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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPCC36CTCZDSQCBJ60EQXP
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Model:
Llama 3.1 Nemotron 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
29.4s
Cost:
$0.002105
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rain lashed down on the deserted streets of Soho, casting a rhythmic melody that
echoed
off the towering buildings. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted down Old Compton Street, her eyes fixed on the fleeting figure of Tomás Herrera, her prime suspect in the string of bizarre occurrences plaguing the city. Quinn's sharp jaw set in a determined line as she pounded the wet pavement, her worn leather
watch
glinting
on her left wrist. Eighteen years on the force had honed her instincts, and e
very
fiber
screamed that Herrera
was hiding
more than just his involvement in the clique. The memory of her fallen partner, DS Morris, flashed in her mind, fueling her relentless pursuit. Ahead, Herrera darted into a narrow alley between two buildings, the neon signs of the surrounding bars and clubs casting an eerie glow on the rain-soaked walls. Quinn followed, her military-honed bearing guiding her through the treacherous terrain with ease. The alley opened into a broader thoroughfare, and for a moment, she lost sight of Herrera in the crowd. Then, a curly dark brown head bobbed above the sea of umbrellas, and Quinn gave chase once more. Herrera wove through the throngs of people, leading her toward the outskirts of Soho. The streetlights grew farther apart, casting long shadows that stretched and twisted in the rain. A faded sign creaked in the wind: "Camden" – they
were heading
into the depths of North London. As they approached the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, a shiver ran down Quinn's spine. This was the rumored site of the Veil Market, a
clandestine
supernatural bazaar hidden from the prying eyes of the law. She had heard whispers, but nothing concrete – until now. Herrera vanished into the Tube station's entrance, a nondescript opening that blended seamlessly into the surrounding urban decay. Quinn slowed, her hand instinctively drifting to her hip, only to remember she'd left her sidearm locked in her desk drawer, a precaution against the unpredictable nature of this case. With a deep breath, she stepped into the unknown, leaving behind the relative safety of the rain-soaked streets. The air inside the abandoned station clung to her like a damp shroud, heavy with the scent of decay and forgotten memories. A narrow corridor stretched before her, the only sound the soft dripping of water somewhere in the darkness. Quinn's eyes adjusted
slowly
to the dim light, and she spotted a figure in the distance, standing before a rickety wooden stall. Herrera. A sign above the stall read "Madam Zora's Curios" in flickering, candle-lit letters. The vendor, an ageless woman with eyes that
seemed to
hold a thousand secrets,
watch
ed Quinn's approach with an unblinking gaze. To gain en
try to
the market, Quinn knew she needed a bone token – a
macabre
currency she didn't possess. Her presence, however, had already attracted attention. Patrons of the Veil Market
began to
emerge from the shadows, their faces a blur of human and...not. The detective's skin crawled as she realized she
was outnumbered
, outgunned, and out of her depth. Herrera turned, his warm brown eyes locking onto Quinn's, a spark of challenge
dancing
within them. He raised his left arm, and for an instant, the Saint Christopher medallion glinted around his neck. The scar running along his forearm
seemed to
pulse, a grim reminder of the dangers that lurked within this hidden world. With a measured movement, Herrera stepped back, disappearing behind the stall. Madam Zora's smile grew, her eyes
glinting
with a knowing light. "Welcome, Detective Quinn, to the Veil Market. Leave your world at the door. Here, the only law is the one you're willing to break." Quinn's grip on her bearings faltered for an instant, the
weight
of the unknown pressing upon her. She could retreat, return with a SWAT team, and risk sparking a catastrophic confrontation. Or, she could follow Herrera, alone and unarmed, into the
very
heart of the supernatural underworld. The pounding of the rain outside, the faint hum of the market, and the soft whisper of DS Morris's name in her mind merged into a singular, haunting melody. With a resolute breath, Detective Harlow Quinn stepped forward, into the shadows, leaving the familiarity of her world behind. The darkness swallowed her whole, leaving only the
echoes
of her own resolve: _I will uncover the truth, no matter the cost._
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2/17/2026, 2:21:00 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
72.4138%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
725
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
725
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"glinting"
count
2
1
word
"macabre"
count
1
2
word
"clandestine"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
1
4
word
"dancing"
count
1
5
word
"echoed"
count
1
6
word
"echoes"
count
1
highlights
0
"glinting"
1
"macabre"
2
"clandestine"
3
"weight"
4
"dancing"
5
"echoed"
6
"echoes"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
39
matches
(empty)
96.4326%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
39
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"try to"
2
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
40
matches
0
"screamed that Herrera"
0.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
13
mean
55.69
std
7.73
cv
0.139
sampleLengths
0
49
1
64
2
59
3
65
4
46
5
48
6
58
7
57
8
61
9
54
10
46
11
47
12
70
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
39
matches
0
"was outnumbered"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
93
matches
0
"was hiding"
1
"were heading"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
697
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
18
adverbRatio
0.02582496413199426
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.010043041606886656
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
40
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
69.4092%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
40
mean
18.1
std
5.86
cv
0.324
sampleLengths
0
19
1
30
2
23
3
25
4
16
5
27
6
13
7
19
8
18
9
14
10
15
11
18
12
15
13
21
14
10
15
18
16
30
17
18
18
22
19
18
20
22
21
1
22
13
23
21
24
20
25
7
26
18
27
16
28
16
29
17
30
21
31
11
32
11
33
24
34
17
35
14
36
16
37
29
38
19
39
22
83.3333%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.5
totalSentences
40
uniqueOpeners
20
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
83.6229%