharp and focused, caught a glimpse of movement. Quick as a flash, she turned down a narrow alley, her worn leather
watch
gleaming
in the faint light of a distant streetlamp. Her target, a wiry figure sketched out briefly in silhouette, bolted ahead, feet splashing through puddles and sending water droplets spraying in chaotic arcs. Harlow quickened her pace, her bearing one of undeterred precision honed by her eighteen years of decorated service with the Metropolitan Police. The suspect led her on a twisting path through backstreets and side alleys, the scent of wet asphalt and urban decay heavy in the air. They catapulted over dumpsters, past shuttered storefronts, and between idle scaffolding. Her quarry had surprise on their side, but Harlow had experience. She closed the distance, her breaths measured, her heart beating a
calculated
rhythm. The chase finally brought them to The Raven's Nest. A distinctive green neon sign hummed above the entrance, casting a sickly luminescent glow onto the building's rain-streaked
facade
. The suspect didn't hesitate, slipping through the door and into the bar's dimly lit confines. Harlow followed on their heels, her right hand brushing the reassuring
weight
of her sidearm. Inside, The Raven's Nest was a
stark
shift from the wet chaos outside. Warmth and the scent of aged wood and stale beer enveloped her. The place was sparsely populated, patrons lost in their drinks or hushed conversations. The walls, covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs,
seemed to
close in as if they held secrets of their own. Harlow's gaze swept the room, locking onto the suspect who weaved through the tables and vanished behind a bookshelf in the back. She moved swiftly, her confidence
unwavering
even when she found herself standing before the inconspicuous shelf. Fingers brushed over the spines of ancient tomes before the mechanism clicked. The shelf swung open with a reluctant groan, revealing a hidden doorway. With a final glance over her shoulder and a brief prayer to the partner she lost, Harlow stepped into the darkness. The door sealed shut behind her, obscuring her from the familiar realm of barges and boardwalks. She descended into the unknown, wrought-iron stairs spiraling down into an abyss that
seemed to
swallow all light. At the bottom, she emerged into The Veil Market—an abandoned Tube station repurposed into a
clandestine
bazaar. The
flicker
ing light of phosphorescent fungi illuminated the cavernous space, casting eerie shadows on the crumbling stone walls. Stalls lined the platform, draped in moth-eaten cloths and displaying an assortment of enchanted goods, alchemical substances, and ancient relics. Creatures of the night mingled with human traders, their conversations a murmur of
otherworldly
dialects and bartering hisses. Bone tokens exchanged hands like currency, and
the air was thick with
the caustic aroma of forbidden potions and the occult. Harlow had entered a world that might have existed in the liminal spaces between waking and nightmare. Her gaze was unyielding as it swept over the
surreal
expanse, ever vigilant despite the sensory assault. The suspect, her quarry, was nowhere in sight—but the chase was far from over. She took a cautious step forward, her fingers brushing over her holstered weapon with practiced ease. Tomás Herrera, ever an
enigmatic
presence,
was tending
to a stall selling dark enchantments and dubious remedies. His warm brown eyes, full of depth and secrets, caught sight of her instantly. There was a brief
flicker
of recognition and surprise, swiftly masked. They had crossed paths before, their histories intertwined by this supernatural underbelly. "Harlow," he said, with a nod. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck glinted faintly in the dim light. "You're far from your usual territory." "Tommy," she acknowledged, her voice even with an edge of restrained urgency. "Looking for someone." She didn't need to elaborate; both knew the kinds of someones that wound up in places like this. "It's dangerous, you know. Not everyone here plays by the same rules," he replied, a glance at her wrist
watch
—a reminder of time spent and battles fought. "Noted," she replied curtly. "But I'm not leaving without my suspect." Their eyes locked in a silent exchange. Tomás tilted his head towards a darker recess of the market. "I saw someone fitting the description you probably have. They
slipped that way
, towards the older tunnels where even the Market’s security won't tread.” "Guide me," she demanded, and he hesitated only briefly before complying. As a former paramedic who provided off-the-books medical care for supernatural beings, Tomás was no stranger to steering those in need through labyrinthine paths fraught with peril. Together, they
navigated
the pulsating heart of the Veil Market. Harlow's senses were sharp, though she kept her reactions measured. She listened to the secrets whispered through parted lips and sensed the eyes that
watch
ed her every move. The Market's rhythm was that of a living beast—each stall, a sinew; each shadow, a vein. Tomás stopped before a gaping tunnel mouth where the
flicker
ing light couldn't reach. "From here, you're on your own, Harlow. Even I don't go further than this." "I’ll remember you said that if I get out of here," she replied, a faint smirk barely touching her lips. "When," he corrected her, his eyes catching the gleam of hers one last time before stepping back. “Good luck.” She nodded and took a step forward into the tunnel, leaving behind the buzz of
clandestine
commerce. The sounds of the Veil Market
quickly
faded, and the
echo
of her own
footsteps
against the cold stone became her sole companion. Harlow pressed forward, her breath steady. This was unknown territory, but fear didn't color her thoughts—determination did. The tunnel twisted and turned, a snarl of ancient pathways long forgotten by those on the surface. Memories of her partner, DS Morris, filled her mind—the case, the mysterious circumstances, the supernatural shadows. She needed answers, and her quarry had led her here for a reason. Harlow moved with an almost fatalistic certainty, accepting the challenges this place might present. She pressed forward, through darkness both literal and figurative, searching. Until she caught a glimpse of motion ahead—a fleeting shadow that might be the fugitive she pursued. In that moment, all the world's anomalies and secrets
seemed to
align for Detective Harlow Quinn. She kept going, step by step, to face whatever lay in wait.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"she replied curtly [curtly]"
1
"she demanded, and he hesitated only briefly before complying [only briefly]"
2
"she replied, a faint smirk barely touching her lips [barely]"
3
"he corrected her, his eyes catching the gleam of hers one last time before stepping back [back]"
91.1661%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1132
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1132
totalAiIsms
18
found
0
word
"enigmatic"
count
1
1
word
"facade"
count
1
2
word
"flicker"
count
1
3
word
"gleaming"
count
1
4
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
5
word
"surreal"
count
1
6
word
"clandestine"
count
2
7
word
"calculated"
count
1
8
word
"unwavering"
count
1
9
word
"stark"
count
1
10
word
"weight"
count
1
11
word
"footsteps"
count
2
12
word
"delving"
count
1
13
word
"echo"
count
1
14
word
"echoed"
count
1
15
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"enigmatic"
1
"facade"
2
"flicker"
3
"gleaming"
4
"otherworldly"
5
"surreal"
6
"clandestine"
7
"calculated"
8
"unwavering"
9
"stark"
10
"weight"
11
"footsteps"
12
"delving"
13
"echo"
14
"echoed"
15
"navigated"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"the air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
68
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
68
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
73
matches
0
"slipped that way"
65.0099%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
25
mean
44.68
std
16.87
cv
0.378
sampleLengths
0
65
1
79
2
60
3
58
4
59
5
62
6
55
7
55
8
56
9
47
10
54
11
25
12
33
13
26
14
11
15
42
16
38
17
54
18
27
19
20
20
19
21
57
22
46
23
41
24
28
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
68
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
156
matches
0
"was tending"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1047
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
20
adverbRatio
0.019102196752626553
lyAdverbCount
16
lyAdverbRatio
0.015281757402101241
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
73
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
87.7317%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
73
mean
15.3
std
5.65
cv
0.369
sampleLengths
0
16
1
33
2
16
3
10
4
23
5
24
6
22
7
25
8
11
9
11
10
13
11
9
12
19
13
15
14
15
15
13
16
12
17
13
18
21
19
22
20
16
21
12
22
12
23
21
24
16
25
18
26
17
27
18
28
20
29
18
30
21
31
17
32
17
33
14
34
16
35
17
36
14
37
11
38
12
39
6
40
13
41
6
42
12
43
21
44
26
45
4
46
7
47
7
48
11
49
24
85.3881%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.5205479452054794
totalSentences
73
uniqueOpeners
38
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she acknowledged, her voice even with an edge of restrained urgency (acknowledge)"
1
"he replied, a glance at her wristwatch—a reminder of time spent and battles fought (reply, spend battles fought)"
2
"she replied curtly (reply curtly)"
3
"she demanded, and he hesitated only briefly before complying (demand, hesitate only briefly comply)"
4
"she replied, a faint smirk barely touching her lips (reply, barely touch)"
5
"he corrected her, his eyes catching the gleam of hers one last time before stepping back (correct catch step)"
78.1939%